Savannah Love
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Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
You certainly have drawn this chapter to an interesting close with Paige digging in her heels and refusing to move when ordered to do so.
There is nothing to suggest changing and now, of curse, I eagerly await the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
You certainly have drawn this chapter to an interesting close with Paige digging in her heels and refusing to move when ordered to do so.
There is nothing to suggest changing and now, of curse, I eagerly await the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
You got me good with this one. My heart was pounding while Cash tried to figure out what happened to her. I thought it was a brilliant creative twist had me enjoying and laughing at it as I finished my reading. Wow....Exceptional lead in for the readers. This had some fun and witty moments.
I loved the last two lines. They had me laughing again I could so see her with hands on hips and his eyes rolling.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Holidays to you and yours.
Maureen
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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You got me good with this one. My heart was pounding while Cash tried to figure out what happened to her. I thought it was a brilliant creative twist had me enjoying and laughing at it as I finished my reading. Wow....Exceptional lead in for the readers. This had some fun and witty moments.
I loved the last two lines. They had me laughing again I could so see her with hands on hips and his eyes rolling.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Holidays to you and yours.
Maureen
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
This is another interesting and engaging chapter. It is very well written, and it caught my attention in the beginning. Paige's encounter with the ATF agents is entertaining. It is beginning to appear that trouble follows her. I enjoyed the read and look forward to the next one.
Godspeed,
Curtis
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Barbara,
This is another interesting and engaging chapter. It is very well written, and it caught my attention in the beginning. Paige's encounter with the ATF agents is entertaining. It is beginning to appear that trouble follows her. I enjoyed the read and look forward to the next one.
Godspeed,
Curtis
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
You had me all the way with this one, barbara. An interesting dilemma for Cash, does he go looking for her and find her in a compromised position? He did and it wasn't what he expected. Great little twist including the menacing revenuers. Excellent chapter, as always. :0) Bev
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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You had me all the way with this one, barbara. An interesting dilemma for Cash, does he go looking for her and find her in a compromised position? He did and it wasn't what he expected. Great little twist including the menacing revenuers. Excellent chapter, as always. :0) Bev
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome, barbara.
Comment from judiverse
This was funny. Paige's trip into the woods to "use the facilities" gets her questioned by ATF guys. Cash seems disgusted with Paige's lack of appreciation for the finer things nature has to offer, and says she high maintenance, but it doesn't seem too much to expect a proper bathroom. The ATF search for a moonshining operation is funny. Obviously Paige can be of no help, but it makes for an interesting day. judi
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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This was funny. Paige's trip into the woods to "use the facilities" gets her questioned by ATF guys. Cash seems disgusted with Paige's lack of appreciation for the finer things nature has to offer, and says she high maintenance, but it doesn't seem too much to expect a proper bathroom. The ATF search for a moonshining operation is funny. Obviously Paige can be of no help, but it makes for an interesting day. judi
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're so welcome. Very enjoyable. judi
Comment from elgone
Typical revenuers! Guilty until proven innocent. LOL Like they couldn't tell from Paige's accent. It's a humorous situation making for an enjoyable read that was easy to picture in mind.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Typical revenuers! Guilty until proven innocent. LOL Like they couldn't tell from Paige's accent. It's a humorous situation making for an enjoyable read that was easy to picture in mind.
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from EMB
Yeah, I don't get how that happens either, but my wife seems to always have to go once we actually GET to the movie theaters, so Paige is very believable. Must be a girl thing. LOL And I'm wondering whether the ATF guys watched her use the bathroom before approaching her with their moonshining questions.
Now this was a better chapter for readers like me. :)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Yeah, I don't get how that happens either, but my wife seems to always have to go once we actually GET to the movie theaters, so Paige is very believable. Must be a girl thing. LOL And I'm wondering whether the ATF guys watched her use the bathroom before approaching her with their moonshining questions.
Now this was a better chapter for readers like me. :)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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I happen to be on a first name basis with every bathroom in TX. I am glad you liked it better. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Hi Barbara. It's been a long time since I found a typo. Read
the sentence below from your post:
In a small clearing, Cash saw two men wearing and navy blue windbreaker with yellow letters on the back indicating they were ATF.
Believe it should be ...two men wearing navy blue windbreakers with yellow letters....
Again, enjoyed.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Hi Barbara. It's been a long time since I found a typo. Read
the sentence below from your post:
In a small clearing, Cash saw two men wearing and navy blue windbreaker with yellow letters on the back indicating they were ATF.
Believe it should be ...two men wearing navy blue windbreakers with yellow letters....
Again, enjoyed.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help. No matter how much I edit, I still make mistakes.
Comment from Tithonus50
A really compelling and captivating read. I really like the idea of the story as well of the feel of it, which is credit to your writing. This is a very nice.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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A really compelling and captivating read. I really like the idea of the story as well of the feel of it, which is credit to your writing. This is a very nice.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
A Southern man and a poor misguided northern girl. If the Yanks had used a squad of northern girls, the war would have ended in no time. May the Lord have mercy on Cash's soul. Excellant write which held my attention through.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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A Southern man and a poor misguided northern girl. If the Yanks had used a squad of northern girls, the war would have ended in no time. May the Lord have mercy on Cash's soul. Excellant write which held my attention through.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. HUMMMM, I may have to sic an entire heard of Northern gals on you.
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A herd of Northern girls. Be still me heart. They will still be outnumbered by me charming ways. (LOL)
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I'm so glad humility isn't a problem with you.
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Humility is something that when you think you have it, you lost it.
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LOL
