Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Chapter 10, part 3"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
53 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
It always boils down to bloodline and name. My ex's grandfather tied up the farmland for three generations. My son just finally got the last of the inheritance because of all the legal wrangling about bloodline. He didn't want any in law, who, to him was an outsider to have anything.
I call people like that, assholes! I rest my case.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi,
It always boils down to bloodline and name. My ex's grandfather tied up the farmland for three generations. My son just finally got the last of the inheritance because of all the legal wrangling about bloodline. He didn't want any in law, who, to him was an outsider to have anything.
I call people like that, assholes! I rest my case.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Sankey
Good stuff. You have done really well with this. I have never been so stuck on writings as I am on this except of course my other writer friends book on the Alamo or there abouts I got stuck on that for weeks too. No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Good stuff. You have done really well with this. I have never been so stuck on writings as I am on this except of course my other writer friends book on the Alamo or there abouts I got stuck on that for weeks too. No Spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
Oh this is so a shame. Someone is trying to find that record so they can put their final say on it. Them ol' biddies are up to something I think. Keep up the good work. MJ
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Oh this is so a shame. Someone is trying to find that record so they can put their final say on it. Them ol' biddies are up to something I think. Keep up the good work. MJ
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from conroy11
You have a really good ear for dialogue. Your characters are believable and they act the way they're supposed to. I like the way they are waiting of Redman as if he will come to solve their problem and all he does is add to it. I like the entangled family tree situation you have set up. And it sure looks like Bonnie and Daniel are going to be trouble when you dropped in the little tidbit about "unemployed and drunk and disorderly" I liked the mixture of both genteel and crude behavior and manners that your characters exhibit. You really illustrated a clash of cultures. The last sentence confused me "The lights went out. Enough sunlight shone through the window that Paige noticed the Bookman Family book opened to the family tree. Why does he want me to study this? What is he trying to tell me?" The lights went out part especially. Am I missing something or reading it wrong? I enjoyed your chapter and I'm not even a reader of romance novels, but I can still appreciate the craftsmanship or should I say craftswomanship :) - John
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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You have a really good ear for dialogue. Your characters are believable and they act the way they're supposed to. I like the way they are waiting of Redman as if he will come to solve their problem and all he does is add to it. I like the entangled family tree situation you have set up. And it sure looks like Bonnie and Daniel are going to be trouble when you dropped in the little tidbit about "unemployed and drunk and disorderly" I liked the mixture of both genteel and crude behavior and manners that your characters exhibit. You really illustrated a clash of cultures. The last sentence confused me "The lights went out. Enough sunlight shone through the window that Paige noticed the Bookman Family book opened to the family tree. Why does he want me to study this? What is he trying to tell me?" The lights went out part especially. Am I missing something or reading it wrong? I enjoyed your chapter and I'm not even a reader of romance novels, but I can still appreciate the craftsmanship or should I say craftswomanship :) - John
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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There as been a ghost or something in the house that has done interesting things. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
As always you leave the reader hanging out to read more. I like how you mentioned the Montagues and Capulets because I was thinking the same thing myself. Despite Paige saying she'll give them the house, I know she will stick around to fight. It's in her feisty nature :-)
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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As always you leave the reader hanging out to read more. I like how you mentioned the Montagues and Capulets because I was thinking the same thing myself. Despite Paige saying she'll give them the house, I know she will stick around to fight. It's in her feisty nature :-)
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Very true assessment of Paige. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
The plot thickens...I've always wanted to say that. This was a great chapter and answers some of the questions I had. Those two women are real pieces of work. Not too subtle with their obnoxiousness. I don't like or trust them. I do hope they don't cause any trouble, but I guess that is just too much to ask, isn't it.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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The plot thickens...I've always wanted to say that. This was a great chapter and answers some of the questions I had. Those two women are real pieces of work. Not too subtle with their obnoxiousness. I don't like or trust them. I do hope they don't cause any trouble, but I guess that is just too much to ask, isn't it.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Yes, it is too much to ask for. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
Even if I done't catch all of your chapters, I still enjoy reading them. I don't have any problem keeping up. Love the puppy. I don't know how you kept up with that family tree. I hope you wrote it down. LOl.
Great job.
hugs
Heidi
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Even if I done't catch all of your chapters, I still enjoy reading them. I don't have any problem keeping up. Love the puppy. I don't know how you kept up with that family tree. I hope you wrote it down. LOl.
Great job.
hugs
Heidi
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Yes, I did write it down. I used it in an earlier post so I have it well documented. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DRG24
Awwwww! Cute picture. I haven't read the other parts of the story but it seems awesome. Great job, I love it. Thanks for writing it.
-DRG
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Awwwww! Cute picture. I haven't read the other parts of the story but it seems awesome. Great job, I love it. Thanks for writing it.
-DRG
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
You did an excellent job writing in such a way that those starting late in the read can get a quick understanding of some of the characters. For example: "I didn't know a Bentley could do that." Allowed me to know that these ladies were rich. Just two overlooks below.
"You could say that. Someone broke into the house last night searching for something. I figure you know what they want and who we're dealing with." Cash glared at Redman. "He left a handprint and we've hired a P.I. In a few days, we'll know who it belongs to.["] (quotation!)
"The will was contested on the grounds that Paige isn't a direct Bookman descendant." The lawyer took a sip from his glass. "To shed light on this you need to know a little history. George Bookman had three sons and four daughters. His oldest son, Wesley[,] (comma!) inherited the house and business. Your uncle inherited it from him. George's youngest son, Elijah married Abigail Walker. The Walkers and the Bookmans didn't get along any better than the Hatfields and McCoys."
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reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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You did an excellent job writing in such a way that those starting late in the read can get a quick understanding of some of the characters. For example: "I didn't know a Bentley could do that." Allowed me to know that these ladies were rich. Just two overlooks below.
"You could say that. Someone broke into the house last night searching for something. I figure you know what they want and who we're dealing with." Cash glared at Redman. "He left a handprint and we've hired a P.I. In a few days, we'll know who it belongs to.["] (quotation!)
"The will was contested on the grounds that Paige isn't a direct Bookman descendant." The lawyer took a sip from his glass. "To shed light on this you need to know a little history. George Bookman had three sons and four daughters. His oldest son, Wesley[,] (comma!) inherited the house and business. Your uncle inherited it from him. George's youngest son, Elijah married Abigail Walker. The Walkers and the Bookmans didn't get along any better than the Hatfields and McCoys."
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Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for your eagle eyes. I made the corrections.
Comment from Norbanus
I think your new image of Morgan fits much better with the story than the first one did. Anyone who would hit him with a cane should oughta lose her privilege at the afternoon tea.
It ain't worth getting into a scuffle with skunks (heck of a good line)
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I think your new image of Morgan fits much better with the story than the first one did. Anyone who would hit him with a cane should oughta lose her privilege at the afternoon tea.
It ain't worth getting into a scuffle with skunks (heck of a good line)
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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My father used to say that. It made and impression. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
