Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Chapter 10, part 7"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Whooohoooo! We got some action now. You're getting pretty darn good with those end hooks.
I just hope Cash and Billy Joe come back instead of goin' fisin'. Now I have to read the next chapter to see what's going on.
Another great one.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Whooohoooo! We got some action now. You're getting pretty darn good with those end hooks.
I just hope Cash and Billy Joe come back instead of goin' fisin'. Now I have to read the next chapter to see what's going on.
Another great one.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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What would I do with out you
Comment from Sankey
Ouch! What's going on now? The young bloke wanting the house and the money huh! Plot getting thicker and thicker.
Ben interesting to see where this is going.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Ouch! What's going on now? The young bloke wanting the house and the money huh! Plot getting thicker and thicker.
Ben interesting to see where this is going.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
Oh no what's going on here. Your chapters just keeps pulling me in. But Cash isn't going to give up. Thanks for the read. MJ
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Oh no what's going on here. Your chapters just keeps pulling me in. But Cash isn't going to give up. Thanks for the read. MJ
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Nope Cash doesn't give up on this little Yankee. Thank you for the kind review.
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you are more than welcome. MJ
Comment from NicciFaye
Wow.....what a ending to this chapter. Awesome great read. The chapters are so well developed and brought to life. I enjoyed reading this as the other chapters.
reply by the author on 30-May-2013
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Wow.....what a ending to this chapter. Awesome great read. The chapters are so well developed and brought to life. I enjoyed reading this as the other chapters.
Comment Written 30-May-2013
reply by the author on 30-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Betty Bleen
The dialog is good between Paige and Mary Pat. I was not bored and thought the conversation was interesting, but when the dog growled and his hackles rose I started getting worried. When Mary Pat said "I'll step outside and look around" I wanted to yell Noooooooooo! Good build up and good ending to the chapter.
reply by the author on 30-May-2013
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The dialog is good between Paige and Mary Pat. I was not bored and thought the conversation was interesting, but when the dog growled and his hackles rose I started getting worried. When Mary Pat said "I'll step outside and look around" I wanted to yell Noooooooooo! Good build up and good ending to the chapter.
Comment Written 29-May-2013
reply by the author on 30-May-2013
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At least Mary Pat didn't go into the basement. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
First of all, love the picture of Morgan. He's such a cutie.
I also love how you end this post on another twist. It's a great way to pull the readers in, and leave them with wanting more. Since Paige is the leading lady, I'm guessing she will be okay. But I'm looking forward to finding out how she gets out of this sticky situation. Perhaps Cash will come to her rescue??? Can't wait to find out :-)
reply by the author on 30-May-2013
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First of all, love the picture of Morgan. He's such a cutie.
I also love how you end this post on another twist. It's a great way to pull the readers in, and leave them with wanting more. Since Paige is the leading lady, I'm guessing she will be okay. But I'm looking forward to finding out how she gets out of this sticky situation. Perhaps Cash will come to her rescue??? Can't wait to find out :-)
Comment Written 29-May-2013
reply by the author on 30-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexgeorge
I instantly noted how very ingeniously your dialogue is created. You use your characters' body language to move the story forward and mix it with real life-like dialogue that we can follow and that keeps us hooked. And there's a nice little plot in the story. My only criticism --and this is for me, purely --is that I discovered your work so late. Groan :( The up side is, I can spend all summer catching up. Yeeyyyyy!
What a cliffhanger at the end. Good set up for the next chapter. I'll be visiting more often, now I have discovered your work, Barbara ~Alex.
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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I instantly noted how very ingeniously your dialogue is created. You use your characters' body language to move the story forward and mix it with real life-like dialogue that we can follow and that keeps us hooked. And there's a nice little plot in the story. My only criticism --and this is for me, purely --is that I discovered your work so late. Groan :( The up side is, I can spend all summer catching up. Yeeyyyyy!
What a cliffhanger at the end. Good set up for the next chapter. I'll be visiting more often, now I have discovered your work, Barbara ~Alex.
Comment Written 29-May-2013
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from unimatrix001
Paige sends her protector away and look what happens. I wonder what happened to Mary Pat. She is supposed to be pretty good at taking care of herself.
She can shop all day and[,] at night[,] attend all the fancy dinner parties. - Paranthetic expression. Without the commas it sounds like she is shopping all day and night.
She put a hand on the back of the couch, and one on the armrest as she - remove comma, simple sentence.
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Paige sends her protector away and look what happens. I wonder what happened to Mary Pat. She is supposed to be pretty good at taking care of herself.
She can shop all day and[,] at night[,] attend all the fancy dinner parties. - Paranthetic expression. Without the commas it sounds like she is shopping all day and night.
She put a hand on the back of the couch, and one on the armrest as she - remove comma, simple sentence.
Comment Written 29-May-2013
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Thank you for the eagle eyes. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Jade Lawson
I like the way you make the reader perceive the character's personality very well and their emotions.
I particularly liked these lines:
"I've known him going on fifteen years. You're the first woman he's ever really shown an interest in."
Paige started to turn toward her friend then changed her mind. Maybe he's gay.
Overall a very goo read, you kept my interest from begining till the end and I look forward for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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I like the way you make the reader perceive the character's personality very well and their emotions.
I particularly liked these lines:
"I've known him going on fifteen years. You're the first woman he's ever really shown an interest in."
Paige started to turn toward her friend then changed her mind. Maybe he's gay.
Overall a very goo read, you kept my interest from begining till the end and I look forward for the next chapter.
Comment Written 29-May-2013
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Peppy1105
GREAT! I especially liked the gripping start that made it easy to continue reading. If a story has a catchy start, readers have more incentive to continue reading. It caught my attention:)
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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GREAT! I especially liked the gripping start that made it easy to continue reading. If a story has a catchy start, readers have more incentive to continue reading. It caught my attention:)
Comment Written 28-May-2013
reply by the author on 29-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
