Picture Poems
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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
This is a great piece of poetry. Written in a very good format. It allows you to say what you want to say in precise syllable count,,,,,,
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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This is a great piece of poetry. Written in a very good format. It allows you to say what you want to say in precise syllable count,,,,,,
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you Jim.
Comment from robina1978
Great photo and poem An Ameriku is very nice. What did this book ask for? I liked the second stanza best with the bit going up and down but not drowning. Good dedication.
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Great photo and poem An Ameriku is very nice. What did this book ask for? I liked the second stanza best with the bit going up and down but not drowning. Good dedication.
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thanks Ine. I copied this from the prologue . If you what to submit one, the instructions are in the Author's notes of the Prologue.
"This is a multi-author book entitled: "We will survive!" - shared and written by FanStorians to provide a glimmer of hope and encouragement for those who are at the cross-road of suffering in pain or mental anguish either directly or indirectly from terminal illnesses, mental torture, disabilities or conflicts, etc. Life is a journey of thorns not roses at times.
Everyone is welcome to contribute a chapter as a tribute to a family member or friend whom we care or even someone we hardly know. "
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welcome and I can consider this now some time soon. Ine
Comment from Jean Lutz
The message echoes in my soul. You have done a great job in composing the words, capturing the picture and over all color and form. I hope we can attract many to add pieces to this book.
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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The message echoes in my soul. You have done a great job in composing the words, capturing the picture and over all color and form. I hope we can attract many to add pieces to this book.
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thank you very much Jean. I hope so too!
Comment from 9999pool
Another wonderful poem Tom.
So simple the story of the waves coming to shore and brings with it a load of debris from faraway land.
We have to sieve through the debris beneath the wave as it breaks on the shore. We cannot let the waves drown us surely?
Another excellent write and the 'Ameri-ku' format is very creative with a short style format of only two stanzas. There is both inspiration and encouragement in this story. We must never drown but to survive it all!!
Brilliantly penned and bring a message of hope and miracles to all of us.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Another wonderful poem Tom.
So simple the story of the waves coming to shore and brings with it a load of debris from faraway land.
We have to sieve through the debris beneath the wave as it breaks on the shore. We cannot let the waves drown us surely?
Another excellent write and the 'Ameri-ku' format is very creative with a short style format of only two stanzas. There is both inspiration and encouragement in this story. We must never drown but to survive it all!!
Brilliantly penned and bring a message of hope and miracles to all of us.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thank you Ritchie, glad you like it. Hope that's what you were looking for in your book.
Comment from Gungalo
Reflecting life's problems,
That enter into play,
There will be ebb and flow.
Just like the ocean
We go up and down,
But we won't drown.
Perfectly executed Tom and a wonderful bit of imagery here too. Awesome it is and good job of it.
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Reflecting life's problems,
That enter into play,
There will be ebb and flow.
Just like the ocean
We go up and down,
But we won't drown.
Perfectly executed Tom and a wonderful bit of imagery here too. Awesome it is and good job of it.
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thanks for the inspiration.
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Charlene0513
A beautiful poem that is sublime as you dedicate it to those that have lost their lives at sea.
Very nice flow and quite disheartening and yet calming to the soul.
Charlene
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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A beautiful poem that is sublime as you dedicate it to those that have lost their lives at sea.
Very nice flow and quite disheartening and yet calming to the soul.
Charlene
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you so much Charlene.
Comment from L. Sherman
Beautiful poem: great thought in the final few lines and it's a great comparison. The line 'throws up froth and foam' in the first stanza really struck me. Very visually appealing. A lovely write and I style I don't think I've seen before.
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Beautiful poem: great thought in the final few lines and it's a great comparison. The line 'throws up froth and foam' in the first stanza really struck me. Very visually appealing. A lovely write and I style I don't think I've seen before.
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you Lisa. I just Lear edit this morning.
Comment from Indie Skreet
mm, I often have my most reflective moments either swimming or on the beach ......... and you clearly do too Tom. Another good write from Mr Deep :) best Indie
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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mm, I often have my most reflective moments either swimming or on the beach ......... and you clearly do too Tom. Another good write from Mr Deep :) best Indie
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thanks Indie. In that kind of mood.
