Savannah Love
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Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The story continues at an interesting pace while the suspense continues to build. The dialogue between the characters is excellent and flows naturally with the narrative. Dr. Henderson wanting to be on a first-name basis with Paige and inviting her to have dinner adds to the intensity. I enjoyed the read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Barbara,
The story continues at an interesting pace while the suspense continues to build. The dialogue between the characters is excellent and flows naturally with the narrative. Dr. Henderson wanting to be on a first-name basis with Paige and inviting her to have dinner adds to the intensity. I enjoyed the read.
Curtis
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support
Comment from Taffspride
Lots of unanswered questions in this well written chapter Barbara. Once again with your excellent story telling and dialog use, the reader moves along at a good pace. With no spots for us to stumble, or get bored.
As always you whet our appetites then just when we think we know what is going to happen next, you end with a cliff hanger, making sure we will come back for more. This IMHO is the sign of a good author.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Why should the Doctor feel that Cash had something to do with Paige breaking her ankle? Who is trying to tell her something and why did the light suddenly go out.
So much to think about.
Thanks for bringing us this great story.
Iechyd da.
Ann
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Lots of unanswered questions in this well written chapter Barbara. Once again with your excellent story telling and dialog use, the reader moves along at a good pace. With no spots for us to stumble, or get bored.
As always you whet our appetites then just when we think we know what is going to happen next, you end with a cliff hanger, making sure we will come back for more. This IMHO is the sign of a good author.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Why should the Doctor feel that Cash had something to do with Paige breaking her ankle? Who is trying to tell her something and why did the light suddenly go out.
So much to think about.
Thanks for bringing us this great story.
Iechyd da.
Ann
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement. I appreciate both.
Comment from rtobaygo
Start off with a supernatural hook, then switch gears as the topic revolves about Paige's broken ankle which occurred while pursuing Cash. You end this part of your chapter by having Paige needing to discuss a topic with cash. Per usual, well done!
Take care,
Ray
ifjcadiscussion ed
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Start off with a supernatural hook, then switch gears as the topic revolves about Paige's broken ankle which occurred while pursuing Cash. You end this part of your chapter by having Paige needing to discuss a topic with cash. Per usual, well done!
Take care,
Ray
ifjcadiscussion ed
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from AprilShower
Hi, Barbara. Looks like there's some people still around who are still fighting the Civil War. This is an interesting story.
I guess I'd better get(to) back the hospital.
"I'm planning you for dinner.(This sounds awkward. Almost like she's going to eat him.)
Suggest:
"I'm planning on you staying for dinner.
April
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Hi, Barbara. Looks like there's some people still around who are still fighting the Civil War. This is an interesting story.
I guess I'd better get(to) back the hospital.
"I'm planning you for dinner.(This sounds awkward. Almost like she's going to eat him.)
Suggest:
"I'm planning on you staying for dinner.
April
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and eagle eye.
I think I put the 'to' in the wrong place in that first sentence. :o)
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Miz Paige just keeps getting deeper in the mire ... There's an old adage she might find handy - when you're in a hole, don't take the digger in with you! She's really stepped into a nest of vipers somewhere down this road, and she needs to know more about Doctor Marc Henderson as well. I'm betting he's another one after the house.
Interesting chapter, it builds up nicely toward the next installment.
Patrick
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Hi Barbara,
Miz Paige just keeps getting deeper in the mire ... There's an old adage she might find handy - when you're in a hole, don't take the digger in with you! She's really stepped into a nest of vipers somewhere down this road, and she needs to know more about Doctor Marc Henderson as well. I'm betting he's another one after the house.
Interesting chapter, it builds up nicely toward the next installment.
Patrick
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from BethShelby
You are keeping the story interesting and mystery always out there luring your reads to look forward to the next posting. I like the dialogue and the cast of characters.
I still have a few back post to catch up with but I'm following the story well in spite of missing a few.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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You are keeping the story interesting and mystery always out there luring your reads to look forward to the next posting. I like the dialogue and the cast of characters.
I still have a few back post to catch up with but I'm following the story well in spite of missing a few.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Writingfundimension
A very nice bit of tension by having Dr. Marc interested in Paige. That Cash is going to take experiencing something spectacular to convince him there are ghosts about LOL. Another really enjoyable chapter, barbara.
'No you don't need (to) come.'
Warmest regards, Bev
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A very nice bit of tension by having Dr. Marc interested in Paige. That Cash is going to take experiencing something spectacular to convince him there are ghosts about LOL. Another really enjoyable chapter, barbara.
'No you don't need (to) come.'
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank your for the catch. I appreciate it.
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You're welcome, barbara. :0)
Comment from judiverse
I thought Dr. Marc seemed rather pushy, but Paige was wise enough to turn his offer of a dinner date. Paige is getting a lot of mileage out of that ankle. The mystery of the lights going out and the book being opened to the Bookman family tree remains unsolved. Paige will be able to discover a lot on her own once she's mobile. Nala is quite firm in her decision to go ahead working for Paige despite the threats. Interesting developments in this. Paige does inspire such loyalty. judi
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I thought Dr. Marc seemed rather pushy, but Paige was wise enough to turn his offer of a dinner date. Paige is getting a lot of mileage out of that ankle. The mystery of the lights going out and the book being opened to the Bookman family tree remains unsolved. Paige will be able to discover a lot on her own once she's mobile. Nala is quite firm in her decision to go ahead working for Paige despite the threats. Interesting developments in this. Paige does inspire such loyalty. judi
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
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You're so welcome. judi
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where the doctor asks paige on a date and she declines, nala refuses to give up working there and paige informs cash that they need to talk. i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where the doctor asks paige on a date and she declines, nala refuses to give up working there and paige informs cash that they need to talk. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from God's Writer
Another grand chapter in your awesome story. They won't let me give you a six star, but I will anyway. ****** I hope this will suffice. Thank you for your professionalism.
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Another grand chapter in your awesome story. They won't let me give you a six star, but I will anyway. ****** I hope this will suffice. Thank you for your professionalism.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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HUGS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the kind review.
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HUGS!!!!!!!!! back and thank you for the great story.
