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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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barbara:

Seems like the ghost is about to make its presence
known since it is making itself noticeable when
there are multiple people present. Maybe its just
been waiting for the wide-screen tv to make its
formal appearance.

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review,
Comment from Debbie7
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Wow> I fell behind and I had to catch up three chapters, but no problem. So obviously I'm enjoying it and it's still holding my interest. Can't wait to see who's in the house and of course waiting for Paige and Cash to get together. Namaste, Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there Barbara
This just keeps getting better and better. I am curious about the thump. Thumps don't usually go with bunnies
Bear

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review. Nope, thumps go with other things.
Comment from Readywriter52
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Paige has invited Cash for an evening of sports and pizza. All they have to do is set up the television. That's when they heard a thump. I wonder whose in the house besides them.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cornelius2000
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It's a fun story, with attractive, likable characters, whose dialogue comes across as very natural. It's a hoot that the ballgame is more important to these guys than than the girls are.
By the way, those huge TV's come with a manual that's about fifty pages of how to set it up. Unless one has done it before, or is an electrical engineer, it's a pain.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
    And I am sure the manual is written in a foreign language. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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I like all your characters. The ghost is starting to himself/herself known. Paige doesn't sound like someone who would be easily spooked. I think she might think a ghost would make the place more interesting. Unexplained sounds would be enough to frighten me away.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Barb
Sorry I'm late
Just let me say this you indeed, are making your story more interesting so far with this chapter which to m makes me more curious of what you will be writing next.
Bravo

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for your kind review. I always look forward to hearing from you.
Comment from Eric Corsten
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Very nice your depiction of the characters was great I could easily visualizes them. And the word flow effortlessly around them..nice work

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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I'm a little behind on my reading due to traveling but I'm home and can fully enjoy the story again. You did a great job as always.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    I hope you had a good time traveling. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
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Take your time Barbara, you're the one to know the best way to read this fascinating story, and this is an art as well. I love this chapter of moving and decorated the mansion. Thanks for the photo, it helps our imagination.
GREAT JOB!!
:)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.