Savannah Love
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Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Other than "Paige's eyes met her friend's." and
"Their eyes met" I have enjoyed the piece. As usual Paige gets into trouble with out without her parents about.Will they both leave for Brussels? Who is her attacker and why? Until next time. A good read, with no SPAG.
Regards:
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Other than "Paige's eyes met her friend's." and
"Their eyes met" I have enjoyed the piece. As usual Paige gets into trouble with out without her parents about.Will they both leave for Brussels? Who is her attacker and why? Until next time. A good read, with no SPAG.
Regards:
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check those areas.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barabara - A bit different in mostly driven by dialog. You're the master though of creating the tension and boom, leaving me in suspense. You remind me of the serials I used to see at the movies. Well done, as always :)
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Hi Barabara - A bit different in mostly driven by dialog. You're the master though of creating the tension and boom, leaving me in suspense. You remind me of the serials I used to see at the movies. Well done, as always :)
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support. I prefer dialogue.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I can't believe what has happened to Paige but when she went to the window to see who was coming I got a little fearful that this was not going to end on a high note. The intriguing part is I don't know who it is. I was sorry to see this chapter to end. I think Cash and Paige should get over being stubborn and let their emotions be known. I can't wait to see what happens next! Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Hi Barbara,
I can't believe what has happened to Paige but when she went to the window to see who was coming I got a little fearful that this was not going to end on a high note. The intriguing part is I don't know who it is. I was sorry to see this chapter to end. I think Cash and Paige should get over being stubborn and let their emotions be known. I can't wait to see what happens next! Blessings, chey
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
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welcome!
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Barbara! What a hook (I'm not talking about the left hook to Paige, LOL!) OMG. Who the heck is this man? Apologies for being behind on reviewing. Just busy. SO glad I didn't miss this post.
Cash to the rescue????
Love it. Can't wait for the next.
Av
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Barbara! What a hook (I'm not talking about the left hook to Paige, LOL!) OMG. Who the heck is this man? Apologies for being behind on reviewing. Just busy. SO glad I didn't miss this post.
Cash to the rescue????
Love it. Can't wait for the next.
Av
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement, Hey, I understand busy.
Comment from God's Writer
Another grand carry on inn your story my friend. I wrote 50 poems over the weekend, so I haven't been on fanstory. I will be shortly going back to writing again. I have a publisher's deadline to make.
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Another grand carry on inn your story my friend. I wrote 50 poems over the weekend, so I haven't been on fanstory. I will be shortly going back to writing again. I have a publisher's deadline to make.
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you for stopping by. I pray that everything goes well with the publisher.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh no, this doesn't sound good. You left us hanging, now we have to wait to find out what 's going on. This as always is well done. I found on errors. Look forward to the next chapter. Rox
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Oh no, this doesn't sound good. You left us hanging, now we have to wait to find out what 's going on. This as always is well done. I found on errors. Look forward to the next chapter. Rox
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Ooh, another, cliff hanger.
Mystery and romance. This read gets more exciting as it progresses!
Nicely done, Barbara!
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Ooh, another, cliff hanger.
Mystery and romance. This read gets more exciting as it progresses!
Nicely done, Barbara!
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Flamingbush
Uh-oh. Things have suddenly gotten really suspenseful. I read straight through to the end and must say this read has me on the tip of my toes. I continue to take mental notes from you on how to write a page turner.
Interesting dialogue,
Clues that everybody practically ignores
Something that leaves you on the edge of your seat near the end...
I look forward to your summer vacation, even as I work to complete my first novel, which has been a good three/four years in the making. LOL
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Uh-oh. Things have suddenly gotten really suspenseful. I read straight through to the end and must say this read has me on the tip of my toes. I continue to take mental notes from you on how to write a page turner.
Interesting dialogue,
Clues that everybody practically ignores
Something that leaves you on the edge of your seat near the end...
I look forward to your summer vacation, even as I work to complete my first novel, which has been a good three/four years in the making. LOL
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 28-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara,
This is getting a sick cause I am enjoying the story so much - however when I got to your last line in this post I actually groaned and wanted to pull my hair out - ok maybe not but darn it what a place to leave off - yes great hook which causes me to groan again. Thus a six, I was caught up in this one and my nerves are nuts now till you post again.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Hi Barbara,
This is getting a sick cause I am enjoying the story so much - however when I got to your last line in this post I actually groaned and wanted to pull my hair out - ok maybe not but darn it what a place to leave off - yes great hook which causes me to groan again. Thus a six, I was caught up in this one and my nerves are nuts now till you post again.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Well you certainly have a cliffhanger here. If Mary Pat went to the door first, she must have been overpowered before Paige could hobble up there. I certainly hope Cash and Billy Joe ate their Big Macs quickly.
I think Paige will nave a quick change of attitude about protective men. Mary Pat certainly recognized her previous actions as a lovers spat, that should be quickly repaired.
Now with real danger that has nothing to do with ghosts, I think she will welcome any attention she gets from Cash.
I am certainly ready to find out who has attacked the girls and to learn what they want.
I think you already corrected all the SPAG so love and Irish Hugs for all the great writing,
Roger
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
Well you certainly have a cliffhanger here. If Mary Pat went to the door first, she must have been overpowered before Paige could hobble up there. I certainly hope Cash and Billy Joe ate their Big Macs quickly.
I think Paige will nave a quick change of attitude about protective men. Mary Pat certainly recognized her previous actions as a lovers spat, that should be quickly repaired.
Now with real danger that has nothing to do with ghosts, I think she will welcome any attention she gets from Cash.
I am certainly ready to find out who has attacked the girls and to learn what they want.
I think you already corrected all the SPAG so love and Irish Hugs for all the great writing,
Roger
Comment Written 27-May-2013
reply by the author on 27-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
