Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Chapter 10, part 4"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
As always this is great, very interesting, and well written. I really enjoy reading the book. I get to read so many good books on this site. It's great. Well done, Rox
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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As always this is great, very interesting, and well written. I really enjoy reading the book. I get to read so many good books on this site. It's great. Well done, Rox
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Paige just won't acknowledge the obvious, that Cash has taken on the role of boyfriend. Perhaps that will change as she finds him staying close by whenever he can help her in any way.
Dr. Harrison seems eager to make house calls without even being asked. I suspect Paige would pay more attention to the handsome young doctor, if Cash wasn't around.
I hope more of the mysteries surrounding Paige's house will start to be solved. If all the mysterious happenings are fueled by an old family feud, I expect more answers will surface.
Great dialog as usual. I'm sending you more love and Irish Hugs for your grat story.
Roger
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
Paige just won't acknowledge the obvious, that Cash has taken on the role of boyfriend. Perhaps that will change as she finds him staying close by whenever he can help her in any way.
Dr. Harrison seems eager to make house calls without even being asked. I suspect Paige would pay more attention to the handsome young doctor, if Cash wasn't around.
I hope more of the mysteries surrounding Paige's house will start to be solved. If all the mysterious happenings are fueled by an old family feud, I expect more answers will surface.
Great dialog as usual. I'm sending you more love and Irish Hugs for your grat story.
Roger
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Yes, I will start answering a few of the questions in the next few posts. Some will be saved until the ending. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emjaihammond
You are right, I lost a few chapters and am a little bit lost but will go back and make up some lost ground. I know this has been one of the stories I enjoy reading. You have a good strong base with such a mysterious story line. You do a fine job of creating images through carefully chosen words. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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You are right, I lost a few chapters and am a little bit lost but will go back and make up some lost ground. I know this has been one of the stories I enjoy reading. You have a good strong base with such a mysterious story line. You do a fine job of creating images through carefully chosen words. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from conroy11
A very good dialogue driven scene which dovetails nicely with the previous chapter I read. I'm clear now about the presence in the house that's messing with the lights. I envy the ease t which you handle dialogue and how you convey Paige's thoughts. Is it italics and a smaller font? It's an effective device and I have to remember how you did it. I am enjoying your story better now as I become acquainted with the characters and plot. Oh God! Don't turn me into a reader of romance novel. :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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A very good dialogue driven scene which dovetails nicely with the previous chapter I read. I'm clear now about the presence in the house that's messing with the lights. I envy the ease t which you handle dialogue and how you convey Paige's thoughts. Is it italics and a smaller font? It's an effective device and I have to remember how you did it. I am enjoying your story better now as I become acquainted with the characters and plot. Oh God! Don't turn me into a reader of romance novel. :)
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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I don't write your usual romance, I like a little more to the plot. I use italics, but not a smaller font, somehow FS makes it smaller, not sure why. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, we have a new conflict building, it seems. Hmmm, Cash was pretty cool, only a bit of a scrunched forehead (LOL). You've introduced another interesting element, my friend, and I'm dying to find out how it goes.
I LOVED that all of them answered together again (re: the cast) - it's so sweet, and such a wonderful way of showing how close they are becoming.
I loved it, Barbara. (But you know me - I want more of the ghosts! LOL. You do 'spooky' so well, and I'm a fan, such a big fan of the goose bumps! )
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Ah, we have a new conflict building, it seems. Hmmm, Cash was pretty cool, only a bit of a scrunched forehead (LOL). You've introduced another interesting element, my friend, and I'm dying to find out how it goes.
I LOVED that all of them answered together again (re: the cast) - it's so sweet, and such a wonderful way of showing how close they are becoming.
I loved it, Barbara. (But you know me - I want more of the ghosts! LOL. You do 'spooky' so well, and I'm a fan, such a big fan of the goose bumps! )
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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The ghost will be making more appearances. He just doesn't want to scare off Cash. LOL Thank you for your wonderful support.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
And the mystery continues...Nela isn't going to be chased away, I have no idea if we have a ghost or not at this point or just a nut trying to scare everyone. So, I guess I wait and see. Good chapter. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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And the mystery continues...Nela isn't going to be chased away, I have no idea if we have a ghost or not at this point or just a nut trying to scare everyone. So, I guess I wait and see. Good chapter. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support. God Bless.
Comment from EmberSnowcat
It is so nice to come home after a long day at work and relax with a nice romance novel. As per usual, I'm really liking what I'm reading. Paige is such a strong woman, and Cash, well he can help me heal my ankle any time LOL. And I don't think you draw this out at all. Your last post wasn't to long ago, so I think this is just right. I really like the picture you choose for the family book. Great visual. No SPAG that I could find whatsoever in this. Can't wait for the next one!
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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It is so nice to come home after a long day at work and relax with a nice romance novel. As per usual, I'm really liking what I'm reading. Paige is such a strong woman, and Cash, well he can help me heal my ankle any time LOL. And I don't think you draw this out at all. Your last post wasn't to long ago, so I think this is just right. I really like the picture you choose for the family book. Great visual. No SPAG that I could find whatsoever in this. Can't wait for the next one!
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Norbanus
Another excellent segment of your story, Barbara. You left us with a lot of issues to speculate about. Books that open themselves, Paige's offer of a date from Marc. Can't wait for the next one.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Another excellent segment of your story, Barbara. You left us with a lot of issues to speculate about. Books that open themselves, Paige's offer of a date from Marc. Can't wait for the next one.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a well written chapter and I spotted no spag issues. It read well. The doctor suspects her ankle was broken due to abuse, then he asked her out, but she declined.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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This was a well written chapter and I spotted no spag issues. It read well. The doctor suspects her ankle was broken due to abuse, then he asked her out, but she declined.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I was a little surprised that the Dr. asked Paige out but then he sees more about her than just a patient. I wonder what Paige thinks there are some things she needs to talk to Cash about? Also what's with the book opening itself? Will Nala be safe when she goes to the Church meeting? Yikes so many questions! Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Hi Barbara,
I was a little surprised that the Dr. asked Paige out but then he sees more about her than just a patient. I wonder what Paige thinks there are some things she needs to talk to Cash about? Also what's with the book opening itself? Will Nala be safe when she goes to the Church meeting? Yikes so many questions! Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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The question about why Paige wants to talk with Cash will be answered in my next post. Thank you for the kind review.
