Savannah Love
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Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
The banter between Cash and Paige is charming in this chapter with their plans of church and afterward fishing.
Your latest chapter is wonderfully written with colorful imagery.
Your characterization is excellent.
Your narrative is great.
I look forward to their integration during the reverends hail and brimstone sermon.
The aft work at the star of chapter is stunning,
I'd recommend your short chapter to other readers as a. "must@ read.
Keep on writing entertaning chapters.
Please have a fabulous week day at school
Love ya...Melissa.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Barbara,
The banter between Cash and Paige is charming in this chapter with their plans of church and afterward fishing.
Your latest chapter is wonderfully written with colorful imagery.
Your characterization is excellent.
Your narrative is great.
I look forward to their integration during the reverends hail and brimstone sermon.
The aft work at the star of chapter is stunning,
I'd recommend your short chapter to other readers as a. "must@ read.
Keep on writing entertaning chapters.
Please have a fabulous week day at school
Love ya...Melissa.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Terror2s
This was a very enjoyable read. I love that you keep your posts short, so they are manageable to review. The dialogue and the way it is delivered helps give a sense of the characters. T2
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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This was a very enjoyable read. I love that you keep your posts short, so they are manageable to review. The dialogue and the way it is delivered helps give a sense of the characters. T2
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
The story is getting better and better in each new chapter.
I like how you are developing a great relationship between Paige and Cash. I think the differences between the Southern and Yankees is something real funny. I remember when Jimmy Carte became President of USA the hilarious things I used to read about Southern...
GREAT JOB Barbara!! Please take care!
:)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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The story is getting better and better in each new chapter.
I like how you are developing a great relationship between Paige and Cash. I think the differences between the Southern and Yankees is something real funny. I remember when Jimmy Carte became President of USA the hilarious things I used to read about Southern...
GREAT JOB Barbara!! Please take care!
:)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Another romantic chapter that is starting to define a more intimate relationship between Paige and Cash.
Th following paragraph seems to define their growing closeness:"I'm beginning to think you and Mom are conspiring against me. "Cash grinned as he glanced up the seven cement steps to the church. "Let's do it." He took Paige's arm.
I'm lookin foreward to thier camping trip.
Love and Irish Hugs for another great chapter,
Roger
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
Another romantic chapter that is starting to define a more intimate relationship between Paige and Cash.
Th following paragraph seems to define their growing closeness:"I'm beginning to think you and Mom are conspiring against me. "Cash grinned as he glanced up the seven cement steps to the church. "Let's do it." He took Paige's arm.
I'm lookin foreward to thier camping trip.
Love and Irish Hugs for another great chapter,
Roger
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Hi Barbara for the chapter . I like the dialogue within it.you have written it well, and the imagery is excellent.
THANKS for sharing with me.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Hi Barbara for the chapter . I like the dialogue within it.you have written it well, and the imagery is excellent.
THANKS for sharing with me.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A great chapter. Church and fishing--quite a day. I can't believe that she wore that to church. I thought southern ladies were more reserved. Of course, she's a transplanted northerner, LOL. Have a great week! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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A great chapter. Church and fishing--quite a day. I can't believe that she wore that to church. I thought southern ladies were more reserved. Of course, she's a transplanted northerner, LOL. Have a great week! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. It's Paige's Northern roots that's going to continue casing problems.
Comment from BethShelby
Paige is fitting in nicely with these Southerners. There seems to be a lot of chemistry between her and Cash. She has a lot of spunk and sees up for anything. I like your characters.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Paige is fitting in nicely with these Southerners. There seems to be a lot of chemistry between her and Cash. She has a lot of spunk and sees up for anything. I like your characters.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh my, Barbara, I swear, this one is so wonderful, I am teary-eyed. (I don't know what's happened to me since I've gotten older, I've turned to mush!) "pea-pickin'" - I had forgotten that entirely, and I always LOVED that descriptive word. That's got to be the reason I am so moved by this chapter - every single thing about it is that charming. "You look mighty handsome all spruced up." "You're a real stinker. Would you cut it out?"
Barbara, I am so very honored to be in your company, seriously. No %$###$&%!! sixes. I love this site, though, because I've met fine people, exceptional writers, like you. Ten stars, if I had 'em - even better than the ghost chapter. (And it's fabulous!) Wonderful sentiment in this one. (my humble opinion)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Oh my, Barbara, I swear, this one is so wonderful, I am teary-eyed. (I don't know what's happened to me since I've gotten older, I've turned to mush!) "pea-pickin'" - I had forgotten that entirely, and I always LOVED that descriptive word. That's got to be the reason I am so moved by this chapter - every single thing about it is that charming. "You look mighty handsome all spruced up." "You're a real stinker. Would you cut it out?"
Barbara, I am so very honored to be in your company, seriously. No %$###$&%!! sixes. I love this site, though, because I've met fine people, exceptional writers, like you. Ten stars, if I had 'em - even better than the ghost chapter. (And it's fabulous!) Wonderful sentiment in this one. (my humble opinion)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from donaldww
Another good post, full of small talk and gentle ribbing, as Paige and Cash go to church together. Southern men don't run, and Cash isn't going anywhere. Good idea, as I find Paige to be very agreeable.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Another good post, full of small talk and gentle ribbing, as Paige and Cash go to church together. Southern men don't run, and Cash isn't going anywhere. Good idea, as I find Paige to be very agreeable.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
I really do like the way Cash and Paige tease each other. It shows how natural they feel in each other's company. Paige is obviously very girly, while Cash is a typical tough male. I think they match each other very well. I look forward to reading how their fishing trip goes :-)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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I really do like the way Cash and Paige tease each other. It shows how natural they feel in each other's company. Paige is obviously very girly, while Cash is a typical tough male. I think they match each other very well. I look forward to reading how their fishing trip goes :-)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
