Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Morning Mist"Photograph Inspired Poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your vivid description of the scene you photographed and your use of alliteration. I hope this short poem was well received in the contest. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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I admired your vivid description of the scene you photographed and your use of alliteration. I hope this short poem was well received in the contest. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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Thank you Joan
Comment from Galactia
Day emerges through Morning Mists,
Revealing shoreline's Turns and Twists.
lovely little short verse.
L in the contest
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Day emerges through Morning Mists,
Revealing shoreline's Turns and Twists.
lovely little short verse.
L in the contest
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Thanks
Comment from Dan Diego
There's trouble behind and trouble ahead in this contest entry. The strong verb is "emerge" and that is exactly how I feel on those foggy mornings, like the day is struggling to get through the mist. Then you wrap this up by remininding the reader that once the mist clears, the day may be complex and tricky.
Or this could be a simple stolen moment on a beach with a creative poet and a pen and paper.
The art works well with your color scheme and the words are relevant.
This is great!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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There's trouble behind and trouble ahead in this contest entry. The strong verb is "emerge" and that is exactly how I feel on those foggy mornings, like the day is struggling to get through the mist. Then you wrap this up by remininding the reader that once the mist clears, the day may be complex and tricky.
Or this could be a simple stolen moment on a beach with a creative poet and a pen and paper.
The art works well with your color scheme and the words are relevant.
This is great!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the wonderful review Dan, you got to the heart of clear as a sunny day! Hope I can count on a vote.
Comment from MAMONIA
Very lovely short poem with lots of descriptions
and alliterations. I liked the soft rhyme and flow
also.
Great entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Very lovely short poem with lots of descriptions
and alliterations. I liked the soft rhyme and flow
also.
Great entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much ammonia
Comment from Angels27
Beautiful contest entry. Very true, every new day heralds its own twists and turns and we never know what is in store for us. Lovely read and beautiful photograph.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Beautiful contest entry. Very true, every new day heralds its own twists and turns and we never know what is in store for us. Lovely read and beautiful photograph.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thank you Angels27
Comment from Eric Corsten
First of all I must say the picture was great for this poem like one was made for the other..and second ..great poem.. two lines saying so much
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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First of all I must say the picture was great for this poem like one was made for the other..and second ..great poem.. two lines saying so much
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thank you. Actually the picture inspired the poem. So glad you picked that up.
