Savannah Love
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Comment from Chanphy
This is very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I like the suspense you build around the story. I had started imagining them spending the entire night out in that horrible weather, but was relieved when someone took her indoors. I can't wait to find out who did. Great story.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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This is very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I like the suspense you build around the story. I had started imagining them spending the entire night out in that horrible weather, but was relieved when someone took her indoors. I can't wait to find out who did. Great story.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the kidn review.
Comment from c_lucas
Puppies do have their drawbacks. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. It looks like Paige has a friend that will cause her trouble.
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Puppies do have their drawbacks. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. It looks like Paige has a friend that will cause her trouble.
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Most puppies do cause problems, but they are worth it. Thank youf or the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
He stopped by the pet shop, before - drop the comma
I sure that was difficult - I'm sure
Excellent natural-sounding dialogue between Paige and Cash - nice playfulness
jerk, yelp, tangle - good use of high-impact verbs to add life and power to action scenes
Lightening crashed - Lightning
That sure builds suspense when the person who helped her turns out NOT to be Cash :-) Brooke
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He stopped by the pet shop, before - drop the comma
I sure that was difficult - I'm sure
Excellent natural-sounding dialogue between Paige and Cash - nice playfulness
jerk, yelp, tangle - good use of high-impact verbs to add life and power to action scenes
Lightening crashed - Lightning
That sure builds suspense when the person who helped her turns out NOT to be Cash :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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I read over this a billion times, a slight exaggerantion, but close and still didn't get all the errors, DARN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the eagle eye.
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a billion? that is slight exaggeration? I think you've been hanging around fibbing little kids too long! LOL :-)
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One of my son's tells me I need to move to a higher grade, that I'm starting to think like them. I actually think that's wonderful. LOL
