Savannah Love
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Comment from Selina Stambi
Another great cliff hanger, Barbara.
The plot thickens, indeed.
Looking forward to the next one.
Are you glad to be getting back to work?
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Another great cliff hanger, Barbara.
The plot thickens, indeed.
Looking forward to the next one.
Are you glad to be getting back to work?
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Yes, spring break is over. School started again today. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
Terrific chapter. It has to be a ghost, I am sure of it. Great tension and excellent dialogue too. Poor Paige, I don't blame her for wanting to go back to Boston. But I am sure they will convince her to stay. I hope whatever the ghost wants doesn't cause Paige any harm.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Terrific chapter. It has to be a ghost, I am sure of it. Great tension and excellent dialogue too. Poor Paige, I don't blame her for wanting to go back to Boston. But I am sure they will convince her to stay. I hope whatever the ghost wants doesn't cause Paige any harm.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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I am anxious to see who is messing around with Paige. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is all such a mystery -
holding the interest and leaving
me wondering where this will lead.
as he walked passed - past
I'm giving you a six while I can - for all the chapters as this (in my humble opinion) is your best story yet.
Margaret
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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This is all such a mystery -
holding the interest and leaving
me wondering where this will lead.
as he walked passed - past
I'm giving you a six while I can - for all the chapters as this (in my humble opinion) is your best story yet.
Margaret
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Hmm, there seem to be more ways into this house than it appears or Cash and Billy Joe know - and worse, there is somebody walking in and out who doesn't care who knows he is.
They really do need to call the police and flag this - but I'm betting that will spoil the story.
Good tense chapter, ratcheting the tensions up a lot now and an excellent hook on the end. Well done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Hmm, there seem to be more ways into this house than it appears or Cash and Billy Joe know - and worse, there is somebody walking in and out who doesn't care who knows he is.
They really do need to call the police and flag this - but I'm betting that will spoil the story.
Good tense chapter, ratcheting the tensions up a lot now and an excellent hook on the end. Well done.
Patrick
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to see where it leads.
Billy Joe pecked Mary Pat's cheek as he walked passed (past).
Cash stood by the ceiling(-)to(-)floor cupboard. (I think you used this in a previous chapter, too, but I forgot to mention it there.)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to see where it leads.
Billy Joe pecked Mary Pat's cheek as he walked passed (past).
Cash stood by the ceiling(-)to(-)floor cupboard. (I think you used this in a previous chapter, too, but I forgot to mention it there.)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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I will go back and check the previous post. Thank you.
Comment from dmt1967
This is another good chapter I like the picture very well written and I like the way it built with suspense all the way through thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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This is another good chapter I like the picture very well written and I like the way it built with suspense all the way through thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CR Delport
Another interesting chapter that is well written and well edited. The story moves at a nice pace and the dialogue is smooth and easy to follow. I could find no obvious errors.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Another interesting chapter that is well written and well edited. The story moves at a nice pace and the dialogue is smooth and easy to follow. I could find no obvious errors.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Treischel
And intense search and no answers creates tension.. Nice set of characters, and a little North versus South in there too. Very intriguing. Secret passage ways, and ransacked rooms, what is going on here?
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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And intense search and no answers creates tension.. Nice set of characters, and a little North versus South in there too. Very intriguing. Secret passage ways, and ransacked rooms, what is going on here?
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
Now we have a real mystery going on in this story. How could someone do all this while someone is in the house? This is rather strange. Yes, Paige and Mary Pat heard something, but why didn't the others who had found the secret passage? Were the men not there while this was going on? Something is not adding up. Maybe all this will be explained later.
April
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Now we have a real mystery going on in this story. How could someone do all this while someone is in the house? This is rather strange. Yes, Paige and Mary Pat heard something, but why didn't the others who had found the secret passage? Were the men not there while this was going on? Something is not adding up. Maybe all this will be explained later.
April
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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The men were outside when this was going on. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
A very good chapter, indeed! The action moves forward beautifully with good description. The reader is left wondering the same, "What are they looking for?"
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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A very good chapter, indeed! The action moves forward beautifully with good description. The reader is left wondering the same, "What are they looking for?"
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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I am wondering what they are looking for. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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LOL! You are welcome. And, one of us better find out what it is they are looking for. LOL! MN :)
