Savannah Love
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
I loved fishing, but not hunting. I could fell in this chapter, how each character is growing, specially in Cash and Peige's relationship. Even the dog, plying his parts.
A very good chapter, as always!
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas Barbara!
:)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2012
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I loved fishing, but not hunting. I could fell in this chapter, how each character is growing, specially in Cash and Peige's relationship. Even the dog, plying his parts.
A very good chapter, as always!
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 26-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope you had a very nice Holiday and a blessed New Year.
Comment from Eric Corsten
This is just really great back and forth dialog..
"A dog's a lot of responsibility. He's not going to stay cute and cuddly." Cash raised him up and checked. "He's a male and looks like a Labrador Retriever. He could get up to eighty pounds. Are you sure you don't want to find a nice home for him?"
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2012
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This is just really great back and forth dialog..
"A dog's a lot of responsibility. He's not going to stay cute and cuddly." Cash raised him up and checked. "He's a male and looks like a Labrador Retriever. He could get up to eighty pounds. Are you sure you don't want to find a nice home for him?"
Comment Written 26-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope you had a very nice Holiday and a blessed New Year.
Comment from kintesiegel
I love dogs and love the happy ending of your story so I am a contented camper tonight. You succeeded in adding conflict and drama to the plot so it held interest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2012
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I love dogs and love the happy ending of your story so I am a contented camper tonight. You succeeded in adding conflict and drama to the plot so it held interest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope you had a very nice Holiday and a blessed New Year.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
A cute and very pleasant read. Puppies are always a nice addition. [And kittens] Because they are cute and cuddly. I like the caring touch this adds to the book.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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A cute and very pleasant read. Puppies are always a nice addition. [And kittens] Because they are cute and cuddly. I like the caring touch this adds to the book.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!!
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there Barbara. It is Christmas morning and cold as heck here sothis chapter seemed to warm me up. The puppy was a nice twist that I wasn't expecting. Then there is the ATF. Good twists. I hope your Christmas has been cheerful
Bear
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Hello there Barbara. It is Christmas morning and cold as heck here sothis chapter seemed to warm me up. The puppy was a nice twist that I wasn't expecting. Then there is the ATF. Good twists. I hope your Christmas has been cheerful
Bear
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!! Send some cold weather and snow my direction, please.
Comment from Jacq77
I thought this was written well, and I am glad Paige decided to keep the puppy. It's a good sign when I want to know what this story is about, and find out what happens next. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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I thought this was written well, and I am glad Paige decided to keep the puppy. It's a good sign when I want to know what this story is about, and find out what happens next. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A great addition to Paige's life. I'm sure Morgan will be a big help on the ghost hunt to come. Merry Christmas, Barbara! :) nancy
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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A great addition to Paige's life. I'm sure Morgan will be a big help on the ghost hunt to come. Merry Christmas, Barbara! :) nancy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!!
Comment from EMB
Labs are great dogs for families, but they are without a doubt the dumbest dogs man has ever created. (Most domesticated dog breeds are man-made nowadays.) I'm surprised the ATF men didn't seem too worried for civilian safety. Moonshiners are kind of like drug dealers, ya know? Packing guns and ready to defend their illegal business, but these men seem kind of lighthearted about the whole thing.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Labs are great dogs for families, but they are without a doubt the dumbest dogs man has ever created. (Most domesticated dog breeds are man-made nowadays.) I'm surprised the ATF men didn't seem too worried for civilian safety. Moonshiners are kind of like drug dealers, ya know? Packing guns and ready to defend their illegal business, but these men seem kind of lighthearted about the whole thing.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!! Actually Labs are highly intelligent and extremely trainable. That's why they are service dogs and drug dogs.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
I enjoyed this chapter, partly because my wife is a dedicated dog lover. She volunteers once a week at the local Humane Society shelter, and we have two dogs at home.
It looks like Paige has a new friend, and I wonder what the ghost will think of a dog that lives indoors. I also have a pair of comments:
"He appeared to be injured. I couldn't leave him out here by himself." This is an interesting touch. The dog's gender has not been identified, and both Cash and the revenuers call the critter an "it." Paige sounds like a dog lover.
"Let me see this little guy." Paige handed Cash the dog. You have Cash talking, but Paige does the action. That threw me when I first read it. Why not, "Let me see this little guy." Cash reached for the dog.
Dave
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Barbara,
I enjoyed this chapter, partly because my wife is a dedicated dog lover. She volunteers once a week at the local Humane Society shelter, and we have two dogs at home.
It looks like Paige has a new friend, and I wonder what the ghost will think of a dog that lives indoors. I also have a pair of comments:
"He appeared to be injured. I couldn't leave him out here by himself." This is an interesting touch. The dog's gender has not been identified, and both Cash and the revenuers call the critter an "it." Paige sounds like a dog lover.
"Let me see this little guy." Paige handed Cash the dog. You have Cash talking, but Paige does the action. That threw me when I first read it. Why not, "Let me see this little guy." Cash reached for the dog.
Dave
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!! I'm sure you already know I'm a huge animal lover.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Oh, how fabulous! Great chapter, Barbara. 'Course, I've a soft spot for puppy-dogs, and how strange that you named your dog Morgan and I named my shepherd Morgan.
Great flow, good dialogue and excellent descriptions.
Well done indeed.
Av
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Oh, how fabulous! Great chapter, Barbara. 'Course, I've a soft spot for puppy-dogs, and how strange that you named your dog Morgan and I named my shepherd Morgan.
Great flow, good dialogue and excellent descriptions.
Well done indeed.
Av
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year!!!!
