Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Chapter 6, part 1"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
57 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Ooooh, Barb, you didn't tell us if he got the tingles when he touched the small of her back! Inquiring minds want to know.
Great banter between them. Maybe Mamma will like Paige, and then gang up on Chase with her matchmaking. ('-')
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Ooooh, Barb, you didn't tell us if he got the tingles when he touched the small of her back! Inquiring minds want to know.
Great banter between them. Maybe Mamma will like Paige, and then gang up on Chase with her matchmaking. ('-')
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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God Bless.
Comment from Sankey
Still going. I know, I have to go get lu9nch. Will see where this goes. I like good story tellers and you are one of em! Good work No Spags again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Still going. I know, I have to go get lu9nch. Will see where this goes. I like good story tellers and you are one of em! Good work No Spags again.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
You just have this so real. Out of yours and the other one I'm reading yours beats hers. Everything matches up to life itself. You have done a great job. I mean every word I'm saying. MJ
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
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You just have this so real. Out of yours and the other one I'm reading yours beats hers. Everything matches up to life itself. You have done a great job. I mean every word I'm saying. MJ
Comment Written 14-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued reading.
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You are more than welcome. MJ
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
This is another interesting and engaging chapter. With Cash taking Paige to church and then fishing is a good sign the two are getting emotionally closer. Each is unsure of the other, but the infatuation is there. The chapter is written well, and the sentences flow smoothly. The plot and the story so far have captured my attention. I can readily see why you are such a high-ranking novelist. It is an enjoyable read.
Godspeed,
Curtis
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Barbara,
This is another interesting and engaging chapter. With Cash taking Paige to church and then fishing is a good sign the two are getting emotionally closer. Each is unsure of the other, but the infatuation is there. The chapter is written well, and the sentences flow smoothly. The plot and the story so far have captured my attention. I can readily see why you are such a high-ranking novelist. It is an enjoyable read.
Godspeed,
Curtis
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from forestport12
Nice splash of descriptions sprinkled with a lively dialogue that rings true. I lived in Texas for twelve years and married a Texan. How a parent would feel if they avoided church and all the talk that goes with rings true. Another good installment Barbara. Stan
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Nice splash of descriptions sprinkled with a lively dialogue that rings true. I lived in Texas for twelve years and married a Texan. How a parent would feel if they avoided church and all the talk that goes with rings true. Another good installment Barbara. Stan
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
This chapter reflected the growing comfort between Paige and Cash, which has evolved over the course of the book. Nice natural dialogue and nicely "underwritten" (I mean that as a compliment). Nice job--Ted
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Dear Barbra,
This chapter reflected the growing comfort between Paige and Cash, which has evolved over the course of the book. Nice natural dialogue and nicely "underwritten" (I mean that as a compliment). Nice job--Ted
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from mtrybak
Very nicely done! You have a knack for developing your characters so that they are actually likable, normal people. And the line:"You ran down those," he glanced toward the stairs, "wearing those? You could've broken your neck.",
shows you are an advanced writer because that is not how someone else just starting out would do it. I say go ahead and make longer posts. It will save you money and reading your posts are enjoyable. - Michele
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Very nicely done! You have a knack for developing your characters so that they are actually likable, normal people. And the line:"You ran down those," he glanced toward the stairs, "wearing those? You could've broken your neck.",
shows you are an advanced writer because that is not how someone else just starting out would do it. I say go ahead and make longer posts. It will save you money and reading your posts are enjoyable. - Michele
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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I know it would save money to post longer and during winter and summer breaks I do, unfortunately my writing doesn't pay any bills so I must work. I teach first grade and it takes all my time, I write whenever I can find a few minutes. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from poetrypeg
I liked this, what I liked most was the second voice. I can understand why this received recognition. It is very deserved.
A very good write.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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I liked this, what I liked most was the second voice. I can understand why this received recognition. It is very deserved.
A very good write.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from doris1022
Enjoyable and flows like honey on a warm bisquit. keep the fun coming and I will have to follow the story all along the way. just as a joke--cool photo artwork! kudos and way to roll the ink ball onto creative paper. keep it up like a viagara mishap. lol ok sorry it is a fine read.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Enjoyable and flows like honey on a warm bisquit. keep the fun coming and I will have to follow the story all along the way. just as a joke--cool photo artwork! kudos and way to roll the ink ball onto creative paper. keep it up like a viagara mishap. lol ok sorry it is a fine read.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MumEsGirl
Apologies for missing out a few posts. This is short and has a good pace to it. I love the entire southern feel that runs through this story. I think they were rich in superstition.
Good one my friend
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Apologies for missing out a few posts. This is short and has a good pace to it. I love the entire southern feel that runs through this story. I think they were rich in superstition.
Good one my friend
hugs
kate
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
