Savannah Love
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Comment from Robin Gilmor
I enjoyed reading Savannah Love. I have not read the other chapters; however, I felt comfortable with the story line as read. You have a nice flow to your words as your characters speak so that the reader forgets he's reading and moves along smoothly with the dialogue. Your description of the characters and setting paints a clear picture for the reader. I really enjoyed it. At this time I can not comment on the plot, but I'm sure it will thicken, as they say! Robin
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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I enjoyed reading Savannah Love. I have not read the other chapters; however, I felt comfortable with the story line as read. You have a nice flow to your words as your characters speak so that the reader forgets he's reading and moves along smoothly with the dialogue. Your description of the characters and setting paints a clear picture for the reader. I really enjoyed it. At this time I can not comment on the plot, but I'm sure it will thicken, as they say! Robin
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Glad I got a 6 for this one, It takes a Southerner to understand that great sinners make great Christians, they know what they're talking about. Cool.
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Glad I got a 6 for this one, It takes a Southerner to understand that great sinners make great Christians, they know what they're talking about. Cool.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This chapter was very easy to read because the dialogues were simple and flowed naturally. I liked the religious flavours that spiced up the narrative. very well done
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This chapter was very easy to read because the dialogues were simple and flowed naturally. I liked the religious flavours that spiced up the narrative. very well done
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
You've written a fabulous chapter with Paige and Cash still at church.
We meet the Baptist Preacher Billy Joe. Paige mets Faye, Cash's mother. And we see them getting to know each other while Faye heats up her friend chicken alongside a peach cobbler.
Your dialogue is great.
Your characterization.is wonderful.
Your descriptive writing is excellent
I'd recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers,
Enjoy the six you deserve, my friend.
Please have a Happy Holidays,
Love ya,
Melissa.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Barbara,
You've written a fabulous chapter with Paige and Cash still at church.
We meet the Baptist Preacher Billy Joe. Paige mets Faye, Cash's mother. And we see them getting to know each other while Faye heats up her friend chicken alongside a peach cobbler.
Your dialogue is great.
Your characterization.is wonderful.
Your descriptive writing is excellent
I'd recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers,
Enjoy the six you deserve, my friend.
Please have a Happy Holidays,
Love ya,
Melissa.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
Comment from prayingpoet
Nice to see that Paige and Cash are getting along and their relationship is growing. Good flow to the story, interesting and easy to read and I personally like that.
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Nice to see that Paige and Cash are getting along and their relationship is growing. Good flow to the story, interesting and easy to read and I personally like that.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Flamingbush
Very good. I like the dialogue between characters, with just enough action and description to aid the flow.
"What could be more Christian than a reformed alcoholic boxer?" - very funny sounding, the way you put it, though I have known God to restore people in far worse shape than that. They say boxing damages the brain; I read about that one time. It doesn't surprise me.
Just one thing to watch for here: "There's some in the congregation that don't take to kindly too his former profession" - you need to switch the "to" and "too")
I like how you wrote this. Nice work.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Very good. I like the dialogue between characters, with just enough action and description to aid the flow.
"What could be more Christian than a reformed alcoholic boxer?" - very funny sounding, the way you put it, though I have known God to restore people in far worse shape than that. They say boxing damages the brain; I read about that one time. It doesn't surprise me.
Just one thing to watch for here: "There's some in the congregation that don't take to kindly too his former profession" - you need to switch the "to" and "too")
I like how you wrote this. Nice work.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Romance fiction! This author always give enough information without the chapter getting boring. Then I
become curious to read more. This chapter ends with
thoughts to ponder on......Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Excellent Romance fiction! This author always give enough information without the chapter getting boring. Then I
become curious to read more. This chapter ends with
thoughts to ponder on......Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from write hand blue
I haven't been able to read the other chapters. This is an interesting and enjoyable read. With good characterisations and a strong image of the south... Mel.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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I haven't been able to read the other chapters. This is an interesting and enjoyable read. With good characterisations and a strong image of the south... Mel.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
This really is an interesting story and easy to follow.
In this chapter, there is just one small change needed ..
* You have - who don't take to kindly too his former profession ... which should be - who don't take too kindly to his former profession ....
Cash and Paige certainly to be good friends.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
This really is an interesting story and easy to follow.
In this chapter, there is just one small change needed ..
* You have - who don't take to kindly too his former profession ... which should be - who don't take too kindly to his former profession ....
Cash and Paige certainly to be good friends.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MumEsGirl
Great work my friend. A solid feel of the deep south complete with long winded pastors shaking the church to the foundation.
For those like me who don't know, what exactly is peach cobbler, it sounds pretty good.
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Great work my friend. A solid feel of the deep south complete with long winded pastors shaking the church to the foundation.
For those like me who don't know, what exactly is peach cobbler, it sounds pretty good.
hugs
kate
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. Peach cobbler is really good, espcially with a little ice cream.
