Savannah Love
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Comment from elgone
Good suspense, can't want to read more - always a good sign. Didn't seen any errors. The mystery is holding up well as the reader eagerly awaits news of Paige as well as why all this is happening.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Good suspense, can't want to read more - always a good sign. Didn't seen any errors. The mystery is holding up well as the reader eagerly awaits news of Paige as well as why all this is happening.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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I can't wait to find out either. LOL Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
Oh, boy, I was really wanting to read more to see what has happened to Paige. She certainly is a magnet for trouble, and we've yet to discover who the perpetrators are and what they were looking for as they ransacked her place. Again, Cash comes to the rescue. Fortunately, it sounds like Paige and the puppy have been shut up in the mud room, but seem to be all right. Paige will have to re-think her position about Cash after this episode. Very exciting indeed! judi
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Oh, boy, I was really wanting to read more to see what has happened to Paige. She certainly is a magnet for trouble, and we've yet to discover who the perpetrators are and what they were looking for as they ransacked her place. Again, Cash comes to the rescue. Fortunately, it sounds like Paige and the puppy have been shut up in the mud room, but seem to be all right. Paige will have to re-think her position about Cash after this episode. Very exciting indeed! judi
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
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You're so welcome. judi
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where nala calls cash and tells them the women are missing and the house has been trashed. cash and the search leads outside. what will they find?
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where nala calls cash and tells them the women are missing and the house has been trashed. cash and the search leads outside. what will they find?
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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We will have to wait and see until next week. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
You are out of school and I don't have to wait a whole week to get one with this story? Right? Where is the puppy? Where are the girls? Good Lord. I'm an old woman and I need some answers! Haha!. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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You are out of school and I don't have to wait a whole week to get one with this story? Right? Where is the puppy? Where are the girls? Good Lord. I'm an old woman and I need some answers! Haha!. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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I am not officially out of school until next Friday. I still have kids until Thursday, then Friday clear my room. I have a test on Saturday. I'm adding a certificate to my teaching degree, if I pass the test. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Young lady, this is my first time at reading your work. I see by your profile that you have many accomplishments. If I'd found mistakes, I'd have told you without wanting to. However, there were no mistakes that I could fine. This piece of work flowed good with the words you used to describe the scene. The dialog was excellent. I enjoyed reading this piece, and I'll be reading more of your work - I'm sure. This piece was excellent.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Young lady, this is my first time at reading your work. I see by your profile that you have many accomplishments. If I'd found mistakes, I'd have told you without wanting to. However, there were no mistakes that I could fine. This piece of work flowed good with the words you used to describe the scene. The dialog was excellent. I enjoyed reading this piece, and I'll be reading more of your work - I'm sure. This piece was excellent.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
Terrific chapter. Filled with so much tension I felt my heart skip several beats. Great presentation. You have, once again, left the reader desperately wanting to know more. Where is Paige, what happened? Will they find her in time? I anxiously await the next post.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Terrific chapter. Filled with so much tension I felt my heart skip several beats. Great presentation. You have, once again, left the reader desperately wanting to know more. Where is Paige, what happened? Will they find her in time? I anxiously await the next post.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Barbara, are you going to make us wait until next week to find out what happened, if the girls and Morgan are alive? It will be torture if you do. In this case I love torture.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Barbara, are you going to make us wait until next week to find out what happened, if the girls and Morgan are alive? It will be torture if you do. In this case I love torture.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your love of torture. LOL
Comment from AprilShower
What happened to the girls and to the puppy? Why would anyone want to hurt them? It is so frustrating for the reader when the story stops right in the middle of something which is so important to the story.
Hope these last school days go well for you.
April
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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What happened to the girls and to the puppy? Why would anyone want to hurt them? It is so frustrating for the reader when the story stops right in the middle of something which is so important to the story.
Hope these last school days go well for you.
April
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. The next post will tell what happened to the girls and Morgan.
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I'm anxious to find out. :o)
Comment from c_lucas
Cash's anger doesn't last long and he reassert his feelings about her and Billy Joe's wife. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Cash's anger doesn't last long and he reassert his feelings about her and Billy Joe's wife. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
