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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from judiverse
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Morgan's really proved his worth by alerting Cash and Billy Joe about where Paige and Mary Pat were. A good thing they've brought in the police. We know that the possibility of a treasure hidden in the house has brought out the troublemakers. Although Paige has no knowledge of a treasure. The assailants wore masks, so the women don't know their identity. Great interest in this. Paige is surely realizing Cash's concern and feelings for her. She won't be so quick to brush him aside in the future. judi

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    WOW!!! How did you get this past Tom without writing anything. You must have the magical touch.
reply by judiverse on 10-Jun-2013
    Hi, Barbara. I don't know what happened, but there is a review, as you will see from your profile page. judi
Comment from alexgeorge
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The poor girls. They've been through some ordeal! It's a good thing the menfolk were around to rescue them. Now the police are involved this is getting serious. Treasure...the plot is becoming twisted.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where billy joe and cash find their women and vow to find whoever did this to them. the policeman thinks it's them. i hope you have fun on your summer break

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Great as always. Poor Paige, one thing after another, but that's what makes it exciting. I saw no errors, was well done. Look forward to the next part. rox

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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Well, that wasn't a fun experience. How come the deputy is fingering his gun? Cash and Billy Joe wouldn't do something like that. The dog would be upset with them if they had. :) nancy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Very true. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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I assume Cash has his job back. At least, Paige knows he cares for her. You story is moving at a fast pace. There is something interesting in each chapter. I look forward to more.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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Whew, the girls are found. I'm sure glad these nuts didn't hurt Morgan. I bet they won't let their petty feelings get in the way at this time. Good chapter. god loves you and so do i.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    I am always blessed when I hear from you.
Comment from abbasjoy
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Things are really getting interesting. So there must be treasure otherwise Paige and Mary Pat would not have been mugged. So the plot thickens.
Now we are seeing Cash's concern for Paige and getting some response from her as well, the love affair seems to be getting hopeful.
Mystery and love, perfect combination. I love this post.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Barbara,

I am so glad Paige and Mary Pat were found safe with nothing more than bruises. Thank heavens Morgan knew where they were. Cash fears this episode will make Paige move away and I think he would be so sad about that so I hope it doesn't happen. They will keep hunting until they find the culprits. At least we now know they are after a treasure of some kind but Paige is clueless ass to where it could be or even if it exists. This is another intriguing chapter and makes me wonder what will happen next? Well done.....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and your continued encouragement of my writing.
Comment from Taffspride
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Once again a riveting chapter Barbara. Great use of dialog keeps the story moving, and the reader guessing.

The policeman would naturally be suspicious of Cash and Billy Joe. Although it is most unlikely, it adds a little more to the mystery.

One little error, Marty Gras,should be Mardi Gras. But my guess it is spell check that did not accept the correct spelling.

Great job, and thanks for sharing.

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
    I have already fixed it. I must have taken a nap when I posted this one. Thank you for the kind review.