Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Chapter 8, part 4"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
59 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
Another interesting chapter that is well written and well presented. The story flows nicely and moves at a steady pace. On a personal level, you are taking your time answering questions that you put to the reader. Hurry up already :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Another interesting chapter that is well written and well presented. The story flows nicely and moves at a steady pace. On a personal level, you are taking your time answering questions that you put to the reader. Hurry up already :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review..
Comment from nora arjuna
halfway finished? so when is the romance part coming? :)
nice chapter and easy to read. i just can't recall the soldier part in the beginning and how it relates to this. are they the ghosts?
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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halfway finished? so when is the romance part coming? :)
nice chapter and easy to read. i just can't recall the soldier part in the beginning and how it relates to this. are they the ghosts?
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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It is explained in chapter 1. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Another good read.
You've ended on a cliff hanger - we seem to be on the brink of unearthing a mystery.
Looking forward to reading about the clues in the journal.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Another good read.
You've ended on a cliff hanger - we seem to be on the brink of unearthing a mystery.
Looking forward to reading about the clues in the journal.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
Delightful depiction of Morgan and peoples reaction to him.
I found nothing to wonder about except this minor issue: The note dated September 23, 1863--the writer uses the phrase 'During the war,' as though it was past tense, but the ware was not over.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Delightful depiction of Morgan and peoples reaction to him.
I found nothing to wonder about except this minor issue: The note dated September 23, 1863--the writer uses the phrase 'During the war,' as though it was past tense, but the ware was not over.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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That is true. I had not thought about it. It was over for her husband, because he died that day. I will recheck that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Jones
Sorry to come in halfway like this but I am returning the compliment. Of course I cannot quite grip the story at this stage, but it is clear to me why you are the number 5. Excellent writing and editing. I always admire good editing as I find it such a pain.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Sorry to come in halfway like this but I am returning the compliment. Of course I cannot quite grip the story at this stage, but it is clear to me why you are the number 5. Excellent writing and editing. I always admire good editing as I find it such a pain.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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I find it a pain too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This chapter contains some interesting intrigues that i find quite exciting. The stalking game and the possible reason for it is ine. The air conditioner's sudden misbehaviour creates suspense. well done
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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This chapter contains some interesting intrigues that i find quite exciting. The stalking game and the possible reason for it is ine. The air conditioner's sudden misbehaviour creates suspense. well done
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
I really enjoyed this chapter with the supernatural elements failing to be explained away and the stalking of the doctor. You've got many layers to this romance story and it's a total delight to read. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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I really enjoyed this chapter with the supernatural elements failing to be explained away and the stalking of the doctor. You've got many layers to this romance story and it's a total delight to read. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 24-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome!
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
Well, Barm I'm coming on here without the benefit of other chapters. It's a little hard for me tograde this one and give proper feedback.
It seems, however, some plot is prsent with the stalking. The setting about antebellum offers a intriguig story.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Well, Barm I'm coming on here without the benefit of other chapters. It's a little hard for me tograde this one and give proper feedback.
It seems, however, some plot is prsent with the stalking. The setting about antebellum offers a intriguig story.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
This moves the story forward. It is low-keyed which if we were reading in fewer settings, would give readers time to catch their breath. No suggestions.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2013
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This moves the story forward. It is low-keyed which if we were reading in fewer settings, would give readers time to catch their breath. No suggestions.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara,
This is penned well, the characters meshed well in this post as they try to figure out what's happening with Paige being stocked or watched by ghost and/or Walker.
Great job overall, it has the mystery just out of reach for the reader thus keeping me hooked within the plot.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2013
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Hi Barbara,
This is penned well, the characters meshed well in this post as they try to figure out what's happening with Paige being stocked or watched by ghost and/or Walker.
Great job overall, it has the mystery just out of reach for the reader thus keeping me hooked within the plot.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 24-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
