Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter 8, part 5"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
65 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Ooooh, I hope nothing happened to Billy Joe. And that Dr. Walker remains creepy, even if he hasn't been in the last couple of chapters.
As always, another great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Ooooh, I hope nothing happened to Billy Joe. And that Dr. Walker remains creepy, even if he hasn't been in the last couple of chapters.
As always, another great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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He's is very creepy and it will come out later.
Comment from Sankey
Wow some racist drama coming up huh. I am sure your fiction is more truthful than you probably intended. I still reckon racism and Southern "superiority" is still alive and well in this 21st Century. You got me in for sure! No Spags
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Wow some racist drama coming up huh. I am sure your fiction is more truthful than you probably intended. I still reckon racism and Southern "superiority" is still alive and well in this 21st Century. You got me in for sure! No Spags
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
Wow! That's a shame for Paige. This story makes me feel I am right there and you are playing it out. I'm watching. lol MJ
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
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Wow! That's a shame for Paige. This story makes me feel I am right there and you are playing it out. I'm watching. lol MJ
Comment Written 18-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
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Paige has become a good friend. I understand.
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Yes she's a lovely girl.
Comment from Joyce Crowe
This is an intriguing story. Had to come back and read this chapter after I read the one that followed. Had to find out what letter they were talking about. Good character and plot development and enough suspense to keep the reader's attention.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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This is an intriguing story. Had to come back and read this chapter after I read the one that followed. Had to find out what letter they were talking about. Good character and plot development and enough suspense to keep the reader's attention.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support. Sorry you had to read it when no money's attached.
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That's okay. I'm glad I went back and read it. Keep up the good work.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I know that I read and reviewed this post several days ago, but somehow my comments weren't saved. Maybe I looked at the picture too long and stopped to eat.
Every thing seems to be going well between Cash and Paige as he helps her move around. She is rapidly becoming a fixture around Cash's family.
Then when Cash takes her home they find an ominous note on her door: "We don't want Yankees contaminating Southern purebreds. Show loyalty to White Society or get the hell out." Shades of the old south.
Paige is obviously scared so Cash asks Billy Joe and Mary Pat come backto Paige's so they can make sure she is safe. Now there may be a new problem when as something slows their return. This is becoming a real cliffhanger with threats fro unknown people. I'm ready to learn more.
Love and Irish Hugs for more SPAG-free writing,
Roger
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
I know that I read and reviewed this post several days ago, but somehow my comments weren't saved. Maybe I looked at the picture too long and stopped to eat.
Every thing seems to be going well between Cash and Paige as he helps her move around. She is rapidly becoming a fixture around Cash's family.
Then when Cash takes her home they find an ominous note on her door: "We don't want Yankees contaminating Southern purebreds. Show loyalty to White Society or get the hell out." Shades of the old south.
Paige is obviously scared so Cash asks Billy Joe and Mary Pat come backto Paige's so they can make sure she is safe. Now there may be a new problem when as something slows their return. This is becoming a real cliffhanger with threats fro unknown people. I'm ready to learn more.
Love and Irish Hugs for more SPAG-free writing,
Roger
Comment Written 09-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I am so sorry that you had to review this with no money attached. I like to reward my fans. I upset when newbies read me just for the points, though.
Anyway, I always enjoy hearing from you because you bring such good insight to my stories and I know if I am getting my point acrossed. Thank you.
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I would rather review someting good with hopoints than somethinng with a lot of points but no substance.
Roger
Comment from mizzkris20
This chapter is very interesting and descriptive. It is easy to read and follow. You make interesting conversation between your characters and i am looking forward to the next part
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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This chapter is very interesting and descriptive. It is easy to read and follow. You make interesting conversation between your characters and i am looking forward to the next part
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Author Girl
Nice story line and characters so far. They will make a cute couple and seems they will be forced to depend on eachother.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Nice story line and characters so far. They will make a cute couple and seems they will be forced to depend on eachother.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GeraldS
The narrative reads easily enough, but I had a little trouble figuring out who was who among the characters. That's the problem with reading novels piecemeal I guess. Your "Background" only mentioned two characters; it might be better to provide a fuller list for occasional readers like myself.
As one of the other reviewers mentioned, this part of the story seems just a bit slow paced. On the other hand, suspense and interest are clearly built up for the next installment. Some of these things are difficult to judge or even get a feel for with exposure to just a narrow slice of the pie. But, what I read here seemed okay to me.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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The narrative reads easily enough, but I had a little trouble figuring out who was who among the characters. That's the problem with reading novels piecemeal I guess. Your "Background" only mentioned two characters; it might be better to provide a fuller list for occasional readers like myself.
As one of the other reviewers mentioned, this part of the story seems just a bit slow paced. On the other hand, suspense and interest are clearly built up for the next installment. Some of these things are difficult to judge or even get a feel for with exposure to just a narrow slice of the pie. But, what I read here seemed okay to me.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A great chapter. Is troublemaker one word--I think it is. I need to eat dinner after reading about that meal. Good attention to detail. Enjoy your vacation!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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A great chapter. Is troublemaker one word--I think it is. I need to eat dinner after reading about that meal. Good attention to detail. Enjoy your vacation!!! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi barbara,
For someone who claimed not to be interested in a dog Cash sure takes care of Morgan. Its so sad that we have people who are so full of bigotry and I hope Paige allows Cash to help her with this problem. What could possibly of happened to Billy Joe?
Your story reads smoothly and I felt as if I was right there among them. Good job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Hi barbara,
For someone who claimed not to be interested in a dog Cash sure takes care of Morgan. Its so sad that we have people who are so full of bigotry and I hope Paige allows Cash to help her with this problem. What could possibly of happened to Billy Joe?
Your story reads smoothly and I felt as if I was right there among them. Good job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
