Savannah Love
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Again a virtual six
One think that got me upset what happened to Morgan ( the dog)
An now about this chapter. I like the way you get me more involed with the hidden mysteries of the family tree.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Again a virtual six
One think that got me upset what happened to Morgan ( the dog)
An now about this chapter. I like the way you get me more involed with the hidden mysteries of the family tree.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support. I appreciate both.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from God's Writer
Thank you my friend for not writing about cheating husbands and men that beat on women. My stomach is still in knots. If I could make a suggestion. If you could read your stories so people like me with bad eyes don't miss out. I know quite a few just like me. I think after your name got out you would have a few more readers.
Shalom
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you my friend for not writing about cheating husbands and men that beat on women. My stomach is still in knots. If I could make a suggestion. If you could read your stories so people like me with bad eyes don't miss out. I know quite a few just like me. I think after your name got out you would have a few more readers.
Shalom
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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I will consider that. Thank you for the suggestion and the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
They have already started to renovated the house, she's moved in, someone is harassing her, and now she finds out someone is contesting the will. What new aggravations are coming up? It's good she has some good friends and doesn't have to go through all this alone.
I have no suggestions.
April
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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They have already started to renovated the house, she's moved in, someone is harassing her, and now she finds out someone is contesting the will. What new aggravations are coming up? It's good she has some good friends and doesn't have to go through all this alone.
I have no suggestions.
April
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
A very interesting chapter in this story. So there is some other mystery that have to do with the house. What a cute puppy, I hope he's fine.
Have a nice week Barbara! I had a good time reading this chapter.
:)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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A very interesting chapter in this story. So there is some other mystery that have to do with the house. What a cute puppy, I hope he's fine.
Have a nice week Barbara! I had a good time reading this chapter.
:)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I think this house is one huge mystery.
Comment from rtobaygo
Hello, Barbara:
With every post, the more involved I become with your characters and the novel's plot. Question: Is your novel character driven of plot drive, or a bit of both?
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Hello, Barbara:
With every post, the more involved I become with your characters and the novel's plot. Question: Is your novel character driven of plot drive, or a bit of both?
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Probably both. My characters are to me the main part of a novel, but if you don't have a decent plot your gone. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara, although I thought the last paragraph was a little abrupt; maybe it needs a little something leading up to the lights going out?
After Cash,(no comma) nodded, Billy Joe grinned and said, "That'll work good.
Mary Pat should be done gettin (gettin')
Alan accepted a glass of lemonade from Nala,(no comma) and waited until Cash and Paige had refills before he said, things together.
"Has (Have) there been problems?"
His oldest son,(no comma) Wesley inherited the house and business.
George's youngest son, (no comma) Elijah married Abigail Walker.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara, although I thought the last paragraph was a little abrupt; maybe it needs a little something leading up to the lights going out?
After Cash,(no comma) nodded, Billy Joe grinned and said, "That'll work good.
Mary Pat should be done gettin (gettin')
Alan accepted a glass of lemonade from Nala,(no comma) and waited until Cash and Paige had refills before he said, things together.
"Has (Have) there been problems?"
His oldest son,(no comma) Wesley inherited the house and business.
George's youngest son, (no comma) Elijah married Abigail Walker.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Sorry for the late reply but I wanted time to make the corrections without making new ones. I appreciate your eagle eye.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter 10, pt 3.' This chapter I found was well formulated and I enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed the other. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter 10, pt 3.' This chapter I found was well formulated and I enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed the other. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure
Comment from Dawn Munro
First the small edit: "Has there been problems?" 'Problems' is plural = should read: "Have) there been problems?"
I loved it! I hated those old biddies got away with smacking Morgan, though it's great writing. And again I come away wanting more, so it's hard to improve on that!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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First the small edit: "Has there been problems?" 'Problems' is plural = should read: "Have) there been problems?"
I loved it! I hated those old biddies got away with smacking Morgan, though it's great writing. And again I come away wanting more, so it's hard to improve on that!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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I know it should be have, but Southern dialogue would have it as has. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mrs Jones
Now the story is becoming very interesting to me. Similar to the old English families. Well written as always. We have a habit of calling our sons Boy - Seun in Afrikaans.
Good work
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Now the story is becoming very interesting to me. Similar to the old English families. Well written as always. We have a habit of calling our sons Boy - Seun in Afrikaans.
Good work
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Now Paige has found out good reasons behind the strange happenings and strange threats. With Alan Redman's disclosure about the supposed clause in the original will, we have a reason for the searches through the house. Now it appears someone , most likely Daniel Walker, whose wife would be the only living heir if he could find the alleged will.
Apparently all the present day Walkers are still affected by feelings from the family feud.
The two old women are certainly not my idea of Southern ladies with fine manners and their grandson Dwayne Walker is not a Southern gentleman. In the end I think they are only poor losers, grasping at straws and hoping Paige will move on. I hope Morgan bites the next one to visit.
I noted one grammatical error: "[Has --> have] there been problems?" {Wrong case?}
As usual, great dialog and mental imagery.
Roger
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
Now Paige has found out good reasons behind the strange happenings and strange threats. With Alan Redman's disclosure about the supposed clause in the original will, we have a reason for the searches through the house. Now it appears someone , most likely Daniel Walker, whose wife would be the only living heir if he could find the alleged will.
Apparently all the present day Walkers are still affected by feelings from the family feud.
The two old women are certainly not my idea of Southern ladies with fine manners and their grandson Dwayne Walker is not a Southern gentleman. In the end I think they are only poor losers, grasping at straws and hoping Paige will move on. I hope Morgan bites the next one to visit.
I noted one grammatical error: "[Has --> have] there been problems?" {Wrong case?}
As usual, great dialog and mental imagery.
Roger
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Yes, I know it should be have, but I trying to speak Southern. LOL I guess it didn't work Many teachers here in TX, use the wrong words. Thank you for the kind review.
