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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Amandastory
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I enjoyed reading your story. Paige and Cash are both likeable characters. I like the dialogue between them, you can feel their relationship growing. Look forward to reading more chapters.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
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Taking her to church... that's mighty honorable and a good start to a relationship. I enjoyed the chapter as always and will be waiting on the next one.
Connie

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
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good intermixing of natural-sounding dialogue and non-verbal communication like chuckling and tilting her head and grinning - together they depict well the flirtatious behavior going on
I love the closing repartee the most - great comment about Southern men during the war. LOL Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excelent job wiritng this chapter where cash and paige talk on the way to church. i enjoyed reading this one. look forward to the next chapter

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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For a minute I thought she might be going fishing wearing stiletto sandals!! I can just see the congregation all having a good look when she walks in.

(")Are you ready?"

It's on the outside of town -- on the outside?
just on the outskirts of town (maybe) - just a thought

pea-pickin(') heart

and run (in) the other direction

Most enjoyable, Barbara - flowed beautifully and naturally
Margaret

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
    Thank you for your eagle eye and the review.
Comment from Rondeno
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The North-South thing sets up a little tension, and a great deal of humor. You have chosen well. Let's see how the romance develops ...

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
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Maybe "war" should be higher case. It's usually the only "war" Southerners talk about. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Very good job.

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 Comment Written 25-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
    I knew it was the only war in the Southern history books. LOL I thought about capitalizing it, but I figured I would take hits from my Nortern friends. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 25-Nov-2012
    It is not the only War in the South's history books. It the most Important one.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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