Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Chapter 10, part 8"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from mumsyone
Another good chapter, Barbara, with no spags that I can see. You left us with a page-turner, for sure. It looks like Cash has learned a good lesson.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Another good chapter, Barbara, with no spags that I can see. You left us with a page-turner, for sure. It looks like Cash has learned a good lesson.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Alanna Renee
The dialogue is pretty natural, and for the most part it flows. I think that more descriptive language, metaphors, or similes would spice up the chapter.
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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The dialogue is pretty natural, and for the most part it flows. I think that more descriptive language, metaphors, or similes would spice up the chapter.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Welcome to FS. My style of writing does not include descriptive language, metaphors or similes. I am a novelist not a poet. Thank you for stopping by.
Comment from Taffspride
I know I always seem to say the same thing Barbara, but I promise you I am not doing a cut and paste. I am really enjoying this story. As always it is extremely well written, and you grab your readers interest, and best of all keep it right through the chapter.
Of course like all good writers you leave us with a cliff hanger. Looking forward to reading what happens next.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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I know I always seem to say the same thing Barbara, but I promise you I am not doing a cut and paste. I am really enjoying this story. As always it is extremely well written, and you grab your readers interest, and best of all keep it right through the chapter.
Of course like all good writers you leave us with a cliff hanger. Looking forward to reading what happens next.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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I understand. I feel the same way about my replies. Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh man! You leave us hanging again. As always this is very well written. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvement, doesn't seem to need it. Really enjoying it. Rox
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Oh man! You leave us hanging again. As always this is very well written. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvement, doesn't seem to need it. Really enjoying it. Rox
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GregoryCody
Wow a very very well written selection! You have a powerful voice and are a great storyteller, leaves the reader wanting more! Great thing! Your italics are perfectly placed btw. Great read!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Wow a very very well written selection! You have a powerful voice and are a great storyteller, leaves the reader wanting more! Great thing! Your italics are perfectly placed btw. Great read!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hi there Barbara
Sweetie, you know I hate given out sixes, but this chapter is crazy good. I can only guess what Cash & Billy Joe are going to find, but methinks it won't be pleasant. Then there's Laura alone out by the pickup??????????????
Bear
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Hi there Barbara
Sweetie, you know I hate given out sixes, but this chapter is crazy good. I can only guess what Cash & Billy Joe are going to find, but methinks it won't be pleasant. Then there's Laura alone out by the pickup??????????????
Bear
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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We will have to wait until my next post to find out about the girls. Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
Oh dear, you left me screaming for more! I can't imagine what the noise is that Cash and Billy Joe heard or who captured Paige and Mary Pat. You have done an excellent job in keeping up the suspense in this chapter. Dang I thought I could give you a six but guess not (sob)...blessings, chey
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Oh dear, you left me screaming for more! I can't imagine what the noise is that Cash and Billy Joe heard or who captured Paige and Mary Pat. You have done an excellent job in keeping up the suspense in this chapter. Dang I thought I could give you a six but guess not (sob)...blessings, chey
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your continued support and kindness. I appreciate you very much.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh gosh, what did happen to them? There is not mush Paige could do without her crutches and not much more with them. They search the house and head out towards the mud room. Cash is furious.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Oh gosh, what did happen to them? There is not mush Paige could do without her crutches and not much more with them. They search the house and head out towards the mud room. Cash is furious.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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yes, Cash is and he blames himself. Thank you for the kind review.
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Yeah now who would break in and snag the girls?
Comment from donaldww
Paige has disappeared and the house has been ransacked! Whoever is after something means business, including what looks like kidnapping.
The post ends as they head to the mudroom to investigate a growl, which might be Paige's dog.
Excellent post!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Paige has disappeared and the house has been ransacked! Whoever is after something means business, including what looks like kidnapping.
The post ends as they head to the mudroom to investigate a growl, which might be Paige's dog.
Excellent post!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from adewpearl
You have done a great job of creating an atmosphere of mystery, danger and suspense in this chapter - you have me worrying right along with Cash. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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You have done a great job of creating an atmosphere of mystery, danger and suspense in this chapter - you have me worrying right along with Cash. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
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I'm worried too. Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
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You're worried???? Don't be saying that!! You're the one who's supposed to know how it all works out so they live happily ever after in the end, for Pete's sake! LOL :-)
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Well, I sorta do.
