Unknowns
A man finds a bag full of eternal questions.22 total reviews
Comment from Patricia1
This is an interesting read! It kept me wondering all the way through as to what was going to become of Harold. After telling him some of his future sightings from others the ending does let you ponder what will happen to him after as an "Unknown." Thanks for sharing this good story.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013
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This is an interesting read! It kept me wondering all the way through as to what was going to become of Harold. After telling him some of his future sightings from others the ending does let you ponder what will happen to him after as an "Unknown." Thanks for sharing this good story.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from kashmayank
You have to work on the structure of the work to increase the appeal break it into paras that will help a personal opinion all the best
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013
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You have to work on the structure of the work to increase the appeal break it into paras that will help a personal opinion all the best
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013
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Thank you. I agree with your assessment. What I thought was a good idea became very hard to write.
