Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Chapter 5, part 4"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige and mary pat don't want their time to end so they get cash and mary's husband to come over for dinner and football. then the thump in the upstairs....
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige and mary pat don't want their time to end so they get cash and mary's husband to come over for dinner and football. then the thump in the upstairs....
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mtrybak
Love it, love it, love it. But then you knew that. Afew Typo's:
Cahs walked in and out of each downstairs room (Cash, 1st word)
"I swear sports rules those two's life." (Should it be lives?)
I don't want to hang it up. I'll it set on the table, (Did you mean I'll set it on the table?)
It's probable solid walnut (Is that how you wanted it?)
I hope you don't mind me showing you the typo's. I love what you write, want to see the manuscript sold. I'm just trying to help, not hurt your frrlings!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Love it, love it, love it. But then you knew that. Afew Typo's:
Cahs walked in and out of each downstairs room (Cash, 1st word)
"I swear sports rules those two's life." (Should it be lives?)
I don't want to hang it up. I'll it set on the table, (Did you mean I'll set it on the table?)
It's probable solid walnut (Is that how you wanted it?)
I hope you don't mind me showing you the typo's. I love what you write, want to see the manuscript sold. I'm just trying to help, not hurt your frrlings!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the catches. I read over it a million times and didn't catch them. Thank you again.
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We never do catch them because we know what were saying and as long the letters look somewhat right, our eyes just skip over them.
Comment from Gungalo
Wel now, girls night has turned into a mixed pleasure. Soon the widescreen will be set up and Billy Joe will be there. I wonder if this is going to be a night of hauntings.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Wel now, girls night has turned into a mixed pleasure. Soon the widescreen will be set up and Billy Joe will be there. I wonder if this is going to be a night of hauntings.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Smile.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like Paige is going to get her first taste of a redneck's date. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Errors
"Billy Joe'll want his (,) too.
Cahs walked in (Cash)
I'll it set on the table (set it)
It's probable (probally) solid walnut."
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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It looks like Paige is going to get her first taste of a redneck's date. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Errors
"Billy Joe'll want his (,) too.
Cahs walked in (Cash)
I'll it set on the table (set it)
It's probable (probally) solid walnut."
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the catches. I have already made the changes./
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sasha
What I would give for a big flat screen TV...lol I think mine is 21 inches and not a flat screen. Great chapter full of fun banter between characters. I am enjoying this very much. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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What I would give for a big flat screen TV...lol I think mine is 21 inches and not a flat screen. Great chapter full of fun banter between characters. I am enjoying this very much. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
