Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
LOL.. Country livin' at it's best - Mother Nature's privy!! Poor Paige, she has a lot to learn. Hope she likes fishing, or she's in for a very long day.
Nice interaction between Mom and Chase, and Mom and Paige.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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LOL.. Country livin' at it's best - Mother Nature's privy!! Poor Paige, she has a lot to learn. Hope she likes fishing, or she's in for a very long day.
Nice interaction between Mom and Chase, and Mom and Paige.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sankey
hehe reminded me of John Grisham's painted House again when Luke's uncle and his bride from up North come visiting. She likes her indoor plumbing and Luke gives her heaps in the outhouse hehe. Good stuff again. The Northern girl is learing a lot huh. No Spags again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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hehe reminded me of John Grisham's painted House again when Luke's uncle and his bride from up North come visiting. She likes her indoor plumbing and Luke gives her heaps in the outhouse hehe. Good stuff again. The Northern girl is learing a lot huh. No Spags again.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Thomas Raine
Wonderfully written - I like how you're using a couple to show the contrasting lifestyles of South vs. North, and how as Paige learns more about Cash's world it provides friendly opportunities for good banter.
Dialogue felt natural, and the characters react well with each other. Not much conflict, but this is only part of a chapter, and I haven't read your prior posts (sorry!) so I'm not too familiar with what has already transpired, although I'd like to go back and catch up.
Very funny way to end this piece, with the bathroom in the woods joke. That's just how it is, Paige!
- TR
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Wonderfully written - I like how you're using a couple to show the contrasting lifestyles of South vs. North, and how as Paige learns more about Cash's world it provides friendly opportunities for good banter.
Dialogue felt natural, and the characters react well with each other. Not much conflict, but this is only part of a chapter, and I haven't read your prior posts (sorry!) so I'm not too familiar with what has already transpired, although I'd like to go back and catch up.
Very funny way to end this piece, with the bathroom in the woods joke. That's just how it is, Paige!
- TR
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Another great one to add to the list. Personally don't like onions in my hushpuppies, but oh well. Sounds like my kind of fishing, don't like salt water either. Nothing prettier than a moss covered live oak, don't have them where I live now, sad.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Another great one to add to the list. Personally don't like onions in my hushpuppies, but oh well. Sounds like my kind of fishing, don't like salt water either. Nothing prettier than a moss covered live oak, don't have them where I live now, sad.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll make sure your hushpuppies don't have onions in them. LOL
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbara,
Very nice, naturalistic dialogue and nice slow-moving Southern details and a "hush puppie" recipe to boot:) Very enjoyable--Ted
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Dear Barbara,
Very nice, naturalistic dialogue and nice slow-moving Southern details and a "hush puppie" recipe to boot:) Very enjoyable--Ted
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I expect to hear you made hushpuppies.
Comment from Janie King
Very interesting....I'm pretty much a city girl but my dad loved to fish so I have been fishing but he baited my hook...I read the last chapter but haven't had time to write the review. Mom's having a bad night with pain so I'm grabbing a few seconds to review. Good chapter. God bless.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Very interesting....I'm pretty much a city girl but my dad loved to fish so I have been fishing but he baited my hook...I read the last chapter but haven't had time to write the review. Mom's having a bad night with pain so I'm grabbing a few seconds to review. Good chapter. God bless.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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My prayers are with you and your mom.
Comment from EMB
Okay, so a scene with a Yank bumping into herself in a kitchen with no dishwasher, followed by the promising scene of a Yank trying to place bait on a hook. Pleasant conversation with Southern hospitality to boot. Still, you know me, Barbara. :) I'm thinking it reads like a setup for some serious storytelling. (What can I say, I'm a conflict addict.)
Still, great narration with believable dialogue.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Okay, so a scene with a Yank bumping into herself in a kitchen with no dishwasher, followed by the promising scene of a Yank trying to place bait on a hook. Pleasant conversation with Southern hospitality to boot. Still, you know me, Barbara. :) I'm thinking it reads like a setup for some serious storytelling. (What can I say, I'm a conflict addict.)
Still, great narration with believable dialogue.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you, One can't please everybody. LOL
Comment from irishauthorme
Good dialogue, and homespun narrative. I think you caught the flavor of the country down south, with the rutted dirt road, the small houses, and the close family ties. It will be interesting to see what happens at the old fishing hole.
Good work, irish
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Good dialogue, and homespun narrative. I think you caught the flavor of the country down south, with the rutted dirt road, the small houses, and the close family ties. It will be interesting to see what happens at the old fishing hole.
Good work, irish
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Adri7enne
"Cash opened the DRAW and put the batteries in his pocket." DRAWER???
Sounds like good people. Cash comes from a good family. Now they're off on a fishing adventure. What could be finer on a good summer day. Nice relationship you're developing, Barb.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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"Cash opened the DRAW and put the batteries in his pocket." DRAWER???
Sounds like good people. Cash comes from a good family. Now they're off on a fishing adventure. What could be finer on a good summer day. Nice relationship you're developing, Barb.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the catch. I can't believe I left off the ending. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from October21
Hiya!
Perhaps some longer paragraphs would have helped even it out a little. The dialogue between the characters was great. Nice job:)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Hiya!
Perhaps some longer paragraphs would have helped even it out a little. The dialogue between the characters was great. Nice job:)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
