Savannah Love
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Comment from flippant
Although I'm diving right in and am not entirely sure how each of these characters connect (as you mentioned in author's notes) - this snapshot shows that each is unique and fleshed out. Good job with dialogue - I especially liked the exchange with Cash and Billy Joe.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Although I'm diving right in and am not entirely sure how each of these characters connect (as you mentioned in author's notes) - this snapshot shows that each is unique and fleshed out. Good job with dialogue - I especially liked the exchange with Cash and Billy Joe.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and welcome.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Nice filler to add some 'feel' for the old South. A doctor and a gay masseur who make house calls. I like the ay the doctor also restricts Paige's movements, eve approving house calls by Mr. Redman.
Now we have to wait to find out who the rude,snooty and obviously 'upper crust' women are, Paige is certainly meeting a large cross-section of Savannah's population.
Isn't it about time that Cash starts to feel like a boyfriend?
I am ready to see the mystery expand. Who wants what of Paige?
Love and Irish Hugs for your nice romance.
Roger
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
Nice filler to add some 'feel' for the old South. A doctor and a gay masseur who make house calls. I like the ay the doctor also restricts Paige's movements, eve approving house calls by Mr. Redman.
Now we have to wait to find out who the rude,snooty and obviously 'upper crust' women are, Paige is certainly meeting a large cross-section of Savannah's population.
Isn't it about time that Cash starts to feel like a boyfriend?
I am ready to see the mystery expand. Who wants what of Paige?
Love and Irish Hugs for your nice romance.
Roger
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and I always enjoy hearing from you. Cash and Paige will have a rough go of it for awhile.
Comment from Selina Stambi
I will be galloping on to the next chapter as soon as you've posted it.
Another good read, Barbara!
I wonder when Cash will make a declaration. Does Paige have any suspicion about his feelings?
day and age - no hyphens
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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I will be galloping on to the next chapter as soon as you've posted it.
Another good read, Barbara!
I wonder when Cash will make a declaration. Does Paige have any suspicion about his feelings?
day and age - no hyphens
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and will take care of that.
Comment from The Ghostwriter
First of all, let me say about the puppy picture, "Awwwww." Anyway, I enjoyed the story and the fictional puppy, and the little old ladies who don't quite know how to act. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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First of all, let me say about the puppy picture, "Awwwww." Anyway, I enjoyed the story and the fictional puppy, and the little old ladies who don't quite know how to act. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mizzkris20
Your story is full of twist and the plot thickens by the minute. I love the photo of the pup. It enhances the story. This is another great chapter that I enjoyed reading
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Your story is full of twist and the plot thickens by the minute. I love the photo of the pup. It enhances the story. This is another great chapter that I enjoyed reading
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Oh, my. You ARE painting a snooty picture of the South. I have to laugh at the old biddies. They have to know Cash if he grew up around there. They probably went to school with his Granny. Very entertaining, Barbara. :) nancy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Oh, my. You ARE painting a snooty picture of the South. I have to laugh at the old biddies. They have to know Cash if he grew up around there. They probably went to school with his Granny. Very entertaining, Barbara. :) nancy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from unimatrix001
Excellent. I love how you keep adding new plot twists.
Dr. Henderson's nurse wouldn't allow her to make an appointment without checking first with him. - she calls Mr Redman, the lawyer, and gets a responce from Dr. Henderson's nurse. Were there two calls made? I think this needs another sentence or two for clarity.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Excellent. I love how you keep adding new plot twists.
Dr. Henderson's nurse wouldn't allow her to make an appointment without checking first with him. - she calls Mr Redman, the lawyer, and gets a responce from Dr. Henderson's nurse. Were there two calls made? I think this needs another sentence or two for clarity.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I will check that sentence out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
Excellent segment, Barbara. As always, you give us outstanding dialogue and show us well built situations.
'Maurice picked up Paige and the pup.' (LOL! Am I gettin' this picture right? Maurice with Paige in one arm and Morgan in the other, headin' up the stairs)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Excellent segment, Barbara. As always, you give us outstanding dialogue and show us well built situations.
'Maurice picked up Paige and the pup.' (LOL! Am I gettin' this picture right? Maurice with Paige in one arm and Morgan in the other, headin' up the stairs)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I think Maurice is holding Paige with two arms and maybe the pup is on Paige. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
All the usual platitudes again. It's a pleasure reading your posts. Your writing is crisp and flawlessly edited. The picture of the puppy was a nice touch. I must commend you regarding your character's development: They take the reader and place them into the story. Kudos!
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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All the usual platitudes again. It's a pleasure reading your posts. Your writing is crisp and flawlessly edited. The picture of the puppy was a nice touch. I must commend you regarding your character's development: They take the reader and place them into the story. Kudos!
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from barkingdog
I take it that Maurice is a big guy since he picked up both Paige and the pup. If he's been described before, it's my fault for not reading your story from the beginning.
The visitor is a real piece of work, isn't she? Very class conscious and rude. It should be interesting in the next scene.
Wait until she sees Maurice. LOL
Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I take it that Maurice is a big guy since he picked up both Paige and the pup. If he's been described before, it's my fault for not reading your story from the beginning.
The visitor is a real piece of work, isn't she? Very class conscious and rude. It should be interesting in the next scene.
Wait until she sees Maurice. LOL
Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Maurice was introduced before and he's full of muscles. Thank you for the kind review.
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I actually pictured him that way. Ha! That's what they all look like in the movies. LOL
