Savannah Love
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61 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
Whoohoo, nice end hook! Face paced chapter, and the plot thickens around Paige's ghost. Cash is scratching his head.
Fun read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('^')
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Hi Barb,
Whoohoo, nice end hook! Face paced chapter, and the plot thickens around Paige's ghost. Cash is scratching his head.
Fun read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('^')
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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I just got a note from my editor who said I used some words too often like glanced, smiled, continued, stood, grinned, and many more. Do you notice as you read???? I am curious.
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No, not obvious at all. You're doing good!
Comment from Sankey
Some interfering do gooder huh! I am familiar with a preacher from the "Saouth Ya'll" who is really down on Mixed marriages. He would get a shock at our church as we have several 'Mixed race" married couples. Sorry for getting on my soap box good work again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Some interfering do gooder huh! I am familiar with a preacher from the "Saouth Ya'll" who is really down on Mixed marriages. He would get a shock at our church as we have several 'Mixed race" married couples. Sorry for getting on my soap box good work again.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya,
thias is a great story that is coming along quite nicely. the tempo chaptere by chapter remains the same making the story as a whole easier to read and more natural. The dialogue here is great. a ghost needing money, the humour here is not forced and comes across as a (normal) conversation would go particularly when billy joe cant think of anything else but his stomach.
good job
whispers xx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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hiya,
thias is a great story that is coming along quite nicely. the tempo chaptere by chapter remains the same making the story as a whole easier to read and more natural. The dialogue here is great. a ghost needing money, the humour here is not forced and comes across as a (normal) conversation would go particularly when billy joe cant think of anything else but his stomach.
good job
whispers xx
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from beccabootie123
continues to delight me the way it is written and tells the story have read other chapters and each one brings to light something new. continue to write so I can continue to read.
well formatted but you are accomplished and know that thank you for this read
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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continues to delight me the way it is written and tells the story have read other chapters and each one brings to light something new. continue to write so I can continue to read.
well formatted but you are accomplished and know that thank you for this read
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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nothing kind about it, I like what I like and I like...adele
Comment from Enrique28
This sounds like a very interesting story nicely told through some excellent use of dialogue. Your characters appear vivid and real, and the chapter ends leaving the reader with a sense of anticipation for the next one.
Excellent!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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This sounds like a very interesting story nicely told through some excellent use of dialogue. Your characters appear vivid and real, and the chapter ends leaving the reader with a sense of anticipation for the next one.
Excellent!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mizzkris20
I've read a few of the previous chapters and I have to say that this one does them justice. I love the dialogue you uses and your choice of words. Your story is easy to follow and didn't find myself getting bored.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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I've read a few of the previous chapters and I have to say that this one does them justice. I love the dialogue you uses and your choice of words. Your story is easy to follow and didn't find myself getting bored.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kashmayank
I have read a few chapters of this work and it looks like an interesting read ,good thing is that it follows a good tempo all the best
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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I have read a few chapters of this work and it looks like an interesting read ,good thing is that it follows a good tempo all the best
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kcross11
what in hell's bells is a allegory?- ha ha, great line!
I've come in and out of your chapters, so I won't speak to anything with plot or characters, as I haven't invested the time to give a really detailed analysis.
However, from what I have read, I feel like your style is a very clean one. You don't have too many dialogue tags, it reads easy, your spelling is immaculate, and overall, no major eyebrow lifts from my end.
I wish I could give better feedback!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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what in hell's bells is a allegory?- ha ha, great line!
I've come in and out of your chapters, so I won't speak to anything with plot or characters, as I haven't invested the time to give a really detailed analysis.
However, from what I have read, I feel like your style is a very clean one. You don't have too many dialogue tags, it reads easy, your spelling is immaculate, and overall, no major eyebrow lifts from my end.
I wish I could give better feedback!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from LaDonnaCole
Very interesting story line...ghosts, north vs south, romance, mystery! WOW!
I also love how you gave us the accents without messing up the language and spelling. Nicely done.
I am hooked! Looking forward to more chapters!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Very interesting story line...ghosts, north vs south, romance, mystery! WOW!
I also love how you gave us the accents without messing up the language and spelling. Nicely done.
I am hooked! Looking forward to more chapters!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from stockoption
Good, quick, easy to follow dialogue. One suggestion to consider: when dialogue is intended to be humorous, maybe it is not necessary to say someone "chuckled" or "laughed" or whatever. If the writing is good (and yours is) there is no need to lead the reader by the hand.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Good, quick, easy to follow dialogue. One suggestion to consider: when dialogue is intended to be humorous, maybe it is not necessary to say someone "chuckled" or "laughed" or whatever. If the writing is good (and yours is) there is no need to lead the reader by the hand.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
