Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
Cash is taking control, starting with Morgan. It's only a matter of time until he moves in on Paige. Yep, won't be long now!
Good chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Hi Barb,
Cash is taking control, starting with Morgan. It's only a matter of time until he moves in on Paige. Yep, won't be long now!
Good chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you for following my story. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sankey
I love your book. This is very interesting. Have to find where we can buy a copy I know my wife would enjoy reading this creepy and all as it is hehe. Good work again. Have tyo zap Dr Walker Grrrr. No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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I love your book. This is very interesting. Have to find where we can buy a copy I know my wife would enjoy reading this creepy and all as it is hehe. Good work again. Have tyo zap Dr Walker Grrrr. No Spags.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Thank you for being such a great fan.
Comment from RJFunston
Good morning,
I can see why you writing is 'All time best', this post was awesome. You are able to pull the reader in, and the characters full of life. This is a great example of how to write.
Great job!
Take care,
Robert
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Good morning,
I can see why you writing is 'All time best', this post was awesome. You are able to pull the reader in, and the characters full of life. This is a great example of how to write.
Great job!
Take care,
Robert
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good post that read well because of fine details it contained that guided a reader along the page. Good characterization and the ovrall effect is obvious. Nice one.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Good post that read well because of fine details it contained that guided a reader along the page. Good characterization and the ovrall effect is obvious. Nice one.
ola thomas
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cantrhymetoogood
Dialog was interesting and fun! I enjoyed it and look forward to more.
"Because you're one good lookin' Northerner with a lot of money. We don't see too many of them in these parts." Billy Joe shook his head. <<< This was especially nice and I paused and thought it clever with a wonderful country flavor
A few moments later Morgan ran up to Paige with Cash following behind. "He did what he needed to." The puppy stood on his hind legs and tried to crawl up on the couch. "I'll help, little guy. It won't be long before you can do it yourself." He lifted the pup. <<< This was a great visual and I want to help the pup myself... Have a nice day....Robert
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Dialog was interesting and fun! I enjoyed it and look forward to more.
"Because you're one good lookin' Northerner with a lot of money. We don't see too many of them in these parts." Billy Joe shook his head. <<< This was especially nice and I paused and thought it clever with a wonderful country flavor
A few moments later Morgan ran up to Paige with Cash following behind. "He did what he needed to." The puppy stood on his hind legs and tried to crawl up on the couch. "I'll help, little guy. It won't be long before you can do it yourself." He lifted the pup. <<< This was a great visual and I want to help the pup myself... Have a nice day....Robert
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from chasennov
'Chapter 18 part 4.' Well congratulations on being halfway finished with the novel. It is an awesome task to write anything at all especially a novel. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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'Chapter 18 part 4.' Well congratulations on being halfway finished with the novel. It is an awesome task to write anything at all especially a novel. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I'm new on this site and haven't read any of this story yet. I have macular degeneration so I usually stick to the short poem. Janie siad you would be a good book if I read a longer piece. This sounds very interesting. I am from around Charleston, SC. I'm 86 years old. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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I'm new on this site and haven't read any of this story yet. I have macular degeneration so I usually stick to the short poem. Janie siad you would be a good book if I read a longer piece. This sounds very interesting. I am from around Charleston, SC. I'm 86 years old. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. We lived in a small rural town outside of Columbia SC for about three years. Welcome.
Comment from beccabootie123
are these true chapters for a book to be published. or a book of chapters you developed for this site. either way I am enjoying the story. written and formatted well the picture adds interest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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are these true chapters for a book to be published. or a book of chapters you developed for this site. either way I am enjoying the story. written and formatted well the picture adds interest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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I set them up to post. The true chapters are much longer. That's why I post as Chapter 18 part 4. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MelReyn
This is the first I have ever read any of your work. I'm at a disadvantage here, since I'm starting at chapter 34. I have to be honest here, this segment does not stand on it's own. But you break your chapters up into parts, so it makes sense that I would be lost.
I'm reading a book on self editing, and it has two whole chapters dedicated to dialogue. You do good with it, though I would caution you to watch out for using too many beats. (Description of what the character does.) It takes focus from what the characters are saying. I'm guilty of that one. ;)
I wish I had a better clue of what's happening so that I could better comment. (I can hear you yelling at your screen... then read the rest of my book already!)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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This is the first I have ever read any of your work. I'm at a disadvantage here, since I'm starting at chapter 34. I have to be honest here, this segment does not stand on it's own. But you break your chapters up into parts, so it makes sense that I would be lost.
I'm reading a book on self editing, and it has two whole chapters dedicated to dialogue. You do good with it, though I would caution you to watch out for using too many beats. (Description of what the character does.) It takes focus from what the characters are saying. I'm guilty of that one. ;)
I wish I had a better clue of what's happening so that I could better comment. (I can hear you yelling at your screen... then read the rest of my book already!)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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It would never stand as a stand alone. I never once yelled at screen for you to read the the book, because you recognize many of the issues would be solved if you did. I do at the yell at the screen when people make commons without realizing that there's an entire novel that goes with the post. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Halfway, already? You do fast work. A great chapter and it has held my interest throughout. Great work and I look forward to the rest!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Halfway, already? You do fast work. A great chapter and it has held my interest throughout. Great work and I look forward to the rest!!! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
