Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Chapter 11, part 2"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
63 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Okay, Barb, the girls are safe, and Cash and Paige have only semi-glared at each other. So, I can get my work done now.
Back attcha later. Another great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Okay, Barb, the girls are safe, and Cash and Paige have only semi-glared at each other. So, I can get my work done now.
Back attcha later. Another great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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You're great!
Comment from Sankey
Good stuff. Still having a great time ploughing through all this. Have never spent so much time on one author's work so you can tell you got me well and truly hooked. No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Good stuff. Still having a great time ploughing through all this. Have never spent so much time on one author's work so you can tell you got me well and truly hooked. No Spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
I know cops do their best but I find they are all snoopy. If you give them an inch they want a mile. This story seem so real. I would get it sent to a producer, if that's the name to get it played in theatre. It would sell I know. MJ
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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I know cops do their best but I find they are all snoopy. If you give them an inch they want a mile. This story seem so real. I would get it sent to a producer, if that's the name to get it played in theatre. It would sell I know. MJ
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you, again. You're great.
Comment from flippant
Another excellent addition to this story! I do admire your ability to write believable dialogue with a different tone for each character. Good plot progression, too. The story moves at a good pace.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Another excellent addition to this story! I do admire your ability to write believable dialogue with a different tone for each character. Good plot progression, too. The story moves at a good pace.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. I'm even suspicious of the cops! Ha!
The younger officer stepped in (into) the room.
They left a hand print (handprint) on the hood of Paige's Jaguar.
Have you heard anything about that hand print (handprint)?"
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. I'm even suspicious of the cops! Ha!
The younger officer stepped in (into) the room.
They left a hand print (handprint) on the hood of Paige's Jaguar.
Have you heard anything about that hand print (handprint)?"
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I can't believe you are the only person to catch the hand print. Thank you very much.
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
"Yep, we went there to fish(,) not find orphaned mutts."
this is another well-written post, my friend. I can follow it a bit, although I didn't catch it from the beginning. At any rate, nice writing.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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"Yep, we went there to fish(,) not find orphaned mutts."
this is another well-written post, my friend. I can follow it a bit, although I didn't catch it from the beginning. At any rate, nice writing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and sticking with me.
Comment from Neil A Morrow
Hi Barbara, I did struggle a bit with all the characters and it being my first time reading your work. However, I did enjoy the flow and the excitement entrapped me to keep reading. Great dialogue and characters. Very well done.
Neil
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Hi Barbara, I did struggle a bit with all the characters and it being my first time reading your work. However, I did enjoy the flow and the excitement entrapped me to keep reading. Great dialogue and characters. Very well done.
Neil
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JB Lynn
I haven't read your other pieces, but the dialogue here feels natural for your characters and flows like a real conversation. You've got a good ear for spoken conversations.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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I haven't read your other pieces, but the dialogue here feels natural for your characters and flows like a real conversation. You've got a good ear for spoken conversations.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from Joyce Crowe
very intriguing story that holds the reader's attention and interest. good pace and plot development. I've made a few sugestions that may or may not be helful. doctor is ridiculous instead of doctor's ridiculous
maybe a comma after To be honest,
unusual, that might interest burgulars?"
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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very intriguing story that holds the reader's attention and interest. good pace and plot development. I've made a few sugestions that may or may not be helful. doctor is ridiculous instead of doctor's ridiculous
maybe a comma after To be honest,
unusual, that might interest burgulars?"
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the eagle eye.
Comment from angelmagnet
Good dialogue. You tell your story well with no glaring errors to keep your reader away. There is interesting side conversation about the Civil War that will entice your reader. Good job
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Good dialogue. You tell your story well with no glaring errors to keep your reader away. There is interesting side conversation about the Civil War that will entice your reader. Good job
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
