Savannah Love
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Strange things continue to happen. Such intrigue.
Seems to me someone is trying to scare Paige away, so they can get into and search the house undisturbed. Must be something hidden in there, I fancy.
I'm so enjoying this story, Barbara - Margaret
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Strange things continue to happen. Such intrigue.
Seems to me someone is trying to scare Paige away, so they can get into and search the house undisturbed. Must be something hidden in there, I fancy.
I'm so enjoying this story, Barbara - Margaret
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Billy Joe pushes all the 'Southern' good ol boys buttons acting the country buffoon as a foil to Cash. The setting is well described and the caution of the two appropriate to their astute observations..the hand print.. a good tension builder indeed. The PI is the added touch to a well written piece de resistance.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Billy Joe pushes all the 'Southern' good ol boys buttons acting the country buffoon as a foil to Cash. The setting is well described and the caution of the two appropriate to their astute observations..the hand print.. a good tension builder indeed. The PI is the added touch to a well written piece de resistance.
Regards:
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, barb. I hope you are doing well. Been a while since I've gotten to see your work...Been away as I told you, I believe.
Anyway, this chapter of writing stands on its own and is exemplary. I suggest this if you want:
""Maybe she knows, but doesn't know she knows." (Perhaps Maybe she knows, but doesn't know she does.)
Bravo, barb! Great write in my umble opinion. Bob
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Hi, barb. I hope you are doing well. Been a while since I've gotten to see your work...Been away as I told you, I believe.
Anyway, this chapter of writing stands on its own and is exemplary. I suggest this if you want:
""Maybe she knows, but doesn't know she knows." (Perhaps Maybe she knows, but doesn't know she does.)
Bravo, barb! Great write in my umble opinion. Bob
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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You opinion counts as a lot. Thank you for the kind review and suggestion.
Comment from elgone
Well, the door was unlocked and there is a hand print on the car, so it doesn't sound like a ghost, maybe someone trying to scare away Paige. Perhaps there is something of value hidden int he house.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Well, the door was unlocked and there is a hand print on the car, so it doesn't sound like a ghost, maybe someone trying to scare away Paige. Perhaps there is something of value hidden int he house.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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I am wondering all of this myself. REALLY!! LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Hi, Barbara. Six stars for the chills down the spine factor. Strange things keep happening in Paige's home. The parlor's been ransacked, and Cash and Billy Joe think the intruder's searching for something. I like Billy Joe's answer to the cigarette--a toothpick. There's the happening of the door being unlocked that the guys were sure had been locked. Bringing in the P.I. to investigate after they find a handprint on Paige's car (was it getting dusty?) sounds like a good idea. Don't worry about posting just once a week. You're chapters are worth the wait. judi
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Hi, Barbara. Six stars for the chills down the spine factor. Strange things keep happening in Paige's home. The parlor's been ransacked, and Cash and Billy Joe think the intruder's searching for something. I like Billy Joe's answer to the cigarette--a toothpick. There's the happening of the door being unlocked that the guys were sure had been locked. Bringing in the P.I. to investigate after they find a handprint on Paige's car (was it getting dusty?) sounds like a good idea. Don't worry about posting just once a week. You're chapters are worth the wait. judi
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Hi, Barbara, the relationship between Cash and Billy Joe is very real, and also amusing. Their affection comes through so well.
So the intruder left a handprint, I'm looking forward to finding out who it belongs to!
Looking forward to the next.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Hi, Barbara, the relationship between Cash and Billy Joe is very real, and also amusing. Their affection comes through so well.
So the intruder left a handprint, I'm looking forward to finding out who it belongs to!
Looking forward to the next.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like the ghost is innocent of trashing the downstairs. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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It looks like the ghost is innocent of trashing the downstairs. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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This ghost is a very interesting ghost. Who knows what he/she is up too. Thank you for the kind review.
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It can get interesting.
