Savannah Love
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56 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
That sly Paige, playing along with the old biddies. Those two remind me of the two gossipmongers in my new book. HA--maybe they're related.
On to the next chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Barb,
That sly Paige, playing along with the old biddies. Those two remind me of the two gossipmongers in my new book. HA--maybe they're related.
On to the next chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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They are old biddies and they were put in their place.
Comment from Sankey
Southern 'prahde ya'll'. My goodness me. Plot getting thicker what! I did have those tow old biddies sorted out for sure.
Thanks again more exciting reading and NO SPAGS!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Southern 'prahde ya'll'. My goodness me. Plot getting thicker what! I did have those tow old biddies sorted out for sure.
Thanks again more exciting reading and NO SPAGS!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Ha, I knew you were going there. Daughters of American Revolution, priceless.
Why would mentioning that she heard the Walker name in conjunction with Chicago's Board of Trade be an issue?
This chapter leaves me with too many questions. Which of course is the point. Loving it.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Ha, I knew you were going there. Daughters of American Revolution, priceless.
Why would mentioning that she heard the Walker name in conjunction with Chicago's Board of Trade be an issue?
This chapter leaves me with too many questions. Which of course is the point. Loving it.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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You may have missed that post. Cash's mom told them that that the Walkers lost all their money playing the commodities and may lose their plantation. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DRG24
Wow great story. Good characterization. Like all of the characters. I enjoyed the poem a lot. You deserve a five. I enjoyed the story a lot.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Wow great story. Good characterization. Like all of the characters. I enjoyed the poem a lot. You deserve a five. I enjoyed the story a lot.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A well written chapter and a great ending. Sounds like they are nosy, no-gooders to me. Glad she got rid of them and left me with a smile on my face! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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A well written chapter and a great ending. Sounds like they are nosy, no-gooders to me. Glad she got rid of them and left me with a smile on my face! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the support.
Comment from marijmd
Its been a bit but I remember reading some of your earlier chapters. Your protagonist seems like she is feisty and spirited and not one to play into the hands of another.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Its been a bit but I remember reading some of your earlier chapters. Your protagonist seems like she is feisty and spirited and not one to play into the hands of another.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Paige is very feisty. Cash is just used to taking care of females. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend and reads very well no spag and you bring the whole work to life well I enjoyed my friend well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend and reads very well no spag and you bring the whole work to life well I enjoyed my friend well done regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Mishelly
Those two elderly ladies sure did act suspicious. Their nosy behavior was quite funny. I'm curious to see how they fit into the mystery, and if they and the rest of the Walker clan are involved with all the strange things which have happened.
There was one line which didn't seem to flow: The lady without the cane eyebrows rose.
My suggestion would be something like this: The lady without the cane raised her eyebrows.
This was another very enjoyable post :-)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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Those two elderly ladies sure did act suspicious. Their nosy behavior was quite funny. I'm curious to see how they fit into the mystery, and if they and the rest of the Walker clan are involved with all the strange things which have happened.
There was one line which didn't seem to flow: The lady without the cane eyebrows rose.
My suggestion would be something like this: The lady without the cane raised her eyebrows.
This was another very enjoyable post :-)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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That's the way I had that sentence originally written, but I changed it because a reviewer told me to write it this way. I am going back. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from country ranch writer
THE BUSY BODIES DESERVE WHAT THEY GET TRYING TO PRETEND THEY ARE THERE TO HELP THE OLD GOSSIPS.THEY WERE TRYING TO ACT SO ABOVE IT ALL. WHEN PAIGE BROUGHT THEM TO A SCREECHING HALT THEY COULDN'T GET OUT OF THERE FAST ENOUGH
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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THE BUSY BODIES DESERVE WHAT THEY GET TRYING TO PRETEND THEY ARE THERE TO HELP THE OLD GOSSIPS.THEY WERE TRYING TO ACT SO ABOVE IT ALL. WHEN PAIGE BROUGHT THEM TO A SCREECHING HALT THEY COULDN'T GET OUT OF THERE FAST ENOUGH
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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I think Paige cooked their gooses so to speak. Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from mshugh
very very effective use of dialogue - you have done beautiful work on your dialogue since I have been away. How many words will this novel be? Is there a target, want to see how you develop to climax
Michael
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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very very effective use of dialogue - you have done beautiful work on your dialogue since I have been away. How many words will this novel be? Is there a target, want to see how you develop to climax
Michael
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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My target is around 60,000 words. I am sure I will make it. I am beginning, to tie up some loose ends or at least introduce the people who can help solve the problems. Thank you for the kind review,
