Savannah Love
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
A strong post Barbara for the continuation of this story.
Still flowing well and keeping me engaged in the read from beginning to end.
Well defined imagery and character dialogue, makes for a smooth read. No issues my end, great reading.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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A strong post Barbara for the continuation of this story.
Still flowing well and keeping me engaged in the read from beginning to end.
Well defined imagery and character dialogue, makes for a smooth read. No issues my end, great reading.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A GOOD CHAPTER BARBARA WITH IMAGERY AND NEEDS NO CHANGES TO IT. I ENJOYED READING IT AND THE STORY HELD MY INTRESTT THANKS FORSHARING WIT HME. mARY
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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A GOOD CHAPTER BARBARA WITH IMAGERY AND NEEDS NO CHANGES TO IT. I ENJOYED READING IT AND THE STORY HELD MY INTRESTT THANKS FORSHARING WIT HME. mARY
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Sounds like things are progressing nicely. I had not realized that when refurbishing a home that you want to be ranked historically, you had to be careful not to change the house too dramatically. After thinking about it I realize now that it makes perfect sense. Nice attention to detail there. Very good.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Sounds like things are progressing nicely. I had not realized that when refurbishing a home that you want to be ranked historically, you had to be careful not to change the house too dramatically. After thinking about it I realize now that it makes perfect sense. Nice attention to detail there. Very good.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nora arjuna
hi barb, nice to catch up on your joyous companies having some good time. nothing to pick at here. well-written. can't wait for the sparks to happen. :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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hi barb, nice to catch up on your joyous companies having some good time. nothing to pick at here. well-written. can't wait for the sparks to happen. :)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I am anxiously waiting for your next post.
Comment from bookishfabler
Hey there. I'm truly sorry I haven't reviewed many chapters. I haven't bveen on FanStory for some time. I try once in a while to pop in and see how weveryone is doing.I miss writing too, but can't find time. I didn't see any nits or spags and the story flowed very well. Nice job. miss you
Heidi
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Hey there. I'm truly sorry I haven't reviewed many chapters. I haven't bveen on FanStory for some time. I try once in a while to pop in and see how weveryone is doing.I miss writing too, but can't find time. I didn't see any nits or spags and the story flowed very well. Nice job. miss you
Heidi
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your kind review. I am missing your posts. I understand being busy.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
HI Barbara|)
This is another great chapter as Paige continues to get better acquainted with her new friends and her aunt's antebellum house. As usual I have a few comments:
1. Paige watched Cash carry the box and lean it against the dining room table. His muscles [bulge ==> bulged. {A typo?}
2. It seems to me that the cable service will likely need to be turned back on before the TV will get any reception.. I think Cash will realize the need for a a digital antenna to use for local channels until the cable is activated.
Is Paige's ghost coming to the party? That might liven up the evening.
Love and Irish Hugs for another good chapter,
Roger
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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HI Barbara|)
This is another great chapter as Paige continues to get better acquainted with her new friends and her aunt's antebellum house. As usual I have a few comments:
1. Paige watched Cash carry the box and lean it against the dining room table. His muscles [bulge ==> bulged. {A typo?}
2. It seems to me that the cable service will likely need to be turned back on before the TV will get any reception.. I think Cash will realize the need for a a digital antenna to use for local channels until the cable is activated.
Is Paige's ghost coming to the party? That might liven up the evening.
Love and Irish Hugs for another good chapter,
Roger
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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It took me awhile to make the corrections. I am not sure why. I think it's because it's a busy time of year, plus I had a granddaughter born a little over a week ago. Thank you.
Comment from donaldww
Excellent. I thought the chapter flowed well from start to finish, and didn't see any SPAG. With all the noises and hints that have been happening for the past few instalments, I'm expecting something to happen any time now.
I know this is probably intentional, but thought I'd point it out anyway. It sounds awkward to me, but may be a way of speaking I'm not used to.
Mary Pat sighed. "I swear sports rules those two's lives."
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Excellent. I thought the chapter flowed well from start to finish, and didn't see any SPAG. With all the noises and hints that have been happening for the past few instalments, I'm expecting something to happen any time now.
I know this is probably intentional, but thought I'd point it out anyway. It sounds awkward to me, but may be a way of speaking I'm not used to.
Mary Pat sighed. "I swear sports rules those two's lives."
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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I will double check that sentence. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Barbara this is another excellent write here and now the plot thickens' Well done with this splendid work It was indeed a pleasure to read and review.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Barbara this is another excellent write here and now the plot thickens' Well done with this splendid work It was indeed a pleasure to read and review.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
Very nice job on this part of the book. Spellbinding as you probably realize. I love the ghost aspect of the story with the hit at romance. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Very nice job on this part of the book. Spellbinding as you probably realize. I love the ghost aspect of the story with the hit at romance. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
I always enjoy your writing short long it all comes together. I like the characters great storyline. thanks for sharing. Well said. Deorre
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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I always enjoy your writing short long it all comes together. I like the characters great storyline. thanks for sharing. Well said. Deorre
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
