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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi Barb,

This was a lot of fun. I like the way Paige talked to the ghost and told them in so many words to settle down.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax



 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
    How are you keeping my two stories straight. I would get them messed up. Thank you.
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 20-Jul-2014
    LOL... I'm an equal opportunity reader! ('-')
Comment from Sankey
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Gets creepier by the3 minute. I wonder if things can be moved around with "Wi-Fi?" HEHE!! Good story. Still engrossed in it all have to go get lunch soon. No SPAGS!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
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I am enjoying your story. Gee what could be causing things to move and the other things that is happening. I can't explain this but I sure know Paige is brave. Good thing I'm not there I would scare her to death. Great! Work. MJ

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
    You are sooooo sweet to be doing this.
reply by justmarly on 15-Jun-2013
    I enjoy your story and hope to get it all read before I have to move. I am packed to tight. It will be nice to be on my own. Keep up your good work. MJ
Comment from CALLAHANMR
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Hi Barbara:)
I was a little slow getting to this chapter. I've been concentrating on some technical writing.

I notice that Cash just can't make connections with Paige when it come to even the slight intimacy of a neck rub. He seems to pay more attention to the game until the unexpected clash.

Now Cash looked for any possible explanation other than supernatural. After all, there's no such things as ghosts in his world. Still Paige persisted in her belief that her aunts antebellum mansion must have at least one ghost.

After the silly bet about ghosts, I expect Cash to have red toenails when they go camping.

Great dialog among friends.

Love an Irish Hugs,

Roger

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review. Hugs
Comment from elliejean
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I love the story. They came to the conclusion of a ghost pretty quickly. At least they are trying to communicate with it. I love the old houses. They just have to have a ghost. I like the friendship. Great work.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from fairy77
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The relationship is lovely.The suspense from the ghost scares and the humour in it.I liked the dialogue and the funny phrases.Stubborn as a mule.Nice piece!beth fairy77.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from abbasjoy
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I love this chapter and the detail with which you have described the presence of this ghost. Still, Cash refuses to believe. Well I'm not sure what it will take to convince him. Perhaps a bop over the head!
Paige is sure calm especially as she'll be alone in the house at nights. I can tell you, I'd be high tailing it out of there just about now.
Great chapter.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
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This is a nice chapter , easy to read and understand.
The adventures of the ghost or ghosts were well narrated to excite the reader. I enjoyed reading the thrilling story. kudos

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allezw2
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Lady BW,

I'd read your posts for the minimum, though your remuneraion does add to the kitty.

Your poltergeist must have an eye for the ladies, as the action takes place when the guys are out of the room.

Interesting to see how this develops with the manifestations. At least glass tumblers can be open stock, though the presence seems aware of the varied values of the objects disturbed.

Nicely done, crafted carefully as usual. As expected of a schoolmarm.

Fantasist

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the kind words.
reply by Allezw2 on 22-Nov-2012
    You're quite welcome.
Comment from misscookie
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As always I found your chaopter full of myestery
and that is what makes your stories so interesting to read.
There was not one dull moment
and I thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by misscookie on 21-Nov-2012
    My pleasure. Take care.