Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Chapter 8, part 3"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
56 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Duh! That Dr. Walker is a walking time bomb. He's up to no good. He reminds me of the old master who would treat his slaves with contempt, but when he wanted a good poke, he'd sweet talk 'em. Ohhhh, I don't like him.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('^')
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Duh! That Dr. Walker is a walking time bomb. He's up to no good. He reminds me of the old master who would treat his slaves with contempt, but when he wanted a good poke, he'd sweet talk 'em. Ohhhh, I don't like him.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('^')
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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You are right not to like him. More will come out about his family. Thank you.
Comment from Sankey
Yes I think he is spying on her. Wonder what sort of a college they are running. I reckon they are down on her for being a Yankee Oh me! Really putting the cat amongst the pigeons in here mate. Good reading. No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Yes I think he is spying on her. Wonder what sort of a college they are running. I reckon they are down on her for being a Yankee Oh me! Really putting the cat amongst the pigeons in here mate. Good reading. No Spags.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Very good chapter which held my interest from beginning to end. Amazing to believe that racism still exists in America. I shall have to read your other chapters to catch up- Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Betty
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Very good chapter which held my interest from beginning to end. Amazing to believe that racism still exists in America. I shall have to read your other chapters to catch up- Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Betty
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kashmayank
I havent read all the chapters but this looks like a nice read a good flow was there and was simple to read length was good all the best
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I havent read all the chapters but this looks like a nice read a good flow was there and was simple to read length was good all the best
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
I've awarded you a six for this one because you
took care to point out two very important issues:
1) although segregation should no longer be an
issue in 2013, it still is; and
2) giving Dwayne Walker too much negative attention
on Nala's behalf will likely cause a horrible back-
lash on her family.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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barbara:
I've awarded you a six for this one because you
took care to point out two very important issues:
1) although segregation should no longer be an
issue in 2013, it still is; and
2) giving Dwayne Walker too much negative attention
on Nala's behalf will likely cause a horrible back-
lash on her family.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from prayingpoet
Nice flow and content, good word pictures about Cash, Paige, and Nala. The background setting was well described. So I guess now we wait for the answer about: "Do you think he's spying on me?"
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Nice flow and content, good word pictures about Cash, Paige, and Nala. The background setting was well described. So I guess now we wait for the answer about: "Do you think he's spying on me?"
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Axiom Gray
This story seems like it's really going somewhere. I like the dialogue, and it feels very organic. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This story seems like it's really going somewhere. I like the dialogue, and it feels very organic. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. While I haven't kept up with this book, it was easy to follow. As usual it is very well written. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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This is an interesting piece. While I haven't kept up with this book, it was easy to follow. As usual it is very well written. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
Dr Walker gave me the creeps from the start, and it seems my suspicions of him were correct. Poor Nala. I hope Cash and Billy Joe can handle Dr Walker without bring any harm to Nala or her family. You've written this scene very well, and I felt Cash, Billy Joe and Paige's outrage over the situation.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Dr Walker gave me the creeps from the start, and it seems my suspicions of him were correct. Poor Nala. I hope Cash and Billy Joe can handle Dr Walker without bring any harm to Nala or her family. You've written this scene very well, and I felt Cash, Billy Joe and Paige's outrage over the situation.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from unimatrix001
I knew Walker was swine, so racist doesn't really surprise me, I just didn't see it coming. Well played. Need to clean up the punctuation. You are usually much better.
"I think you could use some ice tea[.]" - not a question
The Washington family got burned out of their house[,] and the baby girl died - compound sentence
His eyes lit up[,] and he grinned. - compound sentence
Remember what you did to the wide receivers' coach[?] He kept bad mouthing your running back[,] because he was black[.] - you got the punctuation backwards
I asked how he knew[,] and he said somebody at the hospital told him. - compound sentence
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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I knew Walker was swine, so racist doesn't really surprise me, I just didn't see it coming. Well played. Need to clean up the punctuation. You are usually much better.
"I think you could use some ice tea[.]" - not a question
The Washington family got burned out of their house[,] and the baby girl died - compound sentence
His eyes lit up[,] and he grinned. - compound sentence
Remember what you did to the wide receivers' coach[?] He kept bad mouthing your running back[,] because he was black[.] - you got the punctuation backwards
I asked how he knew[,] and he said somebody at the hospital told him. - compound sentence
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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It took me awhile to answer your review because I needed time to make the corrections. I guess I fell asleep during the editing. Sorry. Thank you for catching them.
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Your writing is very good, but we all make mistakes sometimes.
