Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Barb,

This was a fun chapter of bantering. The little bit of teasing between Cash and Paige was nice too.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you, you brighten my day.

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Don't worry about all the explanations you are doing fine. I love it. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see Cash and Paige get a bit closer. No Spagsa again.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013

Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.

Comment from justmarly

Excellent

If I could write and have no mistakes I'd feel proud. This is good. I know Cash wants Paige. If he has dark hair and blue eyes I would as well. LOL Great! writing. MJ

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013

Thank you again, for your wonderful support.

reply by justmarly on 14-Jun-2013

You are more than welcome. MJ

Comment from NaughtieScribe

Excellent

Ooo sookie, now that ending was an eyebrow raiser. I vote that they go camping after Paige paints his nails a very discreet pink. lol.

I really do love the way you are developing your characters. They seem so real, and identifiable. Well done.

Okay enough playing hooky for me. Unitl next time.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Papabearua

Excellent

Cash and Paige have a "thing" for each other that must have started in an earlier post. With the twists available in your writing I might have Cash get ready for a manicure. Enjoyed your story, good luck with the rest of it.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

Good Afternoon, Barbara

It's been too long since I've ventured on the prose
side of the site, and more specifically to your chapters.

I enjoyed this chapter. Your use of vernacular gives
the reader a strong sense of authenticity about the characters
as well as the circumstances in which they're dealing. You've
woven in good bits of humor and have provided an appropriate
mix of narrative and dialogue.

Well done,
Ray

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.

Comment from justatuna

Excellent

Again, I'm not someone you should listen to. Just learning. I will say that I truly enjoy your writing. Somehow, you pull the reader into your words. Perhaps it's the dialogue or imagery. You did a great job here.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Hi Barbara,
Sorry that I've been away, but real life has a way of intruding into my virtual one:) Great character development and naturalistic dialogue. Hope they find their ghost:) Nice write--Ted

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hello there Barbara
I used to own the Pizza Huts of Utah. I would have crapped my pants if ever I saw a ghost eating pizza. Clever story this time and a superb chapter
Bear

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

barbara:

I would think it would take longer to find a picture of
a ghost eating pizza than it did for you to come up with
this particular post. Meanwhile, I'm trying to imagine
Cash with nails painted in some type neon mixture when
he loses his bet.

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you for the kind review. I am wondering which would be funniest, Cash with painted fingernails or Paige camping.