Savannah Love
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
Seems like the accident with her broken ankle is turning in something good for Paige... Nicely done Chapter Barbara, with good dialogues. Really enjoyable!
Many blessing for you!
:)
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Seems like the accident with her broken ankle is turning in something good for Paige... Nicely done Chapter Barbara, with good dialogues. Really enjoyable!
Many blessing for you!
:)
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. What doesn't kill us makes us grow. Maybe that's true for Paige.
Comment from DRG24
I like the picture and the characterization of the characters. I like the conflict. Great Job! Its's very interesting. I love it!!!!!!!!!
-DRG
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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I like the picture and the characterization of the characters. I like the conflict. Great Job! Its's very interesting. I love it!!!!!!!!!
-DRG
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank for the kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
Mystery still seems to hover in the background of your story and I enjoyed reading this chapter.
There are just a few small changes recommended ...
* You have - Enough sunlight shone through the window that Page noticed the Bookman Family Book .... I suggest -
Enough sunlight shone through the window, enabling Page to notice the Bookman Family Book ....
* You have - I guess I'd better get back the hospital ...
this should be - get back to the hospital ....
* You have - I'm planning you for dinner. This is not correct and I suggest - I am planning on you being with us for dinner ....
I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
Mystery still seems to hover in the background of your story and I enjoyed reading this chapter.
There are just a few small changes recommended ...
* You have - Enough sunlight shone through the window that Page noticed the Bookman Family Book .... I suggest -
Enough sunlight shone through the window, enabling Page to notice the Bookman Family Book ....
* You have - I guess I'd better get back the hospital ...
this should be - get back to the hospital ....
* You have - I'm planning you for dinner. This is not correct and I suggest - I am planning on you being with us for dinner ....
I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the eagle eye. I thought I had already changed one of them. I must have forgotten to save.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Great chapter as always. My son is paying to stay tonight in a house that is supposed to be haunted in Vallisca, Iowa. He and a friend plan to scare themselves silly!!! I'll let you know the results. Enjoyed this one my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Great chapter as always. My son is paying to stay tonight in a house that is supposed to be haunted in Vallisca, Iowa. He and a friend plan to scare themselves silly!!! I'll let you know the results. Enjoyed this one my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Please let me know the results. I am sure the boys will have fun. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Got a chuckle here:...She crossed her fingers. How does she know when things are going wrong? Is there some sort of mother's intuition? She seems to forget that I'm an adult. :)
Paige is certainly forthright:... "I'm wondering if you'll have dinner with me Saturday evening." "It sounds nice, but I've sworn off dating. Check back in about six months." ;p
Well done!
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Got a chuckle here:...She crossed her fingers. How does she know when things are going wrong? Is there some sort of mother's intuition? She seems to forget that I'm an adult. :)
Paige is certainly forthright:... "I'm wondering if you'll have dinner with me Saturday evening." "It sounds nice, but I've sworn off dating. Check back in about six months." ;p
Well done!
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
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My pleasure :)
Cheers,
Razz
Comment from Selina Stambi
Another great read, Barbara. The doctor is interested ... hmm. She must be an attractive girl - her inheritance is attractive enough in itself though, isn't it?
He glanced at it then (,)met her eyes..... missed the comma.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Another great read, Barbara. The doctor is interested ... hmm. She must be an attractive girl - her inheritance is attractive enough in itself though, isn't it?
He glanced at it then (,)met her eyes..... missed the comma.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for your eagle eyes. I appreciate it.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara.
Paige studied the brown(-)eyed doctor.
I guess I'd better get back (to) the hospital.
"I'm planning (on?) you for dinner.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara.
Paige studied the brown(-)eyed doctor.
I guess I'd better get back (to) the hospital.
"I'm planning (on?) you for dinner.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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I wondered about that hyphen. I will get right on it.
Comment from mshugh
Nice segue to the rimantic tension - Stry moving well - I thibk you are enjoying writing this - it remings of a sprint stream - ambling away on a cool day - if that makes any sense.
Well done
Michael
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Nice segue to the rimantic tension - Stry moving well - I thibk you are enjoying writing this - it remings of a sprint stream - ambling away on a cool day - if that makes any sense.
Well done
Michael
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. If my writing passes your eagle eye, then it's okay.
Comment from NicciFaye
This was a good write. I didn't see any obvious erroors. I loved the discussion of the characters and the storyline. It keep my attention and wasn't to overly crowed with unnecessary details.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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This was a good write. I didn't see any obvious erroors. I loved the discussion of the characters and the storyline. It keep my attention and wasn't to overly crowed with unnecessary details.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I have not followed your posts for sometime now, but this chapter is interesting. The ankle injury seems to be the pivot here. The interactions are lively and the dating proposal adds a pep to it. kudos
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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I have not followed your posts for sometime now, but this chapter is interesting. The ankle injury seems to be the pivot here. The interactions are lively and the dating proposal adds a pep to it. kudos
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
