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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi Barb,

Poor, Cash. The man can't win. He's always getting into a pickle with Paige.

She needs to get a cast. Maybe she'll have a kinder disposition. At least she's saying, so the ghost hasn't won yet.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Thank you my dear friend.
Comment from Sankey
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More drama and excitement. Yippeee! Gets darker and darker but I think I agree a real person is doing all this.
Very well dojne. No Spags again.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
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This is so good. I'm not home right now. I had to go get blood work done his morning. I'm missing my stories. I'm still enjoying them. MJ

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and sticking with me. I hope the blood work comes out good. I have to do that next week. UGH!
reply by justmarly on 27-Jun-2013
    Yes I hope as well. Hope yours goes well. MJ
Comment from NaughtieScribe
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Alright Paige! Stand your ground girl, but don't be stupid. Some folks take their intolerance and self righteousness to fanatical levels. I hope Cash sticks to her like super glue. Something tells me this story is going to get dark fairly soon.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
    There will be some more major problems. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allezw2
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Lady Barbara wilkey,

Always a treat, so if you are willing to spiel, we can follow.

Conspirators ago-go, somewhere in the neighborhood. Some of the cultures certainly resist newcomers with foreign ways. The American Civil War did not help the south. It was only a couple of weeks ago when the KKK held a march decrying the renaming of a municipal park, dropping Confederate General Nathan Bedford Forest, coincidentally the founder of the Klan.

Nicely done,

Fantasist

PS Remarkable that you have the time to read so many postings and share so much in remuneration.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
    I used to laugh when we were stationed at Fort Meade, MD. There was a street named after Forest. Most people didn't know who he was. Thank you for the kind review. Time doesn't allow me to do much reviewing, but I have a few secret angels who add to my posts to help me.
reply by Allezw2 on 13-Apr-2013
    Serendipity!
reply by Allezw2 on 13-Apr-2013
    Do you suppose that the "good" general would be spinning in his grave at being a subordinate name in a major facility named after a Union general that dashed the final hope of the confederacy?
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
    Interesting thought!!!!!
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there cutie pie
Barbara this just keeps getting better. I'd be damned if I'd let a ghost chase me off, especially after finding the jewells. Did they belong to the ghost? Time will tell
Bear

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
    I won't tell who the jewels belong too. At least not yet. LOL,,, Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from justatuna
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You really are a fun writer to read. Excellent dialogue from which I always learn. Flows very well and keeps the readers attention from start to finish. Very well done and will look for more.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from vapros
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Five stars today for chapter 41. You have skillfully created a scene and developed it through the dialogue of your characters. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gooloom
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its going along merrily--i mean your story and i am following it. This is an incomplete episode and i do not know what to say. i will repeat the same. You are a good writer and lets hope cash and paige unite soon--or won't? gooloom

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. During the summer, I will be able to post longer.
Comment from Adri7enne
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Cash must have got pretty close to Paige that he feels comfortable in opening a box he finds in her bedroom closet.

So the 'ghost' has been leaving stuff behind. I'd be pretty suspicious of a ghost like that. Secret passages in the house, I bet.
Good dialogue, barb. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. The box was not in Paige's room, but in a spare room.