Savannah Love
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60 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
Oh, this was a fun chapter, from start to finish. Too funny when Paige didn't know about the great outdoor privy!
When Jim and I were kids living in Ohio, we used to love to go to our neighbor's grandma's. We knew her as Mamma Kate, and we thought it was so much fun go to sleepovers at her house and use the 'outside necessary!' In the winter we'd use the 'inside chamber pot.' Whooohooo! It takes so little to entertain country kids.('-')
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Hi Barb,
Oh, this was a fun chapter, from start to finish. Too funny when Paige didn't know about the great outdoor privy!
When Jim and I were kids living in Ohio, we used to love to go to our neighbor's grandma's. We knew her as Mamma Kate, and we thought it was so much fun go to sleepovers at her house and use the 'outside necessary!' In the winter we'd use the 'inside chamber pot.' Whooohooo! It takes so little to entertain country kids.('-')
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Oh so true. I was in High School before one of my grandparents got indoor plumbing. I remember taking baths in huge metal tubs outside. You're great
Comment from Sankey
Drama on the way, huh. Some moonshine around the place. Not surprising I am guessing. Good work short as you said no spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Drama on the way, huh. Some moonshine around the place. Not surprising I am guessing. Good work short as you said no spags.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
This is a short, but eventful post. Who would expect to find revenuers in the bathroom? Paige has a lot to learn about the South. I hope she decides to cooperate with the ATF agents.
I noticed once more that Cash has a lot to learn about Yankee girls.
I have just one suggestion: The taller man knelt down on one knee in his direction and pointed [at him . ==> a Glock 27 at him.} {Awkward phrasing.}
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
This is a short, but eventful post. Who would expect to find revenuers in the bathroom? Paige has a lot to learn about the South. I hope she decides to cooperate with the ATF agents.
I noticed once more that Cash has a lot to learn about Yankee girls.
I have just one suggestion: The taller man knelt down on one knee in his direction and pointed [at him . ==> a Glock 27 at him.} {Awkward phrasing.}
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 04-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. I'll correct that area.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there Barbara
I have been away long enough. I have missed a lot of your chapters and will make them up. Cash and Paige are coming along nicely. This for me was clever and comical. WTG
Bear
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Hello there Barbara
I have been away long enough. I have missed a lot of your chapters and will make them up. Cash and Paige are coming along nicely. This for me was clever and comical. WTG
Bear
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I am hoping this novel has some funny aspects to it. I am glad it worked.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Barbara, you have a way of gripping the attention of readers with your your rendition. I enjoy reading your posts. I really like this.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Barbara, you have a way of gripping the attention of readers with your your rendition. I enjoy reading your posts. I really like this.
ola thomas
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Melissa Regester
I just found this work. The dialogue and imagery was so spot on, I started reading your previous chapters. Really enjoy this!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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I just found this work. The dialogue and imagery was so spot on, I started reading your previous chapters. Really enjoy this!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Oh, this brings back memories of when my son was small and we would go fishing. I got poison ivy on my behind from going in the woods. Well written chapter and so funny they thought Paige could take them to the still~Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Oh, this brings back memories of when my son was small and we would go fishing. I got poison ivy on my behind from going in the woods. Well written chapter and so funny they thought Paige could take them to the still~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I hadn't thought of poison ivy, great idea.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Ah ha! Revenooers! It's probably a good thing Paige got stopped. Moonshiners are known for booby-trapping the area around their stills much like marajuana growers do. These folks don't fool around. Well done, barbara. :) nancy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Ah ha! Revenooers! It's probably a good thing Paige got stopped. Moonshiners are known for booby-trapping the area around their stills much like marajuana growers do. These folks don't fool around. Well done, barbara. :) nancy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kashmayank
I havent read all the chapters so wont comment much but it looks like a good read the tempo is well maintained and that adds to appeal all the best
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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I havent read all the chapters so wont comment much but it looks like a good read the tempo is well maintained and that adds to appeal all the best
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
Come on, guys, - add commas for direct address
Love the dialogue - I have fun with the sparring between the two of them
Getting into trouble as a suspected moonshiner while trying to pee in the woods, what a fun way to spend the day LOL :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Come on, guys, - add commas for direct address
Love the dialogue - I have fun with the sparring between the two of them
Getting into trouble as a suspected moonshiner while trying to pee in the woods, what a fun way to spend the day LOL :-) Brooke
Comment Written 18-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you for catching that. I actually knew that one, just spaced out.
