Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Chapter 5, part 5"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I really enjoyed this chapter (well I enjoy all of them!) I love your characters and the conversation between them seems so normal when friends get together. You must have searched forever to find the pizza eating ghost! Well done. This time I can give you a six all your chapters deserve!...blessings, chey
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I really enjoyed this chapter (well I enjoy all of them!) I love your characters and the conversation between them seems so normal when friends get together. You must have searched forever to find the pizza eating ghost! Well done. This time I can give you a six all your chapters deserve!...blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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That you for the kind review.
Comment from Littlegirl38732
I just absolutely adore everything about this story..as soon as its available to be bought let me know! I love the southern setting (I was born and raised in Mississippi so of course!) And I love the dialogue. Such engaging conversation! And I absolutely love that paige is from Massachusetts! I have ALWAYS wanted to go!! I have only heard my dad.speak of the times he went through mass and Connecticut and Maine
... I want to visit all of those states! Thank.you so much for.sharing
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I just absolutely adore everything about this story..as soon as its available to be bought let me know! I love the southern setting (I was born and raised in Mississippi so of course!) And I love the dialogue. Such engaging conversation! And I absolutely love that paige is from Massachusetts! I have ALWAYS wanted to go!! I have only heard my dad.speak of the times he went through mass and Connecticut and Maine
... I want to visit all of those states! Thank.you so much for.sharing
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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That you for the kind review.
Comment from michael Walker
This is the first chapter of this book I have read. I like the way it brings out the characteristics of each person.It would be easy to fit into this story as a character. I can picture myself being a part of this scene.Looking forward to the rest. Thanks
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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This is the first chapter of this book I have read. I like the way it brings out the characteristics of each person.It would be easy to fit into this story as a character. I can picture myself being a part of this scene.Looking forward to the rest. Thanks
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for he kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from santapola
Hello there, I have reviewed an earlier chapter of your novel and like the previous chapter I read it is well written, I must read more though because I am a bit lost on the story x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Hello there, I have reviewed an earlier chapter of your novel and like the previous chapter I read it is well written, I must read more though because I am a bit lost on the story x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
You got the marriage routine down pat. This is a set up chapter. Cash wearing sparkling fingernail polish is guarateed so good ole boy's comment will get him a knuckle sanwich, not pizza. I like your image, also. You earned your sixer.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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You got the marriage routine down pat. This is a set up chapter. Cash wearing sparkling fingernail polish is guarateed so good ole boy's comment will get him a knuckle sanwich, not pizza. I like your image, also. You earned your sixer.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and your continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from judiverse
You have a lot going on in this, and I like it!. The sound of a ghost is dismissed as a tree branch being blown against the house. Paige is ready to bet there's at least one ghost in the house. Paige and her friends are all getting along well. She does seem to make a great effort to prove she isn't just a wealthy Bostonian. I loved the humorous touch about the camping. Great find in the artwork with the ghost eating pizza. Clever touch! judi
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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You have a lot going on in this, and I like it!. The sound of a ghost is dismissed as a tree branch being blown against the house. Paige is ready to bet there's at least one ghost in the house. Paige and her friends are all getting along well. She does seem to make a great effort to prove she isn't just a wealthy Bostonian. I loved the humorous touch about the camping. Great find in the artwork with the ghost eating pizza. Clever touch! judi
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. This is moving along beautifully. judi
Comment from Angels27
Very neat paced article. The readers attention is held right from the start. The dialogues are extremely natural and a lovely humoros vein runs throughout.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Very neat paced article. The readers attention is held right from the start. The dialogues are extremely natural and a lovely humoros vein runs throughout.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
I can feel the tension as she insists Cash is too eager to blame every possibly supernatural incident on the wind :-)
Love the humor in the no gays comment LOL
Good natural-sounding dialogue among friends - it all sounds like teasing in good fun
good pacing as you lead up their developing relationship :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I can feel the tension as she insists Cash is too eager to blame every possibly supernatural incident on the wind :-)
Love the humor in the no gays comment LOL
Good natural-sounding dialogue among friends - it all sounds like teasing in good fun
good pacing as you lead up their developing relationship :-) Brooke
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.
