Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Chapter 9, part 6"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Selina Stambi
I am glad I stuck with you.
Hope she chooses to stay!
Looking forward to the next one.
The tale gets more interesting with each post. :)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I am glad I stuck with you.
Hope she chooses to stay!
Looking forward to the next one.
The tale gets more interesting with each post. :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from unimatrix001
Marvelous writing, I could find any errors, however, I have a hard time believing Paige went from "I want the first flight out" to "Never! I won't be chased from my house" so quickly. I don't think Cashes eyes were that convincing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Marvelous writing, I could find any errors, however, I have a hard time believing Paige went from "I want the first flight out" to "Never! I won't be chased from my house" so quickly. I don't think Cashes eyes were that convincing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I don't know, I think Cash some good eyes. Actually, I don't think she really wanted to leave, once she thought about it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Another strange occurrence. Logic tells us that the antique jewelery probably wasn't placed in Paige's closet just to scare her, but someone has been moving things around. Maybe the chest was simply overlooked. After all, the old mansion is crowded with furniture and other items that have been there for years.
Everything that Cash and Billy Joe find appears to be a part of a plan to get Paige to leave, but now that she plans to stay more desperate plans may follow.
Maybe the hand print will be identified. In the meantime everyone needs to stick together and continue to search the house for other clues.
So much for speculation, this story can be resolved in many ways, but in the end, I think romance wins everything.
Love and Irish Hugs for more intrigue.
Roger
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
Another strange occurrence. Logic tells us that the antique jewelery probably wasn't placed in Paige's closet just to scare her, but someone has been moving things around. Maybe the chest was simply overlooked. After all, the old mansion is crowded with furniture and other items that have been there for years.
Everything that Cash and Billy Joe find appears to be a part of a plan to get Paige to leave, but now that she plans to stay more desperate plans may follow.
Maybe the hand print will be identified. In the meantime everyone needs to stick together and continue to search the house for other clues.
So much for speculation, this story can be resolved in many ways, but in the end, I think romance wins everything.
Love and Irish Hugs for more intrigue.
Roger
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara - this is a lovely post. Great treasure find with the box, jewels and money. More mystery unfolding- sure glad she's sticking this one out.
Well penned nothing popped for me just a smooth easy read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara - this is a lovely post. Great treasure find with the box, jewels and money. More mystery unfolding- sure glad she's sticking this one out.
Well penned nothing popped for me just a smooth easy read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ...
As always, I enjoyed this chapter of your story and certainly look forward to the next one.
There are a few small changes needed ...
* You have - Who did they belong too? ... which should be - belong to?
* You have - along with the Confederate bill and button ...
this should be - Confederate bills (as previously referred to.)
* You have - a real person (singular) who's trying to scare you. Are you going to let them? (plural) I suggest - Are you going to allow this to happen?
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ...
As always, I enjoyed this chapter of your story and certainly look forward to the next one.
There are a few small changes needed ...
* You have - Who did they belong too? ... which should be - belong to?
* You have - along with the Confederate bill and button ...
this should be - Confederate bills (as previously referred to.)
* You have - a real person (singular) who's trying to scare you. Are you going to let them? (plural) I suggest - Are you going to allow this to happen?
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your eagle eye.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
This is another exciting chapter. I am glad Paige refuses to be run out of her own house. But things do seem to get more scary with each chapter. Is it happening because of a ghost or a real person trying to scare her? Can't wait for the next chapter....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara,
This is another exciting chapter. I am glad Paige refuses to be run out of her own house. But things do seem to get more scary with each chapter. Is it happening because of a ghost or a real person trying to scare her? Can't wait for the next chapter....blessings, chey
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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I think there may be a ghost and a real person, but not sure. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Great post, Barbara. You've created tension and yet more mystery. I'm dying to know who this is and why they're doing these things.
The ghostly aspect is great - I love a mystery.
Didn't spot any spag.
Take a bow. Excellent work. My only complaint? It's not long enough.
:D
Av
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Great post, Barbara. You've created tension and yet more mystery. I'm dying to know who this is and why they're doing these things.
The ghostly aspect is great - I love a mystery.
Didn't spot any spag.
Take a bow. Excellent work. My only complaint? It's not long enough.
:D
Av
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your reading.
Comment from mizzkris20
Another great chapter I am proud to say I read. You are very talented and your characters seems so real. It is easy to read and follow
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Another great chapter I am proud to say I read. You are very talented and your characters seems so real. It is easy to read and follow
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from chasennov
'Chapter 9, part 6.' A good chapter I liked to read and it read smoothly. It was well formulated and has a strong base from which to build a good structure. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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'Chapter 9, part 6.' A good chapter I liked to read and it read smoothly. It was well formulated and has a strong base from which to build a good structure. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from God's Writer
Again such an awesome write. Such feelings and emotions you cast into your writing. What pride and compassion you have for your writing. Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Again such an awesome write. Such feelings and emotions you cast into your writing. What pride and compassion you have for your writing. Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
