Savannah Love
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Comment from Stalking Wolf
Poor ol' Cash gotta take a pretty woman to his church in front of God, his mama, and everybody, Something every Southern boy would druther drink castor oil than do. I know, I'm from the South. LOL.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Poor ol' Cash gotta take a pretty woman to his church in front of God, his mama, and everybody, Something every Southern boy would druther drink castor oil than do. I know, I'm from the South. LOL.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Cash is no different. I don't know what he was thinking when he came up with this plan. I think he was thinking of the fastest way to get to fishing. Thank you for the kind review.
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The best laid plans of mice or men.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb I can say this was a real fun chapter to read about dressing up going to chruch especially in a "Dark blue metalliccar instead of a truck
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Hi Barb I can say this was a real fun chapter to read about dressing up going to chruch especially in a "Dark blue metalliccar instead of a truck
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
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You are welcome Barb.
Gert
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from AprilShower
Apparently, Cash does not feel comfortable going to church or is it that he thinks Paige will attract attention? Do Southerners still keep reminding Northerners about the Civil War and the other way around? Could be if these two get married, there will be another Civil War. LOL.
April
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Apparently, Cash does not feel comfortable going to church or is it that he thinks Paige will attract attention? Do Southerners still keep reminding Northerners about the Civil War and the other way around? Could be if these two get married, there will be another Civil War. LOL.
April
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Northerners aren't interested in war, but the Southerns, in many places, are still fighting the war. I was shocked when we moved to SC. They still believe the South will rise again. Every so often it still comes up that I am from the North. Thank you for the kind review.
You're welcome, Barbara. :o)
April
Comment from elgone
Their banter is fun, how Paige is trying to mock Southern talk. I think there is some of your experiences in this. I recall being reminded I was a Yankee nearly everyday I lived in Texas, for example.
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Their banter is fun, how Paige is trying to mock Southern talk. I think there is some of your experiences in this. I recall being reminded I was a Yankee nearly everyday I lived in Texas, for example.
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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I get reminded often that I'm a Yankee. I let them know I'm from Northern IL and the Mason Dixie line didn't go that far East, so I am a MidWesterner. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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I was in a bar in Austin with my roommate, who was a native Texan. We were sitting at the bar and ever so often there was a guy in a cowboy hat and boots a couple of stools down who would say something derogatory about Yankees. Examples: Damned Yankees come down here and take all the jobs. (Well if you were such a great worker, that wouldn't happen, now would it). I bit my tongue for a few beers. Then he let fly with another insult - I don't recall what it was. I turned toward him and said, "Look, I have more in common with the first Texans than you ever will have because I'm here as a matter of choice not an accident of birth."
And then my roommate grabbed me by the collar and suggested with leave just as the other guy's friend said, "Jeb, I think he just insulted you."
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Oh my, I guess ignorance is everywhere.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Okay, wow Paige didn't know Ole Scratch was another term for Devil. Even in DC we know that. She can't be that naive and believable. lol
run the other direction - run in.
hand on the small of Paige's back. on or at the small?
Yes, I'm going there - They need to kiss already. And not the granny peck on the cheek crap either. I'm so ready for the kiss.
I swear you are dragging this out on purpose. Bless your cotton picking heart. lol
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Okay, wow Paige didn't know Ole Scratch was another term for Devil. Even in DC we know that. She can't be that naive and believable. lol
run the other direction - run in.
hand on the small of Paige's back. on or at the small?
Yes, I'm going there - They need to kiss already. And not the granny peck on the cheek crap either. I'm so ready for the kiss.
I swear you are dragging this out on purpose. Bless your cotton picking heart. lol
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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I added that in, maybe I forgot to save. I will do that. I am dragging it out. LOL. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Paige is definitely a girly-girl. I often think of Southern women as being ultra feminine. And Cash is in over his head whether he knows it yet or not. Great chapter nicely furthering the relationship between Cash and Paige. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Paige is definitely a girly-girl. I often think of Southern women as being ultra feminine. And Cash is in over his head whether he knows it yet or not. Great chapter nicely furthering the relationship between Cash and Paige. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome, barbara.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara,
Loved the shoes:D Ok great post too, men would break their necks running in stilettos, we pros no how to do it well.
Lovely post, great dialogue and a sense of a normal reality in this one. As if I watched them from the couch. Great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Hi Barbara,
Loved the shoes:D Ok great post too, men would break their necks running in stilettos, we pros no how to do it well.
Lovely post, great dialogue and a sense of a normal reality in this one. As if I watched them from the couch. Great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Taffspride
A much more lighthearted chapter, that is, as usual well written. I really like your description of Paige's "going to church" clothes, and Cash's reaction to them. "She'll stick out like a sore thumb in that dress. At least the sweater covers most of her shoulders."
The only spot that slowed me down a little, was:
"Are you sure you don't want to turn and run the other direction?"
Somehow I could hear Cash saying that, but not Paige, I suspect she would say "in the other direction."
Just MHO
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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A much more lighthearted chapter, that is, as usual well written. I really like your description of Paige's "going to church" clothes, and Cash's reaction to them. "She'll stick out like a sore thumb in that dress. At least the sweater covers most of her shoulders."
The only spot that slowed me down a little, was:
"Are you sure you don't want to turn and run the other direction?"
Somehow I could hear Cash saying that, but not Paige, I suspect she would say "in the other direction."
Just MHO
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Someone else mentioned that. I had better change it. Thank you for your MHO. LOL
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You are so welcome Barbara, it was the only thing that "itched in an otherwise perfectly written chapter.
:) Ann
Comment from judiverse
Very interesting. You've kept the characters' behavior consistent. You're developing a great relationship between Paige and Cash. Sometimes her manner and dress style don't fit in with the Southern setting, but she seems to adapt. The atmosphere is great. You do give us the flavor of the South. Great comments about Paige wearing that coral sundress. Great job. judi
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Very interesting. You've kept the characters' behavior consistent. You're developing a great relationship between Paige and Cash. Sometimes her manner and dress style don't fit in with the Southern setting, but she seems to adapt. The atmosphere is great. You do give us the flavor of the South. Great comments about Paige wearing that coral sundress. Great job. judi
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are indeed welcome. A great story going. judi
Comment from Gungalo
This is wonderful girl. I guess if you're planning on going to church you might as well do it in style eh? Then what, fishing afterwards? I liked that you described so well what her clothes were. It sort of let's me get to know her quicker.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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This is wonderful girl. I guess if you're planning on going to church you might as well do it in style eh? Then what, fishing afterwards? I liked that you described so well what her clothes were. It sort of let's me get to know her quicker.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Smiles girl.
