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Savannah Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Chapter 9, part 6"
Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from emjaihammond
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This has a great story line, grabs ones interest beginning to end. I really enjoy getting acquainted with the characters you have created here. Lovely job of writing. Look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A great chapter. Now we're delving deep into the mystery of the house. I can't wait for more. Will anxiously await next weeks installment!!! Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
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Interesting find when the guys are looking for blankets. In the wardrobe they find a cameo necklace and a pearl necklace as well as Confederate money. Paige hasn't seem the items before, and she says the box had been there when she previously looked. This is spooky. Paige finally gets her courage up and says she isn't leaving her house. Cash says it's a real person, not a ghost, frying to scare her. Whoever it is, he's going to great lengths. judi

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by judiverse on 07-Apr-2013
    You are indeed welcome. jusi
Comment from donaldww
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I always look forward to reading your posts. I'm hoping Paige runs into a ghost and gets so scared, she jumps right into Cash's waiting arms. LOL

Everything looked and sounded perfect in this post!

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    I am working toward that. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi Barb,
no way are you as you say (Sorry, I draw this out so long) to me it's like watching a real good movie and I don't want to see it end.

Gert

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the encouragement and the kind review.
reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Apr-2013
    You are welcome
    I'm enjoying the story.

    Gert
Comment from Norbanus
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Should we suppose that Paige was just pulling his leg with the search for the phone number at the Airport. She sure changed her mind in a hurry. But then, Yankees are like that aren't they?

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    I am pretty sure females are like that, no matter where they're from. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Robert Loy Gonzalez
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i didnt read the author notes till after i read the post, and you were right i was confused. neadless to say i did understand the concept of the story and i liked it. i will probably continue to read more of your works.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mshugh
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I have to smile at your use of collequalisms - sccoted a chair - LOL well done

Story moveing nicely - no SPAGs or any items sticking out

Well done

Michael

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    I'm trying to decide if it's a compliment or an insult. I try to write so anybody can pick it up and read it. I hope that's not a problem. Thank you for stopping by and reading. I really missed your comments while you were gone.
reply by mshugh on 07-Apr-2013
    It is a compliment - cause it is an easily recognizable term - scooted - spins an image

    LOL
Comment from elgone
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Interesting turn with the mysterious box, cameos and Confederate money. But how does that relate to the the ghost, the bigot who is threatening Paige. The plot gets more involved, doesn't it?

E

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Yes, the plot is getting involved. We'll get a few answers soon, but many more later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
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Barbara,

This chapter advances the story nicely with the discovery of the locked wooden box with the two necklaces and the stack of Confederate bills. The suspense and mystery continue to escalate. You have written the story well, and the dialogue is excellent. Thanks for sharing.

Curtis

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and the continued support.