Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Chapter 9, part 2"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
59 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Oh, my, this is getting good and gooder. The Cash man to the rescue.
It would appear everyone thinks Cash and Paige should be a couple, but them. Hmmmm.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
Oh, my, this is getting good and gooder. The Cash man to the rescue.
It would appear everyone thinks Cash and Paige should be a couple, but them. Hmmmm.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. Cash spends much of his time taking care of Paige.
Comment from Sankey
Hmmm is it that Walker creep in his alter ego?? Got me wondering. Getting veeerryyyy dramatic now. Good stuff. Good writing. Good all over and NO SPAGS!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
Hmmm is it that Walker creep in his alter ego?? Got me wondering. Getting veeerryyyy dramatic now. Good stuff. Good writing. Good all over and NO SPAGS!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Ooo, good chapter, this was creepy and a bit funny. I am so loving Morgan, the grown folks better start paying more attention to that pup. Everytime he gets agitated something goes down.
I like the progression of Cash and Paige's relationship. It feels so real, and I find myself really anticipating that first kiss. Well done as always.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
Ooo, good chapter, this was creepy and a bit funny. I am so loving Morgan, the grown folks better start paying more attention to that pup. Everytime he gets agitated something goes down.
I like the progression of Cash and Paige's relationship. It feels so real, and I find myself really anticipating that first kiss. Well done as always.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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I see you have caught up. I am so sorry you have to read these with no money attached but I appreciate it.
Comment from Mishelly
Another suspenseful post full of drama. Once again your dialogue comes across very natural, and I really liked the "gossiping" between the two female friends.
I did notice quotation marks were missing from the beginning of the dialogue - Pajama pants won't fit over this thing.
Once again, look forward to more :-)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
Another suspenseful post full of drama. Once again your dialogue comes across very natural, and I really liked the "gossiping" between the two female friends.
I did notice quotation marks were missing from the beginning of the dialogue - Pajama pants won't fit over this thing.
Once again, look forward to more :-)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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I have added the missing quotation mark. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Treischel
This old house with all its secrets and the story unraveling is excellent. You have a good writing style and a wonderful way with dialogue. The characters are interesting and the actions are believable.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
This old house with all its secrets and the story unraveling is excellent. You have a good writing style and a wonderful way with dialogue. The characters are interesting and the actions are believable.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and words.
Comment from Sasha
This is a scary chapter. I do hope the guys get there quickly. Not knowing about the secret staircase puts Paige in a frightening situation. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
This is a scary chapter. I do hope the guys get there quickly. Not knowing about the secret staircase puts Paige in a frightening situation. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gooloom
Too long two chapters . nothing seems to be happening. Too many questions . Let the answers flow. want to know more. Hope the next chapter throws some light on who is the housebreaker? that is if there is one. Gooloom
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
Too long two chapters . nothing seems to be happening. Too many questions . Let the answers flow. want to know more. Hope the next chapter throws some light on who is the housebreaker? that is if there is one. Gooloom
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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This is a novel and will end with about 60,000 words. Everything will be answered by the end.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Interesting artwork! Well written. Reader can easily follow action. Secret passageways, I understand, were quite common in old Southern Mansions. Hmm, I am a bit curious about this Karen. Great read!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
Interesting artwork! Well written. Reader can easily follow action. Secret passageways, I understand, were quite common in old Southern Mansions. Hmm, I am a bit curious about this Karen. Great read!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Karen was introduced in a previous post.
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You are welcome. I was curious if Karen had anything to do with the strange happenings. MN :)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Oh my the suspense in this one at the end had me groaning cause I couldn't keep reading. Excellent post and as always you hold me throughout the post.
Thanks for sharing - I'm catching up soon I hope:)
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
Oh my the suspense in this one at the end had me groaning cause I couldn't keep reading. Excellent post and as always you hold me throughout the post.
Thanks for sharing - I'm catching up soon I hope:)
Maureen
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you, my friend.
Comment from mizzkris20
I definitely wants to know what the detectives will find in Paige's home. I think this is the second chapter I read so far today and boy doesn't the plot thickens.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
I definitely wants to know what the detectives will find in Paige's home. I think this is the second chapter I read so far today and boy doesn't the plot thickens.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.