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Savannah Love

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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A lot going on in this chapter. And Paige is smiling again. A good sign - a very good sign.

I really like Billy Joe. I'm a sucker for anyone with an accent.

Another great chapter, my friend.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')



 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
    Billy Joe is great too. Thank you so much!!
Comment from Sankey
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Yippeee! Getting more exciting every chapter.
Good stuff. I am enjoying this heaps. Very well written and spag free which is even better, Thanks a lot.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
reply by Sankey on 14-Dec-2013
    On some of my reviews I have asked questions can see a bit of cut and paste on your answers hehe no worries do me a favour and check the questions and answer as you have ti9me thanks.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
    I read all of them and did answer the questions.
reply by Sankey on 15-Dec-2013
    Ok I will go back and look sorry.
Comment from justmarly
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swelling will go down and the faster you can get your cast."
My sakes is that Bradley really a ghost? wow it will be fun to find out. Interesting story. MJ

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013

reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Thank you for continuing to follow my novel.
reply by justmarly on 18-Jun-2013
    I'm sorry for making a mistake and correct it wrong. Wow Thank you. Marly
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    no problem.
Comment from Sasha
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We not only know it was a ghost, we know his name. Great chapter filled with fun clever banter...just the stuff I like. I am off to read the next chapter.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2013
    I appreciate your review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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This is very well written and interesting. I didn't see any errors and from the looks of your ribbons a lot of other people like it to. I can't offer any suggestions on how to improve, don't think it needs it.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from donaldww
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Excellent post and research into the mysterious circumstances of how Paige got back in the house without any footprints in the mud.

"Would you mind if I borrowed your computer for some research?"
(I know that you are taking care with your dialect and associated grammar. But I'm wondering if 'borrow', present tense, wouldn't sound better in this case.)

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
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A Southern gentleman is a Southern gentleman, even if he is dead. So must have been Bradley Bookman, or was he once again helping his beloved Alice? Great read.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
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I'm so glad Bradley and Alice have returned to the story. I had a feeling the ghost might have been Bradley. The pacing of your story is done very well, and I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from muezza56
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an interesting and lively story. with good and likeable characters, including the puppy! and then the discovery thatPaiges ghost has a name "Bradley Bookmam" , the plot thickens! and leaves me wanting to know more

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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now get your butt down. (need closing quotes)

Morgan let out a happy yap and ran toward Paige, wagging his
Billy Joe picked up the pup and looked at his face
(need a space between paragraph)

I like youu oak tree

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.