Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent! I thought this story was so suspenseful. As always the author gave the details without going on and on.
Once I started reading it - I couldn't stop. And the
end left me in limbo. Looking forward to Chapter 27!
Thank you.......harmony13

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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Comment from rheabug

Excellent

Once again I praise you on you writing abilities. This was an interesting write and couldn't have been told better. Your choice of the art work was genius. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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Comment from Shadow Pahn

Excellent

I have just returned to the site, so i am unfamiliar with your work.
As this chapter was listed, i read it first, which explains a bit of my confusion, but it compelled me to bookmark you and read the rest of your chapters as well.
Technically i have nothing to add other than that i enjoyed your piece.

Well done

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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Comment from LadyTreana

Excellent

I really enjoyed this writing and will be looking back at the other chapters. Very good story. I'm anxious to see who actually took her into the house.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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Comment from Mai Mai

Excellent

As usual, this piece is very well written. Your dialogue flows very naturally. I have missed several chapters so I have some catching up to do. Good job.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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Comment from Auroraboreal800

Excellent

I love how peaceful and normal seems life between Cash and Paige until the storm stared it, and every thing changes. You really know how to created good suspense...
GREAT JOB!! HAPPY NEW YEAR BARBARA!!
:)

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013

Thank you for the kind review. I hope you have a Blessed New Year.

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

An excutubg scene in the storm, Barbara, but I don't understand the Cash's last line. It seems like a response to the question.

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Comment from smudge

Excellent

Excellent well written chapter. As professionally written as always but with that little surprise at the end to hook the reader. Well presented.

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Comment from Dave M

Exceptional

Barbara,

Now that I've given you two six stars in five minutes, it'll be a month before I give you any others. Yet, this chapter was a genuine sixer. Of course, the ghost rescued Paige and Morgan. I still remember that dream I had a month ago...

I enjoyed this read and have one comment:

"Don't forget tomorrow evening Mom's frying up those catfish." I'd write this as, ""Don't forget tomorrow evening. Mom's gonna fry up those catfish."

Dave

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013

Thank you for the kind review. So true about that last line.

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Oh, wow! Now you've got me so intrigued! Who was that then, if not Cash? Well, whoever it was, he means her no harm. He took care of her.

Love the scene with the storm. Well done. Glad the puppy is okay too - I'm a sucker for animals.

Well done.

Av

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013

Thank you for the kind review. I think everybody should have pets. I have 4.