Savannah Love
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Comment from ebeta
had to go back a few chapters and scan to get a gist of what's going on. This is turning into an interesting read. You have done a great job intermingling dialgue and description. well done!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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had to go back a few chapters and scan to get a gist of what's going on. This is turning into an interesting read. You have done a great job intermingling dialgue and description. well done!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Interest questions were asked in this chapter. And Cash's attitude sort of atypical when one does not believe something. I enjoyed.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Interest questions were asked in this chapter. And Cash's attitude sort of atypical when one does not believe something. I enjoyed.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
I like how each post teases with only a little bit of information. It keeps the reader in suspense. I couldn't help laughing with the line: "I want to know who's Ceres and what in hell's bells is a allegory?"
The subtle humour thrown in makes in an even more engaging story.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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I like how each post teases with only a little bit of information. It keeps the reader in suspense. I couldn't help laughing with the line: "I want to know who's Ceres and what in hell's bells is a allegory?"
The subtle humour thrown in makes in an even more engaging story.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi barbara,
This chapter brings several questions to my mind.
What is Paige to discover in reading the rest of the history?
What will it take to make Cash a believer?
And you've ended this chapter perfectly. Why is Nala acting the way she is? I can't wait to discover the answers. I will look forward to your next chapter.
Your chapter is interesting and clearly written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Hi barbara,
This chapter brings several questions to my mind.
What is Paige to discover in reading the rest of the history?
What will it take to make Cash a believer?
And you've ended this chapter perfectly. Why is Nala acting the way she is? I can't wait to discover the answers. I will look forward to your next chapter.
Your chapter is interesting and clearly written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I like the way you use the dialogue to give
information - something I try to do myself.
I hope Paige's friends won't desert her. Nala seems
angry about something. I wonder if something will
happen to change Cash's mind about believing in ghosts.
A great chapter, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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I like the way you use the dialogue to give
information - something I try to do myself.
I hope Paige's friends won't desert her. Nala seems
angry about something. I wonder if something will
happen to change Cash's mind about believing in ghosts.
A great chapter, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
One thing I really enjoy in this story is the dialogues. They give us, the readers a lot of information about the story. Right now, there seem to be more questions than answers to all the things that are happening in this wonderful chapter.
GREAT JOB Barbara!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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One thing I really enjoy in this story is the dialogues. They give us, the readers a lot of information about the story. Right now, there seem to be more questions than answers to all the things that are happening in this wonderful chapter.
GREAT JOB Barbara!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
I am going to follow this book. Of course, the five dollar bill is real (I've seen a lot of counterfeit Confederate money in my time), and Nala's attitude seems out of date.
I thoroughly enjoyed this read.
Dave
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Barbara,
I am going to follow this book. Of course, the five dollar bill is real (I've seen a lot of counterfeit Confederate money in my time), and Nala's attitude seems out of date.
I thoroughly enjoyed this read.
Dave
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. We will find out later what problem Nala has, but prejudism alive and well with some people. Thank you for staying with me.
Comment from fictionwriter
Poor Paige, it seems like there is an undercurrent of distrust beginning to form. I hope that her friends don't desert her. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Poor Paige, it seems like there is an undercurrent of distrust beginning to form. I hope that her friends don't desert her. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
Paige believes in ghosts even though Cash doesn't. She feels she knows the ghost's name and why he showed up to help her. Too bad she can't convince Cash. I wonder why Nala wouldn't eat with Paige, there must be something going on Paige knows nothing about. I am intrigued and can't wait for the next chapter. Well done. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Paige believes in ghosts even though Cash doesn't. She feels she knows the ghost's name and why he showed up to help her. Too bad she can't convince Cash. I wonder why Nala wouldn't eat with Paige, there must be something going on Paige knows nothing about. I am intrigued and can't wait for the next chapter. Well done. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Got a chuckle here:..."I have no idea how it got in your yard, but I'm sure a Confederate ghost didn't drop it." "Cash, has a point. Why would a ghost need money?" Billy Joe cocked his head.
Nice switch at the end. Unfortunately, blacks and whites in the South still have issues.
Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Got a chuckle here:..."I have no idea how it got in your yard, but I'm sure a Confederate ghost didn't drop it." "Cash, has a point. Why would a ghost need money?" Billy Joe cocked his head.
Nice switch at the end. Unfortunately, blacks and whites in the South still have issues.
Well done!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Many in the South still have issues.
