Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Cash better get his tush in gear and mark his territory. It always takes another man to dance around the lady before any action occurs. Men!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi,
Cash better get his tush in gear and mark his territory. It always takes another man to dance around the lady before any action occurs. Men!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Cash is a proper southern gentleman. LOL
Comment from Sankey
"How does she know when things are going wrong? Is there some sort of mother's intuition? She seems to forget that I'm an adult." Hehe My wife's Mother ALWAYS SEEMS TO RING when we are having some kind of drama here not with each other but Oh me!
Good work I am still with ya. No Spags again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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"How does she know when things are going wrong? Is there some sort of mother's intuition? She seems to forget that I'm an adult." Hehe My wife's Mother ALWAYS SEEMS TO RING when we are having some kind of drama here not with each other but Oh me!
Good work I am still with ya. No Spags again.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from j.moore
Writing in this chapter is good. still have a lot to revealed about who want the brooch or the house. Seem like a romance might be brewing. the doctor asking the patience out. I will try to keep reading. good work.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Writing in this chapter is good. still have a lot to revealed about who want the brooch or the house. Seem like a romance might be brewing. the doctor asking the patience out. I will try to keep reading. good work.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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I am not sure what to change to make it a five star. I wish you would enlighten me.
Comment from justmarly
This is so good. Wow Paige is famous. Maybe because she is pretty. I don't think Cash will ever give her a chance to have another man. You are doing a great job. It flows so nicely and everything goes on like it suppose to, though you know better than I do. Thanks for such a great story. MJ
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2013
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This is so good. Wow Paige is famous. Maybe because she is pretty. I don't think Cash will ever give her a chance to have another man. You are doing a great job. It flows so nicely and everything goes on like it suppose to, though you know better than I do. Thanks for such a great story. MJ
Comment Written 30-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the continued support.
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You are more than welcome. MJ
Comment from Sasha
This is moving along very nicely. You are dong a great job keeping up the tension and causing me to ask more questions about what is going on. Great work with this one.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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This is moving along very nicely. You are dong a great job keeping up the tension and causing me to ask more questions about what is going on. Great work with this one.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sorry you had to read this post when there were no bonus points.
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No problem, I don't worry about points.
Comment from Mishelly
Once again you've show how all these friends are rallying around to help each other. I really believe in their friendship, and their fondness for each other. I also like how the ghost pops up from time to time to leave clues. I'm curious to find out why the Bookman family book opened :-)
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Once again you've show how all these friends are rallying around to help each other. I really believe in their friendship, and their fondness for each other. I also like how the ghost pops up from time to time to leave clues. I'm curious to find out why the Bookman family book opened :-)
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sorry you had to read it when there were not points attached.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
A reflective piece incorporating youth angst amidst the backdrop of a mystery house in Boston. Well written dialogue where the characters react to each others fears and hopes. A good piece and well deserving.
Regards:
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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A reflective piece incorporating youth angst amidst the backdrop of a mystery house in Boston. Well written dialogue where the characters react to each others fears and hopes. A good piece and well deserving.
Regards:
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. The house is in Savannah, GA.
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Dear Barb: Sorry about that. As to love...could you comment on my latest poem, 'The Rancher's Wife'
Thanks: Steve C
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I will go there right now.
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Dear Barb: Thanks.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
"I'm planning you for dinner. - I think you want to look at this, Barbara. Otherwise, everything is well paced and tightly written. well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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"I'm planning you for dinner. - I think you want to look at this, Barbara. Otherwise, everything is well paced and tightly written. well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Yes, I think I need to rewrite that. It sounds like Cash is the the main course. Thank you for the eagle eye.
Comment from Mrs Jones
The love plot thickens. I hope the Dr isn't going to get nasty, being rebuffed. Nice smooth read, no editing needed as always.
Good work
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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The love plot thickens. I hope the Dr isn't going to get nasty, being rebuffed. Nice smooth read, no editing needed as always.
Good work
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from kashmayank
I havent read all the chapters but this is a good story to follow the good thing was that it had a structure and followed it all the best
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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I havent read all the chapters but this is a good story to follow the good thing was that it had a structure and followed it all the best
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
