Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Chapter 9, part 5"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
55 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
Oh, yeah, love the end hook about Paige having issues. LOL, that will not gain him any points.
I like how they all are rallying around Paige. Love the chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Hi Barb,
Oh, yeah, love the end hook about Paige having issues. LOL, that will not gain him any points.
I like how they all are rallying around Paige. Love the chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*^*)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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God Bless
Comment from Sankey
hehe I didn't think guns were a problem anywhere in America. Our gun laws are different here. Good story anyway still go my attention. No Spags again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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hehe I didn't think guns were a problem anywhere in America. Our gun laws are different here. Good story anyway still go my attention. No Spags again.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Okay this Yankee bashing is going too far. Both sides of my family are from the south (though the met up in NY and had us), and I've got a big issues with guns too. And let's not forget that lynching, segregation, Jim Crowe, oh yeah and slavery were also Southern ways. The South will never rise again, hopefully. lol-me being very sarcastic.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Okay this Yankee bashing is going too far. Both sides of my family are from the south (though the met up in NY and had us), and I've got a big issues with guns too. And let's not forget that lynching, segregation, Jim Crowe, oh yeah and slavery were also Southern ways. The South will never rise again, hopefully. lol-me being very sarcastic.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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I hope the South never rises again either, every so often they threaten.
Comment from rama devi
Thought I'd already reviewed this!~
It's a good chapter, with fine pacing, authentic-sounding dialog (as usual) and good character development. can't comment much on plot, since I've missed many chapters. Did not notice any spag or nits in POV etc. I know you post chapter sections so they're short and new readers may get lost, but as a periodic visitor, I find it easy to jump back in as your writing stlye is easy to follow.
Blessings, rd
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thought I'd already reviewed this!~
It's a good chapter, with fine pacing, authentic-sounding dialog (as usual) and good character development. can't comment much on plot, since I've missed many chapters. Did not notice any spag or nits in POV etc. I know you post chapter sections so they're short and new readers may get lost, but as a periodic visitor, I find it easy to jump back in as your writing stlye is easy to follow.
Blessings, rd
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Coming from you, it's extra special.
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Aw, thanks dear. Hugs, rd
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend you have done well no errors I can see and an enjoyable chapter well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend you have done well no errors I can see and an enjoyable chapter well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Oh no, we still don't know who the owner of the print is ... do you, Barbara??
Another interesting read.
Well done. Waiting to find out more!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Oh no, we still don't know who the owner of the print is ... do you, Barbara??
Another interesting read.
Well done. Waiting to find out more!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gene roush
Thanks for sharing,
The conversation flows well and demonstrates character attributes effortlessly.
I think something is missing though,-- we enter the front door and then are suddenly placed in the bedroom.
Your strong characters carry the day.
Nice job,
gene
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thanks for sharing,
The conversation flows well and demonstrates character attributes effortlessly.
I think something is missing though,-- we enter the front door and then are suddenly placed in the bedroom.
Your strong characters carry the day.
Nice job,
gene
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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thank you
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
I've not been keeping up, so I've missed a chapter. Sounds like Paige is an 'anti-gun' girl as well. It seems to me this house has more entrances and exits than a Badger sett!
Good dialogues as usual, nicely held suspense and tension.
Patrick
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara,
I've not been keeping up, so I've missed a chapter. Sounds like Paige is an 'anti-gun' girl as well. It seems to me this house has more entrances and exits than a Badger sett!
Good dialogues as usual, nicely held suspense and tension.
Patrick
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. This house is very interesting.
Comment from Doc Holiday
The battle of the North and South seems to continue through this chapter. You didn't reveal too much of the plot in this short one, but added a lot of character depth with the relationships and what we could expect within them. An elevator in the hidden staircase sounds like a good idea to me...
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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The battle of the North and South seems to continue through this chapter. You didn't reveal too much of the plot in this short one, but added a lot of character depth with the relationships and what we could expect within them. An elevator in the hidden staircase sounds like a good idea to me...
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Sounds like a good idea to me too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer as always keeps the readers interest. The writer does a fine job of adding information to rile up the characters. The intensity is up. The curiosity is up. The anxiety is up as the tension builds between the characters.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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The writer as always keeps the readers interest. The writer does a fine job of adding information to rile up the characters. The intensity is up. The curiosity is up. The anxiety is up as the tension builds between the characters.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
