Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Chapter 7, Part 6"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara.
"I did find this and a heart carved on the tree with Bradley and Alice's name (on?) it.
As Cash and Billy Joe rushed (into?) the room, Paige was trying to stand.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara.
"I did find this and a heart carved on the tree with Bradley and Alice's name (on?) it.
As Cash and Billy Joe rushed (into?) the room, Paige was trying to stand.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I am glad Paige discovered the name of the ghost and wonder if it is right. Who ever it was he treated Paige with concern with no intention of harming her. Since Billy Joe and Cash didn't find another set of prints it stands to reason that someone not from this earth carried her to the house. I can't wit to see what happens next! Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Hi Barbara,
I am glad Paige discovered the name of the ghost and wonder if it is right. Who ever it was he treated Paige with concern with no intention of harming her. Since Billy Joe and Cash didn't find another set of prints it stands to reason that someone not from this earth carried her to the house. I can't wit to see what happens next! Blessings, chey
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TonyD
Quite intriguing. Paige's discovery about Barley's ghost makes the story even more interesting. Now I will have to go back and read the previous chapters.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Quite intriguing. Paige's discovery about Barley's ghost makes the story even more interesting. Now I will have to go back and read the previous chapters.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from josieg521
There is so much going on in this one section that I am totally amazed, especially since it is chapter 30! Can't wait to read the whole thing. Romance, mystery, history! Your writing is smooth and flows evenly. Your sense of southern charm and respect shows quietly and forcefully. Your characters show strength. I enjoyed it very much!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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There is so much going on in this one section that I am totally amazed, especially since it is chapter 30! Can't wait to read the whole thing. Romance, mystery, history! Your writing is smooth and flows evenly. Your sense of southern charm and respect shows quietly and forcefully. Your characters show strength. I enjoyed it very much!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
You are the master of building tension Well written. Being a Southerner, I enjoyed the friendly banter. Some things change though .. I much prefer the fruit for breakfast now. Bill
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You are the master of building tension Well written. Being a Southerner, I enjoyed the friendly banter. Some things change though .. I much prefer the fruit for breakfast now. Bill
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from PoeticXscape
The story was good. Easy to visualise it. The only problem I had personally was that the event s that happened were too close together. They find the scrunchy then the bit of paper seconds later? maybe put some more dialouge or story inbetween to give more depth.
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The story was good. Easy to visualise it. The only problem I had personally was that the event s that happened were too close together. They find the scrunchy then the bit of paper seconds later? maybe put some more dialouge or story inbetween to give more depth.
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Thank you
Comment from fictionwriter
I'm so excited that she is discovering the past and who the ghost could possibly be, but she wouldn't know for sure just because someone else saw him. She'd have to see him then match his face to a picture. Well done.
that sad(-) puppy(-) dog(-) eye(-) look on me
Morgan let out a happy yap and ran toward Paige, wagging his tail. (paragraph break here)
Billy Joe picked up the pup and lo
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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I'm so excited that she is discovering the past and who the ghost could possibly be, but she wouldn't know for sure just because someone else saw him. She'd have to see him then match his face to a picture. Well done.
that sad(-) puppy(-) dog(-) eye(-) look on me
Morgan let out a happy yap and ran toward Paige, wagging his tail. (paragraph break here)
Billy Joe picked up the pup and lo
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the suggestions. I appreciate it.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I enjoyed reading this story. The earlier part of the post was adventurous and suspenseful. The last part was a bit strange, and for me, another kind of suspense. kudos
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I enjoyed reading this story. The earlier part of the post was adventurous and suspenseful. The last part was a bit strange, and for me, another kind of suspense. kudos
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
It's good you found a picture of an oak in the south. The Oak in my back yard doesn't have all that Spanish Moss hangin' on it. Damn good job with raising questions, Barbarathe. Just what the story needs, a ghost and a hundred fifty year old piece of currency. I didn't see a thing to suggest.
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It's good you found a picture of an oak in the south. The Oak in my back yard doesn't have all that Spanish Moss hangin' on it. Damn good job with raising questions, Barbarathe. Just what the story needs, a ghost and a hundred fifty year old piece of currency. I didn't see a thing to suggest.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Selina Stambi
That's a very interesting cliff hanger that you've ended on.
How nicely this tale is developing - very readable and fast-paced.
Looking forward to the next posting.
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That's a very interesting cliff hanger that you've ended on.
How nicely this tale is developing - very readable and fast-paced.
Looking forward to the next posting.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
