Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Chapter 10, part 6"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
68 total reviews
Comment from Terror2s
I didn't notice any errors. You did a great job of having his friend share believable advice. Women sometimes do need that extra time, but the benefits can be worth it. T2
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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I didn't notice any errors. You did a great job of having his friend share believable advice. Women sometimes do need that extra time, but the benefits can be worth it. T2
Comment Written 21-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Flamingbush
Good dialogue here. You've got to have some suspense/crisis in the story and this argument is excellent. I read back a few chapters but couldn't figure out when Paige noticed the part about the guns. However, that has no bearing on the fact that this is an excellent chapter. Very well written, and with a positive outlook at the end which is much appreciated.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Good dialogue here. You've got to have some suspense/crisis in the story and this argument is excellent. I read back a few chapters but couldn't figure out when Paige noticed the part about the guns. However, that has no bearing on the fact that this is an excellent chapter. Very well written, and with a positive outlook at the end which is much appreciated.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Paige probably noticed Mary Pat had a gun when she pulled it out while they were in the bedroom. Thank you for the kind review.
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Thanks for explaining this. Obviously I didn't take off any stars, not having kept up with the story for a while. So much going on at the home front. It's been draining...
Comment from Selina Stambi
Ah, impetuous, prideful young love!
Another good chapter, Barbara.
Spags:
jack ass (lower case j and a)
pick up (no hyphen)
chock-full (has a hyphen)
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Ah, impetuous, prideful young love!
Another good chapter, Barbara.
Spags:
jack ass (lower case j and a)
pick up (no hyphen)
chock-full (has a hyphen)
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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I will take care of those errors. Thank you for the eagle eye.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter 10, part six.' A worthwhile chapter I enjoyed reading. I thought you formulated this story rather well, and I can see why it doesn't stand alone. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter 10, part six.' A worthwhile chapter I enjoyed reading. I thought you formulated this story rather well, and I can see why it doesn't stand alone. Well done.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from NicciFaye
This story continues to be interesting with a excellent story line. The characters are very remembering. An excellent reading experience.
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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This story continues to be interesting with a excellent story line. The characters are very remembering. An excellent reading experience.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DRG24
Nice picture!!!!!
NIce characterization of Cash, Mart Pat, and Paige.
Great work with this story!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Nice picture!!!!!
NIce characterization of Cash, Mart Pat, and Paige.
Great work with this story!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 22-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I admire your versatility... This is a totally different story, I like all the description about the relationship between Paige and Cash. There is a big amount of tension all the time.
Two more weeks for vacation Barbara... GREAT!!
:)
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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I admire your versatility... This is a totally different story, I like all the description about the relationship between Paige and Cash. There is a big amount of tension all the time.
Two more weeks for vacation Barbara... GREAT!!
:)
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from Cynthia Vale
You definitely relay the southern drawl through the conversation. The story is intriguing and draws me in. I think I read the chapter before this one too. Good work.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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You definitely relay the southern drawl through the conversation. The story is intriguing and draws me in. I think I read the chapter before this one too. Good work.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from fairy77
WoW!You sound great. Really pissed off and good venting.I loved the fight and characters. This is a wonderful piece and amazing punctuation:)Well penned!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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WoW!You sound great. Really pissed off and good venting.I loved the fight and characters. This is a wonderful piece and amazing punctuation:)Well penned!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni
The characters are memorable and come to life as the story is told. I enjoyed the dialects and the interaction of these two men. Seems they've been together a long time. A solid reading experience.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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The characters are memorable and come to life as the story is told. I enjoyed the dialects and the interaction of these two men. Seems they've been together a long time. A solid reading experience.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. The men have been together since elementary school
